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01:07:28 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Xy
True dat

01:06:05 Vash | Xy

Rat
Haha yeah u feel you I only slept at like 3😂the night is better but I have places to be

Moon
Ooooo

12:58:45 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Xy
Ewww that’s to early (night owl over here)

Moonfall
I see lol yeah time zone is such a weird thing

12:53:19 Many moons, one me

Am*

12:52:56 Many moons, one me

Rat
Ah, well that's depressing. Fair though cause I was gonna soup them anyway if nobody took them
Xanth, Rat
It's 1:52 for me... Joy of timezones at work

12:50:24 Vash | Xy

Rat
Hehe it's 7:50am for me🤭

12:49:56 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Moonfall
Then if they win the wolf it dies atomically because there is no space

12:48:57 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Xy
Morning? Bruh it’s 11:49 pm here/silly ish

12:48:12 Many moons, one me

Random ish question. What happens if someone bids on your wolves in auction, but they have no den space?

12:40:07 Vash | Xy

Morning

12:29:01 Scorpion

I got this, and a golden WOW claw award???

12:28:47 Scorpion

Congrats! You are the second place Hunter League winner of Wolves of Warfare and have won 5 apples and 250 mushrooms

12:04:27 Caesar

So.many missed bones im gonna cry

12:03:11 Caesar

Fuck, i fell asleep before i was dome mass breeding >.<

12:01:02 Cryptic | Crypt

She did not hold out. Ouch.

12:00:52 Will

*jinxed

12:00:43 Will

I think you mixed it 😭

11:59:43 Cryptic | Crypt

Wrong wolf, that's her daughter
-WP Click-

11:59:12 Cryptic | Crypt

-WP Click-
Literally need her to hold out for like 3 more minutes. I bred earlier than I meant to.

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Good job Scorpion

01:07:28 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Xy
True dat

01:06:05 Vash | Xy

Rat
Haha yeah u feel you I only slept at like 3😂the night is better but I have places to be

Moon
Ooooo

12:58:45 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Xy
Ewww that’s to early (night owl over here)

Moonfall
I see lol yeah time zone is such a weird thing

12:53:19 Many moons, one me

Am*

12:52:56 Many moons, one me

Rat
Ah, well that's depressing. Fair though cause I was gonna soup them anyway if nobody took them
Xanth, Rat
It's 1:52 for me... Joy of timezones at work

12:50:24 Vash | Xy

Rat
Hehe it's 7:50am for me🤭

12:49:56 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Moonfall
Then if they win the wolf it dies atomically because there is no space

12:48:57 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Xy
Morning? Bruh it’s 11:49 pm here/silly ish

12:48:12 Many moons, one me

Random ish question. What happens if someone bids on your wolves in auction, but they have no den space?

12:40:07 Vash | Xy

Morning

12:29:01 Scorpion

I got this, and a golden WOW claw award???

12:28:47 Scorpion

Congrats! You are the second place Hunter League winner of Wolves of Warfare and have won 5 apples and 250 mushrooms

12:04:27 Caesar

So.many missed bones im gonna cry

12:03:11 Caesar

Fuck, i fell asleep before i was dome mass breeding >.<

12:01:02 Cryptic | Crypt

She did not hold out. Ouch.

12:00:52 Will

*jinxed

12:00:43 Will

I think you mixed it 😭

11:59:43 Cryptic | Crypt

Wrong wolf, that's her daughter
-WP Click-

11:59:12 Cryptic | Crypt

-WP Click-
Literally need her to hold out for like 3 more minutes. I bred earlier than I meant to.

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM