Wolf Play : Galaxy Help

05:13:14 Kneecap stealer

Ok I need some opinions here

05:12:01 Kneecap stealer

Eyes are getting heavy like a boulder
Heart is thumping like the beat of a drum
Pain in my shoulder like nothing
Pain like a lighting bolt right through my heart
Love is like a drug killing me slowly
Eyes so heavy but I fight to stay awake

05:09:57 Kneecap stealer

Ok nah I'm out here composing a song I swear

05:09:42 Kneecap stealer

Lucky you

05:09:30 Kneecap stealer

Pain like a lighting bolt
Love is like a drug
Eyes so heavy but I wanna stay awake

05:09:11 Winter

Pink
Lmao no I'm going to buy some with real money

05:06:55 Kneecap stealer

Apo has a good deal on 91 apples lmao

05:06:32 Kneecap stealer

Someone please explain why I can make a poem WhEn I aM tIrEd but not when I'm awake

05:05:55 Winter

Time to go buy 200 apples

05:05:33 Kneecap stealer

Never in my life have I been able to make a poem

05:05:18 Kneecap stealer

Wtf

05:05:03 Kneecap stealer

Eyes are getting heavy like a boulder
Heart is thumping like the best of a drum
Pain in my shoulder like nothing

04:46:22 Winter

I need to go on the hunt for a new make for my pack >.>

Coveted Aberrance

04:37:14

Pretty!

Amygdala

04:18:57 Amy/Anpmygdala

Hehe my baby is on the news page XD
-WP Click-

04:14:20 Kneecap stealer

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Existence

04:06:12 Exist / Kuskyn

Ghoulish, It's best buying or using wolf party till you get a boost/defect, as a wolf has to have one/or both before being customized ^^;

Sabbath

04:06:11 Rook

paws? :3
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dont worry Pink, i take any chance to advertise my works. now give me paws.

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wow! That's pretty good!

05:13:14 Kneecap stealer

Ok I need some opinions here

05:12:01 Kneecap stealer

05:09:57 Kneecap stealer

Ok nah I'm out here composing a song I swear

05:09:42 Kneecap stealer

Lucky you

05:09:30 Kneecap stealer

Pain like a lighting bolt
Love is like a drug
Eyes so heavy but I wanna stay awake

05:09:11 Winter

Pink
Lmao no I'm going to buy some with real money

05:06:55 Kneecap stealer

Apo has a good deal on 91 apples lmao

05:06:32 Kneecap stealer

Someone please explain why I can make a poem WhEn I aM tIrEd but not when I'm awake

05:05:55 Winter

Time to go buy 200 apples

05:05:33 Kneecap stealer

Never in my life have I been able to make a poem

05:05:18 Kneecap stealer

Wtf

05:05:03 Kneecap stealer

Eyes are getting heavy like a boulder
Heart is thumping like the best of a drum
Pain in my shoulder like nothing

04:46:22 Winter

I need to go on the hunt for a new make for my pack >.>

Coveted Aberrance

04:37:14

Pretty!

Amygdala

04:18:57 Amy/Anpmygdala

Hehe my baby is on the news page XD
-WP Click-

04:14:20 Kneecap stealer

Collar

I gave you paws a long time ago

Existence

04:06:12 Exist / Kuskyn

Ghoulish, It's best buying or using wolf party till you get a boost/defect, as a wolf has to have one/or both before being customized ^^;

Sabbath

04:06:11 Rook

paws? :3
-WP Click-

Collar

04:05:18 Altar 🦌

dont worry Pink, i take any chance to advertise my works. now give me paws.

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Forums > Artwork > Art Help

April 16, 2018 09:07 PM

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Here's the image

https://s14.postimg.cc/4h7dmgk29/Random_Galaxy.png

For some reason, something's been really bothering me about this picture and I can't seem to figure out what.

All critiques are appreciated, or just tell me what you wish was changed

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 09:12 PM

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Maybe more stars? We don't really see them

Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

April 16, 2018 09:37 PM

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DarkCloudClan said:
Maybe more stars? We don't really see them
Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

Alright, lemme spam the stars and update the picture XD

Edit: UPDATED

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 11:31 PM

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Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

April 16, 2018 11:53 PM

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a m b e r said:
Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

XD Thanks, let me update it again