Wolf Play : Critique?

03:00:55 Many moons, one me

I don't quite know what to do with her? Soup and try again? Or keep and see what happens?
-WP Click-

Tonneoshet

02:26:09 Uncle Tony

Wish I had more den space, but I barely want half the wolves i keep xD
Now my ALLIANCE slots on the other hand-

02:18:44 Andy [he/they]

Moonfall

oh yeah some people have an insane amount of den space

02:16:54 Many moons, one me

I will say my flabbers do be ghasted when I visit other dens and see they have over 1000 wolves AND den space left over

02:14:43 Many moons, one me

Andy
Of course!! Another thing is ff you have den card explore or den card stats selected in your own den, it'll show other dens that way

02:14:23 Andy [he/they]

-WP Click- I found this in the suggestions forum

02:13:33 Andy [he/they]

thank you both!

02:12:49 Rook

Ah, I always forget about the different den views. I always just leave my den the way it is xD

02:12:42 Many moons, one me

Looks like you have 13 wolves with 6 open spaces, so 19 all together

02:11:15 Many moons, one me

Andy, you could put it into view>den card explore or den card stats then just under it at the top it'll tell you how many wolves you have. Then scrolling down to the very bottom it'll tell you how many slots are open

02:09:37 Rook

I don't know if there's just a number somewhere though e.e

02:09:10 Rook

Andy
I put my pack ID into trading post and then add up the number of results + number of empty spaces at the bottom of my den.

02:07:44 Andy [he/they]

is there a way to see my overall den space outside of individually counting my wolves?

02:06:02 Many moons, one me

Girl... You need to go into labor. I beg -WP Click-

02:02:27 Many moons, one me

Oh nice, all 4 pups I free ranged got into sanctuary

02:00:39 Snow

Renee
Sleep? What's this magical term called sleep?

01:57:48 Rook

I love the otso base so much

01:57:37 Rook

i need my wolves to stop giving me cute pups if they don't have boosts </3
-WP Click-

lovrenee

01:56:17 renee

@Snow
I'm currently procrastinating sleep lol

01:53:07 Snow

Renee
That's good to hear, I'm doing fine right now. Currently I'm procrastinating my profile pcture like I have been doing for a month.

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03:00:55 Many moons, one me

I don't quite know what to do with her? Soup and try again? Or keep and see what happens?
-WP Click-

Tonneoshet

02:26:09 Uncle Tony

Wish I had more den space, but I barely want half the wolves i keep xD
Now my ALLIANCE slots on the other hand-

02:18:44 Andy [he/they]

Moonfall

oh yeah some people have an insane amount of den space

02:16:54 Many moons, one me

I will say my flabbers do be ghasted when I visit other dens and see they have over 1000 wolves AND den space left over

02:14:43 Many moons, one me

Andy
Of course!! Another thing is ff you have den card explore or den card stats selected in your own den, it'll show other dens that way

02:14:23 Andy [he/they]

-WP Click- I found this in the suggestions forum

02:13:33 Andy [he/they]

thank you both!

02:12:49 Rook

Ah, I always forget about the different den views. I always just leave my den the way it is xD

02:12:42 Many moons, one me

Looks like you have 13 wolves with 6 open spaces, so 19 all together

02:11:15 Many moons, one me

02:09:37 Rook

I don't know if there's just a number somewhere though e.e

02:09:10 Rook

Andy
I put my pack ID into trading post and then add up the number of results + number of empty spaces at the bottom of my den.

02:07:44 Andy [he/they]

is there a way to see my overall den space outside of individually counting my wolves?

02:06:02 Many moons, one me

Girl... You need to go into labor. I beg -WP Click-

02:02:27 Many moons, one me

Oh nice, all 4 pups I free ranged got into sanctuary

02:00:39 Snow

Renee
Sleep? What's this magical term called sleep?

01:57:48 Rook

I love the otso base so much

01:57:37 Rook

i need my wolves to stop giving me cute pups if they don't have boosts </3
-WP Click-

lovrenee

01:56:17 renee

@Snow
I'm currently procrastinating sleep lol

01:53:07 Snow

Renee
That's good to hear, I'm doing fine right now. Currently I'm procrastinating my profile pcture like I have been doing for a month.

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July 6, 2018 02:35 AM

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Just trying out some semi-realistic fur practice

Critiques on lighting, blending, etc. are greatly appreciated. If you have suggestions on how to make it look more realistic, that's also greatly appreciated

https://s33.postimg.cc/6dgalc133/Fur_Practice.png

July 7, 2018 05:36 PM

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So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!

Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows

I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color

Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

July 7, 2018 05:51 PM

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Dragon's Fire said:
So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

I agree with both! For fur, I personally think that the most important thing is edge variation. Have very stark contrast as well, as right now, you have a lot of softer edges.

For color, instead of shading with black and white, try changing your hue variation! For wolves with white fur, try blue-tinted gray, cream, anything. For wolves with cream fur, try shading with a reddish-brown. Of course, these are only like two in a billion examples lol

Another thing I think is important with fur is fur direction. Look at real wolves and see how their fur grows in like ten different directions.

These are only my personal observations on drawing fur. I like what you have going so far, you can do it!

July 7, 2018 08:12 PM

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Honestly I have no critique but this is awesome.On a real animal I think the color would be a little more varied though but I under stand you might have not added it because of it being practice.

July 7, 2018 10:18 PM