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Ezranian

11:13:21 ezra, he/him

owl-
if you apply them at the bottom of your den page it gives you more cp to give to your wolves

Owlstar

11:12:48 tiger\Owl|she\her

What are the bronze figs for??

Caeruleum

11:04:07 Caesar

appraise all button in montak, oh how i love you <3333

Caeruleum

11:03:31 Caesar

bird boi, i dont think theyd be worth the price, as long as hearthstones exist :')

Owlstar

11:00:34 tiger\Owl|she\her

Nightlight use the sales chat

Sabbath

10:59:23 Rook

is it crazy to say I wish Lucius sold bronze figs? like am I too greedy for wishing I could use a 3rd currency to get them? xD

nighlight

10:58:20

can anyone buy my wolf

Sabbath

10:57:22 Rook

thank you guys <33 I think he looks so cool. I can't decide what background to give him, though >.<

So many good backgrounds but he doesn't really fit them

Moonfall

10:56:00 Many moons, one me

Sabbath
He looks so pretty!

Caeruleum

10:55:55 Caesar

bird boi, all the paws for the pretty dude <33

Owlstar

10:54:10 tiger\Owl|she\her

Bye. I think I’m going somewhere so gotta go! See ya laters!

Sabbath

10:53:32 Rook

paws? :3
-WP Click-

Owlstar

10:52:47 tiger\Owl|she\her

Same

Moonfall

10:52:32 Many moons, one me

Harry kinda looks like my boy Thumbs. Love the Oreo kitties

Owlstar

10:52:11 tiger\Owl|she\her

Again*

Owlstar

10:52:03 tiger\Owl|she\her

Also if I clean his room in about in hour it’s a mess agian

Vax

10:51:59 a rock in your shoe

imma go work, see ya

Owlstar

10:50:52 tiger\Owl|she\her

XD he Murks a LOT

Vax

10:50:11 a rock in your shoe

owl
he speaks only in riddles

Owlstar

10:49:13 tiger\Owl|she\her

Yeah. Soon I’ll probably have to fix it again

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Ezranian

11:13:21 ezra, he/him

owl-
if you apply them at the bottom of your den page it gives you more cp to give to your wolves

Owlstar

11:12:48 tiger\Owl|she\her

What are the bronze figs for??

Caeruleum

11:04:07 Caesar

appraise all button in montak, oh how i love you <3333

Caeruleum

11:03:31 Caesar

bird boi, i dont think theyd be worth the price, as long as hearthstones exist :')

Owlstar

11:00:34 tiger\Owl|she\her

Nightlight use the sales chat

Sabbath

10:59:23 Rook

is it crazy to say I wish Lucius sold bronze figs? like am I too greedy for wishing I could use a 3rd currency to get them? xD

nighlight

10:58:20

can anyone buy my wolf

Sabbath

10:57:22 Rook

thank you guys <33 I think he looks so cool. I can't decide what background to give him, though >.<

So many good backgrounds but he doesn't really fit them

Moonfall

10:56:00 Many moons, one me

Sabbath
He looks so pretty!

Caeruleum

10:55:55 Caesar

bird boi, all the paws for the pretty dude <33

Owlstar

10:54:10 tiger\Owl|she\her

Bye. I think I’m going somewhere so gotta go! See ya laters!

Sabbath

10:53:32 Rook

paws? :3
-WP Click-

Owlstar

10:52:47 tiger\Owl|she\her

Same

Moonfall

10:52:32 Many moons, one me

Harry kinda looks like my boy Thumbs. Love the Oreo kitties

Owlstar

10:52:11 tiger\Owl|she\her

Again*

Owlstar

10:52:03 tiger\Owl|she\her

Also if I clean his room in about in hour it’s a mess agian

Vax

10:51:59 a rock in your shoe

imma go work, see ya

Owlstar

10:50:52 tiger\Owl|she\her

XD he Murks a LOT

Vax

10:50:11 a rock in your shoe

owl
he speaks only in riddles

Owlstar

10:49:13 tiger\Owl|she\her

Yeah. Soon I’ll probably have to fix it again

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

Critique?

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

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July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

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July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

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July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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