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its. its such a weird game. i dont know how to explain it without spoiling it but its about this kid whos trapped in a castle full of demons and a morally grey goddess makes him kill them all and i cannot tell you more
its,, a horror game? kind of? its definitely weird and creepy and gorey and chock full of religious imagery/theming its so good
and the art style is all over the place its really amazing

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Oh, thank goodness I didn't just dream that up!

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i remember it so damn well

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Anyone remember that McDonald's game where you created an avatar with a code you could get from Happy Meal toys?

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what’s zelle

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ugh zelle is such a good game
i will spread zelle propaganda wherever i go

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now I want to listen to the new ado song
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petri
ohh fair

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Whoo!

tern
Okay, not "depth" depth. More of a more thorough explanation of it as a concept.

Vax

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okay
to the drawing app

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yeah

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Oh, thank goodness I didn't just dream that up!

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i remember it so damn well

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Anyone remember that McDonald's game where you created an avatar with a code you could get from Happy Meal toys?

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what’s zelle

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ugh zelle is such a good game
i will spread zelle propaganda wherever i go

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now I want to listen to the new ado song
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ohh fair

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Whoo!

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Okay, not "depth" depth. More of a more thorough explanation of it as a concept.

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okay
to the drawing app

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yeah

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Vax
we were talking about the bad ai tiktok one

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

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July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

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July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

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July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

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July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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