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02:24:36

I've done multiple date none work

Xanthia

02:21:41 Vash | Xy

I need to learn how to drink water eww but my head hurts >.<

02:16:16 Caesar

what end date are you choosing? <.<

02:13:23

how do you make a raffle its not working iv been trying for weeks but know matter what I do I it just say bad finish date

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Well done! You’ve achieved mastery and unlocked a special Award: Irish Royalty

almost 200 shamrocks earned today, grind well worth it *^*

SouthernScorpion

02:02:46 Scorpion

Sure, send me a message and i will send the makers info, it's a custom Big Snoof

Vax

02:02:05 a rock in your shoe

scorpion
can you pm me thee link to where you got the muzzle?
i've got a rowdy pup who likes to nibble other dogs, I want to keep her safe

Vax

02:00:17 a rock in your shoe

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The raffle has been created.

i have no issues with making one. are you sure you havent been choosing march dates? considering the month is ending in few hours lol

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02:24:36

I've done multiple date none work

Xanthia

02:21:41 Vash | Xy

I need to learn how to drink water eww but my head hurts >.<

02:16:16 Caesar

what end date are you choosing? <.<

02:13:23

how do you make a raffle its not working iv been trying for weeks but know matter what I do I it just say bad finish date

02:11:05 Caesar

02:07:37 Caesar

Well done! You’ve achieved mastery and unlocked a special Award: Irish Royalty

almost 200 shamrocks earned today, grind well worth it *^*

SouthernScorpion

02:02:46 Scorpion

Sure, send me a message and i will send the makers info, it's a custom Big Snoof

Vax

02:02:05 a rock in your shoe

scorpion
can you pm me thee link to where you got the muzzle?
i've got a rowdy pup who likes to nibble other dogs, I want to keep her safe

Vax

02:00:17 a rock in your shoe

owl
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February 24, 2022 12:41 PM

Kortez

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My art has been looking awful lately. I have drawn this character 3 times now, and each attempt looks worse than the last. I need constructive crit, I don't care how brutal you are about it, I won't be hurt.

Feel free to redline!

Attempt 1

Attempt 2

Attempt 3

All (c) 243831/ Me

I have figured it out uwuwu thank you

Edited at March 18, 2022 05:32 PM by Excisus

February 24, 2022 02:48 PM

Former Pack

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ok so the last attempt looks great!

the head on this first one is good, but what are you trying to do on the body?

the second one looks good but the head is a bit big if its what you want then it looks good also

Edited at February 24, 2022 02:49 PM by LucifersWolves

February 24, 2022 02:51 PM

Nezachii

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If you are alright with redlining and some tips (With the redline) I'll be up to help you? If not, that's fine. It's your artwork.

February 24, 2022 02:52 PM

Kortez

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Please do

Nez.ity said:

If you are alright with redlining and some tips (With the redline) I'll be up to help you? If not, that's fine. It's your artwork.

February 24, 2022 04:53 PM

Nezachii

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Doing attempt one because everything else looks lovely *^*. I do not draw canine, anymore--yes I used to dabble back in the //first joined// ages but hopefully, you can just y'know understand that ;). While I love how you decided to do three different ones, I feel like attempt one could have some touch to it-- in case you're feeling nice and give the commissioner something to stare at; not that you know have to. ANYWAYS!

You have that edgy style, where the fur sticks out the most- as I always say go big or go home-- your attempt one could be the " GO BIG" style;o. I love the side tongue and tight collar idea, so I decided to mimic( With your permission) the style and just went crazy with the fur( Pencil work can be MUCH easier when drawing fur, you should take advantage of this punk style because it's there for YOU to improve and grow, even if you are a chibi artist( Only seen your cheebs art).

In short terms, the eye details are the show and tell, usually, when I look at canine art my eyes land on the eyes, it's the first thing I want to see- the expression, the glare, the look. I know your look is more cartoonish which I can't do but hopefully, it's still helpful.

You can do whatever with this, I only did half the job because I got uncomfortable lol.

I'll slowly add more to this so I don't spam you because again, I'm no canine artist.

Redline: (c)Nezitystudio