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Lurking shadows

10:26:07

OH MA GOWWDDD, she is a pretty lady

10:25:27

-WP Click-

OMG?!
I got a festus coat that has 81 rarity?!

Lurking shadows

10:24:22

Yayyyy, becaause i have the father wwho also has a dynamic coat

Master Darkfire

10:24:15 Dark/fire/ice

chat i was told to draw person without lifting pencil but i more or less just drew swiggles.

10:23:20 ezra, he/him

lurk-
pretty good, yeah! the base coat changes with the game seasons, it's cool

10:23:10 Dawn

Yes! ^^

Lurking shadows

10:22:38

So its good?

Lurking shadows

10:22:18

i wanted to say ahhhh ToT

10:22:12 Dawn

Shadows
OMG, such a cute pup! She's also a hero and has fairly high talent!

10:22:05 a rock in your shoe

not as rare as exclusive and crystalline

Lurking shadows

10:22:04

Aqqqq ok thank you for the answer :D

10:21:37 a rock in your shoe

fairly uncommon, I believe

Lurking shadows

10:21:16

yippie so dynamic is good

Lurking shadows

10:20:50

cuz this cutie just opped out -WP Click-

10:20:45 a rock in your shoe

lurking shadows
yuppers

Master Darkfire

10:20:36 Dark/fire/ice

i survied essay now just gotta wait until i can eat ^^

Lurking shadows

10:20:24

guysss is dynamic coat good?

10:19:38 He/They pronouns

Paws?

-WP Click-

10:18:30 He/They pronouns

Also I failed my stupid photoshop exam TvT (I was supposed to get a 700 or higher to pass and I got a 665, but i get to retake it soon ^^)

10:17:54 He/They pronouns

ugh, my computer is already almost dead ToT

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Lurking shadows

10:26:07

OH MA GOWWDDD, she is a pretty lady

10:25:27

-WP Click-

OMG?!
I got a festus coat that has 81 rarity?!

Lurking shadows

10:24:22

Yayyyy, becaause i have the father wwho also has a dynamic coat

Master Darkfire

10:24:15 Dark/fire/ice

chat i was told to draw person without lifting pencil but i more or less just drew swiggles.

10:23:20 ezra, he/him

lurk-
pretty good, yeah! the base coat changes with the game seasons, it's cool

10:23:10 Dawn

Yes! ^^

Lurking shadows

10:22:38

So its good?

Lurking shadows

10:22:18

i wanted to say ahhhh ToT

10:22:12 Dawn

Shadows
OMG, such a cute pup! She's also a hero and has fairly high talent!

10:22:05 a rock in your shoe

not as rare as exclusive and crystalline

Lurking shadows

10:22:04

Aqqqq ok thank you for the answer :D

10:21:37 a rock in your shoe

fairly uncommon, I believe

Lurking shadows

10:21:16

yippie so dynamic is good

Lurking shadows

10:20:50

cuz this cutie just opped out -WP Click-

10:20:45 a rock in your shoe

lurking shadows
yuppers

Master Darkfire

10:20:36 Dark/fire/ice

i survied essay now just gotta wait until i can eat ^^

Lurking shadows

10:20:24

guysss is dynamic coat good?

10:19:38 He/They pronouns

Paws?

-WP Click-

10:18:30 He/They pronouns

Also I failed my stupid photoshop exam TvT (I was supposed to get a 700 or higher to pass and I got a 665, but i get to retake it soon ^^)

10:17:54 He/They pronouns

ugh, my computer is already almost dead ToT

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM

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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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