Need some criticism
https://xxwolfdawgxx.deviantart.com/art/A-commission-720774114
I used sketch.io and DA.Muro (blending)
Summer Month: 2 
Night 
Clear Moon: 
| Chatbox |
| Shadow Frog |
| Acorn I live in the suburbs of a major city. I grew up in the country. On the same side of the bay I’m currently visiting. For three years I lived in this very house with my grandparents. I enjoyed wandering around the fields and the woods. Since I’m living in suburbia, I can’t wander like that anymore. |
| Acornclan |
| Froggy That's awesome :D Getting out to hear nature and be with family is awesome Sometimes the critters get a bit annoying but they're better than sirens and other towny noises xD (to me at least) I live in a semi-rural area, not a town but there's just a lot of people to say it's rural. |
| Shadow Frog |
| Acorn I’m at my grandparents house in the countryside, visiting. I live on the other side of the bay. Last week I heard green tree frogs calling. I could hear them through the window and over my tv, they were that loud. |
| Acornclan |
| Froggy They're awesome but then can be a pain lol Me and my mother were coming home and we drove past a pond. They were so loud. The reeds and trees blcomed the sound in certain spots so we didn't know the first time we heard them since it was very brief, but the second was longer lol. |
| Shadow Frog |
| I heard the spring peepers calling last night. They were rather loud and rowdy. |
| Acornclan |
| Frog Yeah, very glad we opened our pool already before be got more green (its pretty green right now) |
| Empress Midnight |
| Acorn Today’s not bad at all. Tomorrow and Thursday are supposed to be hot 🥵. |
| Acornclan |
| I like that it's not freezing thank you weather But maybe 10 degrees lower next time, please xD |
| Empress Midnight |
| The kicker: it’s the middle of April, almost the middle of spring. Thanks Climate Change, you’re a real pal |
| Empress Midnight |
| Tern I know right. I’m wearing a short-sleeve t-shirt and shorts |
| Greed |
| with bonsai trees and most other things they are a lot easier to grow with a grow light which is cheap off amazon. |
| Quests |
| Alliance Battles |
| Challenges |
 | Arctic Fox : -4 |
| Anaconda : +3 |
| Mountain Lion : +1 |
| Chatbox |
| Shadow Frog |
| Acorn I live in the suburbs of a major city. I grew up in the country. On the same side of the bay I’m currently visiting. For three years I lived in this very house with my grandparents. I enjoyed wandering around the fields and the woods. Since I’m living in suburbia, I can’t wander like that anymore. |
| Acornclan |
| Froggy That's awesome :D Getting out to hear nature and be with family is awesome Sometimes the critters get a bit annoying but they're better than sirens and other towny noises xD (to me at least) I live in a semi-rural area, not a town but there's just a lot of people to say it's rural. |
| Shadow Frog |
| Acorn I’m at my grandparents house in the countryside, visiting. I live on the other side of the bay. Last week I heard green tree frogs calling. I could hear them through the window and over my tv, they were that loud. |
| Acornclan |
| Froggy They're awesome but then can be a pain lol Me and my mother were coming home and we drove past a pond. They were so loud. The reeds and trees blcomed the sound in certain spots so we didn't know the first time we heard them since it was very brief, but the second was longer lol. |
| Shadow Frog |
| I heard the spring peepers calling last night. They were rather loud and rowdy. |
| Acornclan |
| Frog Yeah, very glad we opened our pool already before be got more green (its pretty green right now) |
| Empress Midnight |
| Acorn Today’s not bad at all. Tomorrow and Thursday are supposed to be hot 🥵. |
| Acornclan |
| I like that it's not freezing thank you weather But maybe 10 degrees lower next time, please xD |
| Empress Midnight |
| The kicker: it’s the middle of April, almost the middle of spring. Thanks Climate Change, you’re a real pal |
| Empress Midnight |
| Tern I know right. I’m wearing a short-sleeve t-shirt and shorts |
| Greed |
| with bonsai trees and most other things they are a lot easier to grow with a grow light which is cheap off amazon. |
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