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12:21:53 Andy [he/they]

Tern

He can only survive if he is invading my space

Eye of Eternity

12:19:38 tern | they/he

andy
how could you ask that of him thats so mean /silly

12:14:36 Andy [he/they]

-Click- personal space?

12:14:26 Acorn (She/Her)

Horse Defender
They are :D

Eye of Eternity

12:13:10 tern | they/he

andy
exactly!!

acorn
awwww so cute :000

12:12:23 Acorn (She/Her)

-Click-
Bah
Maribel yanked my arm at the end

12:11:37 Andy [he/they]

Tern

Yeah i choose happiness. I dont care what flavor they insist it is

12:10:55 Andy [he/they]

Evergreen

Mmm radioactivity

Eye of Eternity

12:09:26 tern | they/he

andy
i think the flavour can be mermaid and joy

12:08:59 Andy [he/they]

Though*

12:08:15 Andy [he/they]

Tern

Its really good! I genuinely don't know what flavor it is tho lol

12:07:04 Juicy Arm Boy

Andy
That looks radioactive
i want it right now /silly

Eye of Eternity

12:06:32 tern | they/he

andy
oooh that looks yummy :0

12:06:12 Sith Happens

Two Amarok in one level?? :o

12:04:34 Andy [he/they]

-Click- i think it is mermaid and joy flavored

12:02:18 Winter

Ooo a lapis dye

12:01:55 ezra, he/him

ugh i need to do a homework. why did i decide to go to college lol

Eye of Eternity

11:58:40 tern | they/he

eer
hell yeah :33

11:58:01 Andy [he/they]

My stepfather drove like an hour and a half to bring me an energy drink😭

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Eyeguy
Im already thinking of ideas XD

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12:21:53 Andy [he/they]

Tern

He can only survive if he is invading my space

Eye of Eternity

12:19:38 tern | they/he

andy
how could you ask that of him thats so mean /silly

12:14:36 Andy [he/they]

-Click- personal space?

12:14:26 Acorn (She/Her)

Horse Defender
They are :D

Eye of Eternity

12:13:10 tern | they/he

andy
exactly!!

acorn
awwww so cute :000

12:12:23 Acorn (She/Her)

-Click-
Bah
Maribel yanked my arm at the end

12:11:37 Andy [he/they]

Tern

Yeah i choose happiness. I dont care what flavor they insist it is

12:10:55 Andy [he/they]

Evergreen

Mmm radioactivity

Eye of Eternity

12:09:26 tern | they/he

andy
i think the flavour can be mermaid and joy

12:08:59 Andy [he/they]

Though*

12:08:15 Andy [he/they]

Tern

Its really good! I genuinely don't know what flavor it is tho lol

12:07:04 Juicy Arm Boy

Andy
That looks radioactive
i want it right now /silly

Eye of Eternity

12:06:32 tern | they/he

andy
oooh that looks yummy :0

12:06:12 Sith Happens

Two Amarok in one level?? :o

12:04:34 Andy [he/they]

-Click- i think it is mermaid and joy flavored

12:02:18 Winter

Ooo a lapis dye

12:01:55 ezra, he/him

ugh i need to do a homework. why did i decide to go to college lol

Eye of Eternity

11:58:40 tern | they/he

eer
hell yeah :33

11:58:01 Andy [he/they]

My stepfather drove like an hour and a half to bring me an energy drink😭

11:57:54 Juicy Arm Boy

Eyeguy
Im already thinking of ideas XD

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April 16, 2018 09:07 PM

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Here's the image

https://s14.postimg.cc/4h7dmgk29/Random_Galaxy.png

For some reason, something's been really bothering me about this picture and I can't seem to figure out what.

All critiques are appreciated, or just tell me what you wish was changed

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 09:12 PM

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Maybe more stars? We don't really see them

Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

April 16, 2018 09:37 PM

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DarkCloudClan said:
Maybe more stars? We don't really see them
Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

Alright, lemme spam the stars and update the picture XD

Edit: UPDATED

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 11:31 PM

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Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

April 16, 2018 11:53 PM

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a m b e r said:
Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

XD Thanks, let me update it again

April 16, 2018 11:55 PM

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I really like it! Possibly a couple other colors blended? Lighter blues and brighter pinks maybe. Just a subtle change.

April 17, 2018 12:48 AM

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Maybe if you make it a bit lighter?

April 17, 2018 01:48 AM

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I love It! I don't know much about art, but the purple cloud/nebula looks a little on the denser side.

Still, it's really beautiful! :D

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