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Critique?April 7, 2018 10:51 AM


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<div align="center">So I haven't drawn a lot of wolves recently but quite a while ago I redesigned Nitronica. I wanted to give the new design a sketch but I know for a fact the back leg is a bit off but I'd like some more critique in order to improve :)
https://drive.google.com/file/d/19MY7tBw1Gelo4M60AR7NFVeqr47Y4FWI/view
Thank you.

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Edited at April 7, 2018 10:55 AM by Oakwood Guardians
Critique?April 7, 2018 11:15 AM


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Moving to art help. :)
Critique?April 7, 2018 11:19 AM


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Deer said:
Moving to art help. :)

Ah thank you, still trying to understand forums x3
Critique?April 8, 2018 12:19 PM


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Overall this looks very good! I love the sort of jagged/sketchy style you have, it works very well with the character. ^^

The first thing I noticed is that the front legs seem a bit short in proportion to the rest of the character. That's an easy fix, though - just extend the forearms a bit and you're good to go. c:

As for the back leg, it looks like the leg is awkwardly jutting out from the "thigh" area. In that sort of running pose, the thigh bones should be extended a bit more - meaning, not as circular looking. More like an oval. :P

This is super hard to explain, and I can't to a redline for you at the moment, so I'll just post something I did that had a similar pose and hopefully you'll see what I mean. :'D
https://ibb.co/kLSy4n

Other than those things, you're good!
Critique?April 9, 2018 05:03 AM


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Dash Attacked said:
Overall this looks very good! I love the sort of jagged/sketchy style you have, it works very well with the character. ^^

The first thing I noticed is that the front legs seem a bit short in proportion to the rest of the character. That's an easy fix, though - just extend the forearms a bit and you're good to go. c:

As for the back leg, it looks like the leg is awkwardly jutting out from the "thigh" area. In that sort of running pose, the thigh bones should be extended a bit more - meaning, not as circular looking. More like an oval. :P

This is super hard to explain, and I can't to a redline for you at the moment, so I'll just post something I did that had a similar pose and hopefully you'll see what I mean. :'D
https://ibb.co/kLSy4n

Other than those things, you're good!


Thank you so much and I see what you mean. I'll take this into consideration to improve :)

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