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 SouthernScorpion
12:30:20 Scorpion
I have a battle up if anyone wants a go
 Lemon Shark
12:30:20 UrNewStepDad,Yello
im slowly realizing in class i did this design assignment so wrong, i am so screwed bronachos
 Feiella
12:29:51 Pack of Sharp Snap
So glad I don't go to school anymore
 BuggyOs
12:29:46 Lucky Ladybug
bugboy
yeah truly
 Doodle Dragon
12:29:46 He/They pronouns
Buggy,
Hmm, south-ish River believes? It's not really just the school, it's the whole district :p

Also, here's what River means
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Vax,
Please ToT
 OCCULTIST
12:29:15 manlover bugboy
A school blocking the word "pronouns" is so concerning lmaoo 😭 literal basic english
 Vax
12:29:09 a rock in your shoe
bye chat
 BuggyOs
12:28:45 Lucky Ladybug
Lemon
that would be a dream
 Vax
12:28:25 a rock in your shoe
doodle
PFFT-
 love story
12:28:14 
are you done yes
 Vax
12:28:06 a rock in your shoe
doodle
may i punch the head of school
 BuggyOs
12:28:02 Lucky Ladybug
River
ah okay lol, man that sucks. Where do you go to school that it's that conservative? the south or midwest xD
 Doodle Dragon
12:27:35 He/They pronouns
Also, River's school thinks Bugger is a bad word so River's laptop is sensoring it ToT
 Lemon Shark
12:27:25 UrNewStepDad,Yello
Buggy
college would be great if there were no classes and also no costs
 Doodle Dragon
12:26:57 He/They pronouns
Buggy,
River doesn't care what you call me :3 River uses River & Doodle (also context to why River is talking like this: River's school blocked the word "pronouns" so anytime pronouns is searched up that word gets blocked, so River isn't using pronouns :3)
 BuggyOs
12:26:19 Lucky Ladybug
Vax
ah, okay bye!
 love story
12:26:07 
are you done yet
 Vax
12:26:07 a rock in your shoe
bugger
i need to do that next week
 BuggyOs
12:26:00 Lucky Ladybug
Lemon
eh I rank it a 3, but still don't recommend
 Vax
12:25:49 a rock in your shoe
i've gotta go.
i'll see y'all later chat.
i don't feel like talking much after what happened earlier

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 SouthernScorpion
12:30:20 Scorpion
I have a battle up if anyone wants a go
 Lemon Shark
12:30:20 UrNewStepDad,Yello
im slowly realizing in class i did this design assignment so wrong, i am so screwed bronachos
 Feiella
12:29:51 Pack of Sharp Snap
So glad I don't go to school anymore
 BuggyOs
12:29:46 Lucky Ladybug
bugboy
yeah truly
 Doodle Dragon
12:29:46 He/They pronouns
Buggy,
Hmm, south-ish River believes? It's not really just the school, it's the whole district :p

Also, here's what River means
-Click-

Vax,
Please ToT
 OCCULTIST
12:29:15 manlover bugboy
A school blocking the word "pronouns" is so concerning lmaoo 😭 literal basic english
 Vax
12:29:09 a rock in your shoe
bye chat
 BuggyOs
12:28:45 Lucky Ladybug
Lemon
that would be a dream
 Vax
12:28:25 a rock in your shoe
doodle
PFFT-
 love story
12:28:14 
are you done yes
 Vax
12:28:06 a rock in your shoe
doodle
may i punch the head of school
 BuggyOs
12:28:02 Lucky Ladybug
River
ah okay lol, man that sucks. Where do you go to school that it's that conservative? the south or midwest xD
 Doodle Dragon
12:27:35 He/They pronouns
Also, River's school thinks Bugger is a bad word so River's laptop is sensoring it ToT
 Lemon Shark
12:27:25 UrNewStepDad,Yello
Buggy
college would be great if there were no classes and also no costs
 Doodle Dragon
12:26:57 He/They pronouns
Buggy,
River doesn't care what you call me :3 River uses River & Doodle (also context to why River is talking like this: River's school blocked the word "pronouns" so anytime pronouns is searched up that word gets blocked, so River isn't using pronouns :3)
 BuggyOs
12:26:19 Lucky Ladybug
Vax
ah, okay bye!
 love story
12:26:07 
are you done yet
 Vax
12:26:07 a rock in your shoe
bugger
i need to do that next week
 BuggyOs
12:26:00 Lucky Ladybug
Lemon
eh I rank it a 3, but still don't recommend
 Vax
12:25:49 a rock in your shoe
i've gotta go.
i'll see y'all later chat.
i don't feel like talking much after what happened earlier




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Critique me!May 15, 2022 07:29 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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I have no clue what I'm doing. Gallery Link

A few hours ago I was bored and decided to become an artist with no previous experience. With that being said this is my attempt to draw an OC of mine and I would like feedback. The anatomy seems a bit funky, he is supposed to be a wolf. I also colored him. For those of you that want to, you can go over and red line stuff so I can see what to fix! If you have tips on blending and colors that would be appreciated as well. I draw using Adobe Fresco, but if there are other good apps to use, let me know.

I'll link minor stuff and put the images for more important stuff so this isn't too long. Thanks :)

OC for reference(yes the oc is mine)

All image credit from here down belongs to me.

First red line

IMG-1638.jpg

First red line and outline

Altered final outline (I have no idea how I changed it this much)

IMG-1637.jpg

Colored final product

IMG-1636.jpg

Colored final product with OG lines behind it (for comparison, also I forgot to screenshot the red line that's under it. That one is in fact the original, the first red line linked at the top is the second red line I did in order to fix this. If that makes sense.)


Edited at May 17, 2022 07:49 PM by Ciao
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:21 PM


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hello! very cute character youve got there!!

ive been drawing canines/wolves in particular for going on 6(ish) years now id say, and ive learned a lot about drawing them over the years, so im here to offer a few tips (as well as some blue lines for future reference)!

so canine anatomy is very hard to explain, but the way i improved is by studying the canine body by tracing over actual photos of wolves i found online. ive found simplifying their bodies and more specifically their limbs into simple shapes and refinining from there helps a ton for anatomy improvement!

ive bluelined over your image and focused on a few different things, and ill list the links to view them below!

these are just a few quick base sketches i whipped up within like 5 minutes so theyre not perfect, but i hope theyre able to help a bit!

you have a lot of potential and im so excited to see your improvement!! if you need anything at all dont be scared to reach out to me and ill try my best to help! :)


Edited at May 15, 2022 08:26 PM by jaune
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:53 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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Thank you for the help! I can definitely see how I can improve the design more, and the blue line especially helped. For the anatomy I think tracing a real wolf would really help as well. I appreciate your critique and i'll definitely reach out if I have more questions :)
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:07 PM


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Ah- I might be of assistance here. Anatomy is quite off, /lighthearted
If I forget to add the redlines pm me I get busy lol
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:48 PM


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Thanks, i'll pm you^^

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