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 Doodle Dragon
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I would have if I could ToT
 Doodle Dragon
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Love story,
Oh- i can't help with that :p
 love story
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coding
 Doodle Dragon
11:41:12 He/They pronouns
Love story,
What's the subject?
 love story
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no
 Doodle Dragon
11:40:36 He/They pronouns
Love story,
Are you almost done?
 love story
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Cinnamon Bloom
my teacher is strict
 love story
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no
 Cinnamon Bloom
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Love
ask you teacher if you can stop for a while
or ask if you can go to the bathroom?
 Doodle Dragon
11:39:42 He/They pronouns
Love Story,
Are you done wth the test?
 love story
11:38:16 
Doodle Dragon
we are doing a test

 Doodle Dragon
11:37:59 He/They pronouns
Slow breathing also, I saw someone said do box breathing, do that :P
 the sunset pack
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 Doodle Dragon
11:37:33 He/They pronouns
Love story,
Okay, what are you doing in class? If it's nothing too important I'd suggest turning off your device and laying your head down and breath. While breathing I'd also suggest to think about good things or count to 100 (or higher) slowly
 love story
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school
 Doodle Dragon
11:35:44 He/They pronouns
Love story,
Ah, okay, to be honest it is best to not be on a device while having a panic attack (at least in my opinion) where are you at right now? home or school? :p
 love story
11:34:29 
doodle Dragon
my chest is hurting and im having a panic attack
 love story
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Jester
the teachers are not going to do anything
 Doodle Dragon
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What is going on in chat?
 Doodle Dragon
11:32:38 He/They pronouns
Gear/Decor ideas? :p

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 Doodle Dragon
11:42:13 He/They pronouns
I would have if I could ToT
 Doodle Dragon
11:42:06 He/They pronouns
Love story,
Oh- i can't help with that :p
 love story
11:41:21 
coding
 Doodle Dragon
11:41:12 He/They pronouns
Love story,
What's the subject?
 love story
11:40:43 
no
 Doodle Dragon
11:40:36 He/They pronouns
Love story,
Are you almost done?
 love story
11:40:16 
Cinnamon Bloom
my teacher is strict
 love story
11:39:49 
no
 Cinnamon Bloom
11:39:42 Cinn / Ace
Love
ask you teacher if you can stop for a while
or ask if you can go to the bathroom?
 Doodle Dragon
11:39:42 He/They pronouns
Love Story,
Are you done wth the test?
 love story
11:38:16 
Doodle Dragon
we are doing a test

 Doodle Dragon
11:37:59 He/They pronouns
Slow breathing also, I saw someone said do box breathing, do that :P
 the sunset pack
11:37:34 
what is going on
 Doodle Dragon
11:37:33 He/They pronouns
Love story,
Okay, what are you doing in class? If it's nothing too important I'd suggest turning off your device and laying your head down and breath. While breathing I'd also suggest to think about good things or count to 100 (or higher) slowly
 love story
11:36:07 
school
 Doodle Dragon
11:35:44 He/They pronouns
Love story,
Ah, okay, to be honest it is best to not be on a device while having a panic attack (at least in my opinion) where are you at right now? home or school? :p
 love story
11:34:29 
doodle Dragon
my chest is hurting and im having a panic attack
 love story
11:33:55 
Jester
the teachers are not going to do anything
 Doodle Dragon
11:33:25 He/They pronouns
What is going on in chat?
 Doodle Dragon
11:32:38 He/They pronouns
Gear/Decor ideas? :p

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Critique?July 30, 2018 05:59 AM


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I was just messing around and I made this:
https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png
And this:
https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png
If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background
I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie
Critique?July 30, 2018 02:36 PM


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Horse
I can't see it
But the D ring for your bit is way too big
And the rest of the bridle is way to small
Critique?July 30, 2018 02:46 PM


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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.
https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or
https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png
(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:
Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:
https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.
There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°
Critique?July 30, 2018 03:58 PM


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Thanks Astro and Midnight!
The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black
I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.
I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD
Critique?July 30, 2018 06:33 PM


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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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