Wolf Play : Critique?

08:58:39 NRC/Raven

Mercy
Once you level up your wolves it's much easier to hunt.

Merciless Mercy

08:56:43

man i need food and soon hunting lowkey is my least fav thing to do

08:55:29 He/They pronouns

Help- I'm supposed to sketch out 10 logos for my project and I'm stuck with only 2 done ToT

Xanthia

08:51:40 Vash | Xy

Exist that looks amazing:0

08:45:46 He/They pronouns

Agh, I have to wait until I get home to get access to some of my characters because they're on roblox ToT (I'm trying to find one of my characters to use for the project I'm doing)

Mistakes

08:40:40 Cryptic | Crypt

-WP Click-
Ah man. Really sad to see him go. He was born the day after my cat died so I named him after my cat.

Owlstar

08:27:54 tiger\Owl|she\her

So I want to explore right? So I go and do it I start with only 90mush them when I’m done I got 125 mush

08:23:58 NRC/Raven

I'll try them some time

08:23:36 He/They pronouns

NRC,
Oh, you should try them, they're very yummy ^^

08:22:49 NRC/Raven

Doodle
Oh, I've never had pocky lol

Hurry

08:20:20

I know I just traded Shiny Junk and 500 mushrooms for Robin Feather a few hours ago, but I just found 2 out of 4 parts for it in single explore sessions so I think that must be a sign *^*

08:18:25 He/They pronouns

NRC,
yeah, kinda like the korean version of pocky

Existence

08:16:02 Exist / Kuskyn

-Click-
Favourite brush found c.c I love this This character was a change and I love that c.c

08:14:55 NRC/Raven

Snack*

08:14:50 NRC/Raven

Are pepero a snake?

08:13:18 He/They pronouns

My boyfriend got me pepero from a store near my house, and it has felix from straykids on it :3 I might go to the store after school to see if I could get I.N or Han

Zephyrus

08:11:09 Zephyr / Kaz

Nope, no wolf is safe from the script, pregnant or otherwise :')

08:10:55 NRC/Raven

Lol sleep me and you are thinking the same thing

08:10:33 NRC/Raven

Are wolves that are pregnant safe from dying of they haven't given birth yet?

Sleep

08:10:10 Kneecap stealer

Wait..can a pregnant wolf die?

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08:58:39 NRC/Raven

Mercy
Once you level up your wolves it's much easier to hunt.

Merciless Mercy

08:56:43

man i need food and soon hunting lowkey is my least fav thing to do

08:55:29 He/They pronouns

Help- I'm supposed to sketch out 10 logos for my project and I'm stuck with only 2 done ToT

Xanthia

08:51:40 Vash | Xy

Exist that looks amazing:0

08:45:46 He/They pronouns

Agh, I have to wait until I get home to get access to some of my characters because they're on roblox ToT (I'm trying to find one of my characters to use for the project I'm doing)

Mistakes

08:40:40 Cryptic | Crypt

-WP Click-
Ah man. Really sad to see him go. He was born the day after my cat died so I named him after my cat.

Owlstar

08:27:54 tiger\Owl|she\her

So I want to explore right? So I go and do it I start with only 90mush them when I’m done I got 125 mush

08:23:58 NRC/Raven

I'll try them some time

08:23:36 He/They pronouns

NRC,
Oh, you should try them, they're very yummy ^^

08:22:49 NRC/Raven

Doodle
Oh, I've never had pocky lol

Hurry

08:20:20

I know I just traded Shiny Junk and 500 mushrooms for Robin Feather a few hours ago, but I just found 2 out of 4 parts for it in single explore sessions so I think that must be a sign *^*

08:18:25 He/They pronouns

NRC,
yeah, kinda like the korean version of pocky

Existence

08:16:02 Exist / Kuskyn

-Click-
Favourite brush found c.c I love this This character was a change and I love that c.c

08:14:55 NRC/Raven

Snack*

08:14:50 NRC/Raven

Are pepero a snake?

08:13:18 He/They pronouns

My boyfriend got me pepero from a store near my house, and it has felix from straykids on it :3 I might go to the store after school to see if I could get I.N or Han

Zephyrus

08:11:09 Zephyr / Kaz

Nope, no wolf is safe from the script, pregnant or otherwise :')

08:10:55 NRC/Raven

Lol sleep me and you are thinking the same thing

08:10:33 NRC/Raven

Are wolves that are pregnant safe from dying of they haven't given birth yet?

Sleep

08:10:10 Kneecap stealer

Wait..can a pregnant wolf die?

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July 6, 2018 02:35 AM

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Just trying out some semi-realistic fur practice

Critiques on lighting, blending, etc. are greatly appreciated. If you have suggestions on how to make it look more realistic, that's also greatly appreciated

https://s33.postimg.cc/6dgalc133/Fur_Practice.png

July 7, 2018 05:36 PM

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So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!

Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows

I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color

Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

July 7, 2018 05:51 PM

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Dragon's Fire said:
So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

I agree with both! For fur, I personally think that the most important thing is edge variation. Have very stark contrast as well, as right now, you have a lot of softer edges.

For color, instead of shading with black and white, try changing your hue variation! For wolves with white fur, try blue-tinted gray, cream, anything. For wolves with cream fur, try shading with a reddish-brown. Of course, these are only like two in a billion examples lol

Another thing I think is important with fur is fur direction. Look at real wolves and see how their fur grows in like ten different directions.

These are only my personal observations on drawing fur. I like what you have going so far, you can do it!

July 7, 2018 08:12 PM

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Honestly I have no critique but this is awesome.On a real animal I think the color would be a little more varied though but I under stand you might have not added it because of it being practice.

July 7, 2018 10:18 PM