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11:32:41 NRC/Raven

Ever
I'll try my OCs always turn out weird but this one should be fine since I kinda have a reference, it's gonna be a fae human thing. I'll show you if he looks good.

The Hunters/Hunted

11:32:28 toe licker

listening to abracadabra by iornmouse is fire! XD

EvergreenHills

11:31:15 Juicy Arm Boy

NRC
Do it :0

The Hunters/Hunted

11:31:14 toe licker

NRC
ooo~! imm make a poll, yours will be one :D

Night Raven College

11:30:37 NRC/Raven

Galaxy Waves

The Hunters/Hunted

11:30:22 toe licker

NRC
tryna name em, i don't know what though TvT

Night Raven College

11:29:58 NRC/Raven

Hunter
Ooooo

Night Raven College

11:29:46 NRC/Raven

Might draw an OC that's in my mind that I think will look cool

Night Raven College

11:29:19 NRC/Raven

Hi Hunter,
Hi Ever,
I'm doing well just got back from church.

The Hunters/Hunted

11:28:59 toe licker

mwehehehhehe

-WP Click-

EvergreenHills

11:28:35 Juicy Arm Boy

Heya NRC ! How are ya ?

Night Raven College

11:28:26 NRC/Raven

His*

The Hunters/Hunted

11:28:22 toe licker

bye owl! <3

Night Raven College

11:28:21 NRC/Raven

-WP Click-
At least now pelt doesn't look awful

The Hunters/Hunted

11:28:14 toe licker

hi NRC!!

East MountainClan

11:27:56 Edith, Edie, Stella

Lol bye Owl

East MountainClan

11:27:30 Edith, Edie, Stella

That's fun Owl. If I did that I feel like I'd go insane cuz I'd probably end up getting repetitive after a while <_>
Honestly I struggle with names sometimes

Night Raven College

11:26:58 NRC/Raven

Also hello

Night Raven College

11:26:53 NRC/Raven

Lol

Owlstar

11:26:40 tiger\Owl|she\her

All names must end in tail. And bye!! Gotta poof

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Night Raven College

11:32:41 NRC/Raven

Ever
I'll try my OCs always turn out weird but this one should be fine since I kinda have a reference, it's gonna be a fae human thing. I'll show you if he looks good.

The Hunters/Hunted

11:32:28 toe licker

listening to abracadabra by iornmouse is fire! XD

EvergreenHills

11:31:15 Juicy Arm Boy

NRC
Do it :0

The Hunters/Hunted

11:31:14 toe licker

NRC
ooo~! imm make a poll, yours will be one :D

Night Raven College

11:30:37 NRC/Raven

Galaxy Waves

The Hunters/Hunted

11:30:22 toe licker

NRC
tryna name em, i don't know what though TvT

Night Raven College

11:29:58 NRC/Raven

Hunter
Ooooo

Night Raven College

11:29:46 NRC/Raven

Might draw an OC that's in my mind that I think will look cool

Night Raven College

11:29:19 NRC/Raven

Hi Hunter,
Hi Ever,
I'm doing well just got back from church.

The Hunters/Hunted

11:28:59 toe licker

mwehehehhehe

-WP Click-

EvergreenHills

11:28:35 Juicy Arm Boy

Heya NRC ! How are ya ?

Night Raven College

11:28:26 NRC/Raven

His*

The Hunters/Hunted

11:28:22 toe licker

bye owl! <3

Night Raven College

11:28:21 NRC/Raven

-WP Click-
At least now pelt doesn't look awful

The Hunters/Hunted

11:28:14 toe licker

hi NRC!!

East MountainClan

11:27:56 Edith, Edie, Stella

Lol bye Owl

East MountainClan

11:27:30 Edith, Edie, Stella

That's fun Owl. If I did that I feel like I'd go insane cuz I'd probably end up getting repetitive after a while <_>
Honestly I struggle with names sometimes

Night Raven College

11:26:58 NRC/Raven

Also hello

Night Raven College

11:26:53 NRC/Raven

Lol

Owlstar

11:26:40 tiger\Owl|she\her

All names must end in tail. And bye!! Gotta poof

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

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September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

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September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

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September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

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September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

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September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

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September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

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September 19, 2018 09:15 AM

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Thanks every for the critique

Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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