Wolf Play : Criticism Needed

01:27:08 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Ok I’m off bye bye y’all

01:24:36 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Oh yeah! Just got my 4th yap trophy

Tangled Moon

01:17:18 Moony

my beautiful wolf Aphrodite died 😭😭😭
-WP Click-

KittyE

12:49:20

Does anyone know of fertility figurine being sold

12:30:27 Kneecap stealer

Can you yell at me to go to sleep please?🥲🥲🥲🥲 One of my old roommates came knocking on the door and woke me up because I put a friends stuff outside (took over an hour she had so much shit) because of some personal stuff she tried to do (kick me out is the main one)

12:28:35 Kneecap stealer

:0 hi eve and yes, thankies it's VERY helpful when you don't have to buy them or find the ingredients to craft them, espically if you have to craft multiple of each

SixBears

12:24:38 evebot

That was the other day. I thought it would be helpful. :)

12:14:08 Kneecap stealer

When did they add the healing pots in market

12:11:29 Kneecap stealer

I swear if I wake up to a labor notification and I have duds imma scream

Vulpixles

11:52:46 Pixie, Vul | ♈

Yeah I definitely missed writing. It's been like 4 years

11:35:25 renee

@Sleep
strange

11:33:20 Kneecap stealer

I was asleep..until someone came Knocking on my back door asking for my boyfriend and now I cannot go back to sleep

11:20:00 renee

@Sleep
go to SLEEP!

11:18:43 Kneecap stealer

Someone yell at me to go to sleep, I gotta get up early tomorrow to visit my boyfriend

11:17:31 Kneecap stealer

I'm breathing so heavy I'm convinced something is wrong

Ninjago Realm

11:09:54 Waterfall,Zane,Nya

Zane Julien chokes on their meal.

Mood: Sheepish well done Zane... How do you choke...

11:01:37 renee

@Lucky Rat
BBQ chips are fire

Spellbound

11:01:16 miss fine dining

go buy some

10:54:34 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

I want some BBQ chips >:( I’ve been craving them all day |:’(

Nekros

10:54:19 Kros

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01:27:08 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Ok I’m off bye bye y’all

01:24:36 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Oh yeah! Just got my 4th yap trophy

Tangled Moon

01:17:18 Moony

my beautiful wolf Aphrodite died 😭😭😭
-WP Click-

KittyE

12:49:20

Does anyone know of fertility figurine being sold

12:30:27 Kneecap stealer

12:28:35 Kneecap stealer

:0 hi eve and yes, thankies it's VERY helpful when you don't have to buy them or find the ingredients to craft them, espically if you have to craft multiple of each

SixBears

12:24:38 evebot

That was the other day. I thought it would be helpful. :)

12:14:08 Kneecap stealer

When did they add the healing pots in market

12:11:29 Kneecap stealer

I swear if I wake up to a labor notification and I have duds imma scream

Vulpixles

11:52:46 Pixie, Vul | ♈

Yeah I definitely missed writing. It's been like 4 years

11:35:25 renee

@Sleep
strange

11:33:20 Kneecap stealer

I was asleep..until someone came Knocking on my back door asking for my boyfriend and now I cannot go back to sleep

11:20:00 renee

@Sleep
go to SLEEP!

11:18:43 Kneecap stealer

Someone yell at me to go to sleep, I gotta get up early tomorrow to visit my boyfriend

11:17:31 Kneecap stealer

I'm breathing so heavy I'm convinced something is wrong

Ninjago Realm

11:09:54 Waterfall,Zane,Nya

Zane Julien chokes on their meal.

Mood: Sheepish well done Zane... How do you choke...

11:01:37 renee

@Lucky Rat
BBQ chips are fire

Spellbound

11:01:16 miss fine dining

go buy some

10:54:34 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

I want some BBQ chips >:( I’ve been craving them all day |:’(

Nekros

10:54:19 Kros

RP anybody? PM me!

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November 9, 2017 10:25 PM

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https://s2.postimg.org/cm6tysat5/Screen_Shot_2017-11-09_at_11.21.15_PM.png

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Edited at November 9, 2017 10:28 PM by Aphmau clan

November 9, 2017 10:28 PM

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Not bad (\^-^/)

November 9, 2017 10:29 PM

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It's not really that bad in all honesty.

The tail and maybe the front leg on the side we're viewing could use a little work maybe, though the tail could actually depend on the breed of cat the drawing is of.

But overall it's pretty good

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:30 PM by Destinations End

November 10, 2017 01:28 AM

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The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:

https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

January 1, 2018 09:11 PM

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Siarczek said:
The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

This helps me out! Thank you

January 3, 2018 03:49 AM