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11:43:31

Are there any Jester or circus themed events? Kinda want circus decor

11:37:59 Stalking chat

Doodle,
It would be!
I can't wait eee

11:37:09

Yeah that

11:35:33 Cryptic | Crypt

Boost Guide: -WP Click-

11:33:31

I forget but there's a list of mutations somewhere if you click the info thing next to boosts

11:33:22 Stalking chat

Oh yeah 25 agility and 25 battle

11:32:57 Stalking chat

Dawn,
it gives 25 battle and I think, either 25 agility or 25 resolve!

11:32:12 Dawn

What does adaptive vitality boost mean?

Dare Devil Pack

11:31:34

Oh, cool! They were born this morning I've never had that before

11:31:28 Stalking chat

Dare,
which by the looks of it Foxy would be a great explorer :D

11:30:41

Dare
It has more health in battle

11:30:39 Stalking chat

Dare,
its a boost and it gives 50 more health!
it's really good if the wolf is a good explorer

11:30:36 He/They pronouns

Wild,
Yeah

11:29:37 Stalking chat

Doodle,
it would, but It'll take a while so I gotta hold on to my horses till he gets there lol

Dare Devil Pack

11:29:34

-WP Click-
On my 2 female pups, what does it mean divine heath

11:28:56 Juicy Arm Boy

Hi again sorry I poofed

11:27:02 He/They pronouns

Wild,
That would be super cool :3

11:26:33 Stalking chat

my ladies don't want to go into labor today.

11:25:29 Stalking chat

That'd be a HUGE achievement for me

11:24:50 Stalking chat

I wanna get him to #10 bred

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11:43:31

Are there any Jester or circus themed events? Kinda want circus decor

11:37:59 Stalking chat

Doodle,
It would be!
I can't wait eee

11:37:09

Yeah that

11:35:33 Cryptic | Crypt

Boost Guide: -WP Click-

11:33:31

I forget but there's a list of mutations somewhere if you click the info thing next to boosts

11:33:22 Stalking chat

Oh yeah 25 agility and 25 battle

11:32:57 Stalking chat

Dawn,
it gives 25 battle and I think, either 25 agility or 25 resolve!

11:32:12 Dawn

What does adaptive vitality boost mean?

Dare Devil Pack

11:31:34

Oh, cool! They were born this morning I've never had that before

11:31:28 Stalking chat

Dare,
which by the looks of it Foxy would be a great explorer :D

11:30:41

Dare
It has more health in battle

11:30:39 Stalking chat

Dare,
its a boost and it gives 50 more health!
it's really good if the wolf is a good explorer

11:30:36 He/They pronouns

Wild,
Yeah

11:29:37 Stalking chat

Doodle,
it would, but It'll take a while so I gotta hold on to my horses till he gets there lol

Dare Devil Pack

11:29:34

-WP Click-
On my 2 female pups, what does it mean divine heath

11:28:56 Juicy Arm Boy

Hi again sorry I poofed

11:27:02 He/They pronouns

Wild,
That would be super cool :3

11:26:33 Stalking chat

my ladies don't want to go into labor today.

11:25:29 Stalking chat

That'd be a HUGE achievement for me

11:24:50 Stalking chat

I wanna get him to #10 bred

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

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Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

#2

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM

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Thanks every for the critique

Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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