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11:57:42 Winter

I see

11:57:20

@cloud
my chest is hurting now

11:56:45

@cloud
taking breaths but its not helping

11:56:24 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

I was listening to my what you might like music list and one of the songs from the little mermaid came on? Bruh

11:56:11

yep we have known eachother for a long time

11:54:37 cloud (he/they)

winter

you probly will me and lovestory have been doing this since we ehere in 6th grade (by this i mean playing blooket)

11:53:45 Winter

Clicked the link feel like I'm going to get hacked >.>

11:53:34 Doggy (he/him)

Tall
Oooo she’s pretty

11:52:30

-WP Click-
I may have a favorite

11:52:26 Doggy (he/him)

Cloud
Hehehe 😈

11:52:21 Echo (They/He)

Winter
Lol

11:51:40 cloud (he/they)

dog

......menace

Eye of Eternity

11:51:28 tern | they/he

guysss theres a report button,,,, /semisilly

11:51:16 Pack of Sharp Snap

love story
Do not invite others offsite

11:50:51 Winter

Tern
Lmao

Echo
Hmm I'd call them yatchs xD

11:50:47

Love story
You've broken like three or four game rules so far, please read the rules before you get reported

11:50:33

ok

11:50:32 Doggy (he/him)

Cloud
Oh yeah lol sorry this is my other account

11:50:08 Doggy (he/him)

Love story
If you don’t want to be kicked off the game I suggest you listen to the rules

Eye of Eternity

11:50:07 tern | they/he

cloud
oh damn </3
are you not at school or something?

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11:57:42 Winter

I see

11:57:20

@cloud
my chest is hurting now

11:56:45

@cloud
taking breaths but its not helping

11:56:24 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

I was listening to my what you might like music list and one of the songs from the little mermaid came on? Bruh

11:56:11

yep we have known eachother for a long time

11:54:37 cloud (he/they)

winter

you probly will me and lovestory have been doing this since we ehere in 6th grade (by this i mean playing blooket)

11:53:45 Winter

Clicked the link feel like I'm going to get hacked >.>

11:53:34 Doggy (he/him)

Tall
Oooo she’s pretty

11:52:30

-WP Click-
I may have a favorite

11:52:26 Doggy (he/him)

Cloud
Hehehe 😈

11:52:21 Echo (They/He)

Winter
Lol

11:51:40 cloud (he/they)

dog

......menace

Eye of Eternity

11:51:28 tern | they/he

guysss theres a report button,,,, /semisilly

11:51:16 Pack of Sharp Snap

love story
Do not invite others offsite

11:50:51 Winter

Tern
Lmao

Echo
Hmm I'd call them yatchs xD

11:50:47

Love story
You've broken like three or four game rules so far, please read the rules before you get reported

11:50:33

ok

11:50:32 Doggy (he/him)

Cloud
Oh yeah lol sorry this is my other account

11:50:08 Doggy (he/him)

Love story
If you don’t want to be kicked off the game I suggest you listen to the rules

Eye of Eternity

11:50:07 tern | they/he

cloud
oh damn </3
are you not at school or something?

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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