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 Eye of Eternity
12:09:26 tern | they/he
andy
i think the flavour can be mermaid and joy
 Andypaws
12:08:59 Andy [he/they]
Though*
 Andypaws
12:08:15 Andy [he/they]
Tern

Its really good! I genuinely don't know what flavor it is tho lol
 EvergreenHills
12:07:04 Juicy Arm Boy
Andy
That looks radioactive
i want it right now /silly
 Eye of Eternity
12:06:32 tern | they/he
andy
oooh that looks yummy :0
 Anakin
12:06:12 Sith Happens
Two Amarok in one level?? :o
 Andypaws
12:04:34 Andy [he/they]
-Click- i think it is mermaid and joy flavored
 Winterfell
12:02:18 Winter
Ooo a lapis dye
 Ezranian
12:01:55 ezra, he/him
ugh i need to do a homework. why did i decide to go to college lol
 Eye of Eternity
11:58:40 tern | they/he
eer
hell yeah :33
 Andypaws
11:58:01 Andy [he/they]
My stepfather drove like an hour and a half to bring me an energy drink😭
 EvergreenHills
11:57:54 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
Im already thinking of ideas XD
 Eye of Eternity
11:57:04 tern | they/he
eer
wait you should :0
 EvergreenHills
11:55:15 Juicy Arm Boy
Lucky
Okay XD

Eyeguy
I knowww :3 I really want to design an oc based off of them now haha
 Night Raven College
11:54:11 NRC/Raven
I'm trying to draw an OC but I dont know how I feel about it...
 BuggyOs
11:53:42 Lucky Ladybug
Geen
Cloudy got to it first lol
 Eye of Eternity
11:53:37 tern | they/he
eer
aww what a little guy :0
 Winterfell
11:53:26 Winter
Sleep
I got aquamarine , topaz and tourmaline
 BuggyOs
11:53:18 Lucky Ladybug
oop nevermind
 EvergreenHills
11:53:16 Juicy Arm Boy
Buggy
South carolina :D near a river

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 Eye of Eternity
12:09:26 tern | they/he
andy
i think the flavour can be mermaid and joy
 Andypaws
12:08:59 Andy [he/they]
Though*
 Andypaws
12:08:15 Andy [he/they]
Tern

Its really good! I genuinely don't know what flavor it is tho lol
 EvergreenHills
12:07:04 Juicy Arm Boy
Andy
That looks radioactive
i want it right now /silly
 Eye of Eternity
12:06:32 tern | they/he
andy
oooh that looks yummy :0
 Anakin
12:06:12 Sith Happens
Two Amarok in one level?? :o
 Andypaws
12:04:34 Andy [he/they]
-Click- i think it is mermaid and joy flavored
 Winterfell
12:02:18 Winter
Ooo a lapis dye
 Ezranian
12:01:55 ezra, he/him
ugh i need to do a homework. why did i decide to go to college lol
 Eye of Eternity
11:58:40 tern | they/he
eer
hell yeah :33
 Andypaws
11:58:01 Andy [he/they]
My stepfather drove like an hour and a half to bring me an energy drink😭
 EvergreenHills
11:57:54 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
Im already thinking of ideas XD
 Eye of Eternity
11:57:04 tern | they/he
eer
wait you should :0
 EvergreenHills
11:55:15 Juicy Arm Boy
Lucky
Okay XD

Eyeguy
I knowww :3 I really want to design an oc based off of them now haha
 Night Raven College
11:54:11 NRC/Raven
I'm trying to draw an OC but I dont know how I feel about it...
 BuggyOs
11:53:42 Lucky Ladybug
Geen
Cloudy got to it first lol
 Eye of Eternity
11:53:37 tern | they/he
eer
aww what a little guy :0
 Winterfell
11:53:26 Winter
Sleep
I got aquamarine , topaz and tourmaline
 BuggyOs
11:53:18 Lucky Ladybug
oop nevermind
 EvergreenHills
11:53:16 Juicy Arm Boy
Buggy
South carolina :D near a river




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Critique me!May 15, 2022 07:29 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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I have no clue what I'm doing. Gallery Link

A few hours ago I was bored and decided to become an artist with no previous experience. With that being said this is my attempt to draw an OC of mine and I would like feedback. The anatomy seems a bit funky, he is supposed to be a wolf. I also colored him. For those of you that want to, you can go over and red line stuff so I can see what to fix! If you have tips on blending and colors that would be appreciated as well. I draw using Adobe Fresco, but if there are other good apps to use, let me know.

I'll link minor stuff and put the images for more important stuff so this isn't too long. Thanks :)

OC for reference(yes the oc is mine)

All image credit from here down belongs to me.

First red line

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First red line and outline

Altered final outline (I have no idea how I changed it this much)

IMG-1637.jpg

Colored final product

IMG-1636.jpg

Colored final product with OG lines behind it (for comparison, also I forgot to screenshot the red line that's under it. That one is in fact the original, the first red line linked at the top is the second red line I did in order to fix this. If that makes sense.)


Edited at May 17, 2022 07:49 PM by Ciao
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:21 PM


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hello! very cute character youve got there!!

ive been drawing canines/wolves in particular for going on 6(ish) years now id say, and ive learned a lot about drawing them over the years, so im here to offer a few tips (as well as some blue lines for future reference)!

so canine anatomy is very hard to explain, but the way i improved is by studying the canine body by tracing over actual photos of wolves i found online. ive found simplifying their bodies and more specifically their limbs into simple shapes and refinining from there helps a ton for anatomy improvement!

ive bluelined over your image and focused on a few different things, and ill list the links to view them below!

these are just a few quick base sketches i whipped up within like 5 minutes so theyre not perfect, but i hope theyre able to help a bit!

you have a lot of potential and im so excited to see your improvement!! if you need anything at all dont be scared to reach out to me and ill try my best to help! :)


Edited at May 15, 2022 08:26 PM by jaune
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:53 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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Thank you for the help! I can definitely see how I can improve the design more, and the blue line especially helped. For the anatomy I think tracing a real wolf would really help as well. I appreciate your critique and i'll definitely reach out if I have more questions :)
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:07 PM


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Ah- I might be of assistance here. Anatomy is quite off, /lighthearted
If I forget to add the redlines pm me I get busy lol
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:48 PM


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Thanks, i'll pm you^^

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