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11:14:55 Minced Meat In A Can

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Mm, sleep sounds so good right now, but I have to finish this thing for work unfortunately.
That sounds nice ^^

11:13:04 Altar 🦌

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Im good! :D I get to see my partner in dough tomorrow,,, Im sleeping real soon though lol*

*as in like, now LMAO

11:12:00 Minced Meat In A Can

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Mhm ^^
How are you? If you have time to chat.

11:11:00 Altar 🦌

OwO thank you spam

11:10:14

I knead you. 🍞 Let’s grow mold together…

11:10:09 Minced Meat In A Can

OwO

11:08:22 Altar 🦌

🍞

11:07:53 Altar 🦌

I loaf you :]

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10:57:43 Juicy Arm Boy

Cloud
Any fun plane for the weekend ?

10:57:34 Juicy Arm Boy

Cloud
Okay :D
Thats good <3 im well :3 drawing a little bit right now lol

10:57:05 Kros

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RP anybody?

10:56:28 Kneecap stealer

14/250 eggs

10:55:39 ezra, he/him

vul-
wow, gross! i should try that some time lol

10:54:55 Pixie, Vul | ♈

The amount of lint and dog hair I just dug out of my charger port on my phone is disgusting. No wonder it had such a hard time staying plugged in

10:53:24 cloud (he/they)

and im good how about you

10:53:13 cloud (he/they)

uncle

im a trans male so i would be your nephew i am ocean and juno's son

10:51:00 Juicy Arm Boy

Cloud
Are you my neice or nephew :>
Anyways, how are youu ?

10:50:43 Kneecap stealer

It's border spring petals #2 the pink pansy tail and leg wraps as well as ear flower

10:49:10 ezra, he/him

man why does the donkey in a vest do So Much Damage

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11:14:55 Minced Meat In A Can

Collar
Mm, sleep sounds so good right now, but I have to finish this thing for work unfortunately.
That sounds nice ^^

11:13:04 Altar 🦌

Spam
Im good! :D I get to see my partner in dough tomorrow,,, Im sleeping real soon though lol*

*as in like, now LMAO

11:12:00 Minced Meat In A Can

Collar
Mhm ^^
How are you? If you have time to chat.

11:11:00 Altar 🦌

OwO thank you spam

11:10:14

I knead you. 🍞 Let’s grow mold together…

11:10:09 Minced Meat In A Can

OwO

11:08:22 Altar 🦌

🍞

11:07:53 Altar 🦌

I loaf you :]

11:01:19 Juicy Arm Boy

Plans*

10:57:43 Juicy Arm Boy

Cloud
Any fun plane for the weekend ?

10:57:34 Juicy Arm Boy

Cloud
Okay :D
Thats good <3 im well :3 drawing a little bit right now lol

10:57:05 Kros

-WP Click-

RP anybody?

10:56:28 Kneecap stealer

14/250 eggs

10:55:39 ezra, he/him

vul-
wow, gross! i should try that some time lol

10:54:55 Pixie, Vul | ♈

The amount of lint and dog hair I just dug out of my charger port on my phone is disgusting. No wonder it had such a hard time staying plugged in

10:53:24 cloud (he/they)

and im good how about you

10:53:13 cloud (he/they)

uncle

im a trans male so i would be your nephew i am ocean and juno's son

10:51:00 Juicy Arm Boy

Cloud
Are you my neice or nephew :>
Anyways, how are youu ?

10:50:43 Kneecap stealer

It's border spring petals #2 the pink pansy tail and leg wraps as well as ear flower

10:49:10 ezra, he/him

man why does the donkey in a vest do So Much Damage

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April 16, 2018 09:07 PM

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Here's the image

https://s14.postimg.cc/4h7dmgk29/Random_Galaxy.png

For some reason, something's been really bothering me about this picture and I can't seem to figure out what.

All critiques are appreciated, or just tell me what you wish was changed

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 09:12 PM

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Maybe more stars? We don't really see them

Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

April 16, 2018 09:37 PM

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DarkCloudClan said:
Maybe more stars? We don't really see them
Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

Alright, lemme spam the stars and update the picture XD

Edit: UPDATED

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 11:31 PM

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Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

April 16, 2018 11:53 PM

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a m b e r said:
Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

XD Thanks, let me update it again

April 16, 2018 11:55 PM

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I really like it! Possibly a couple other colors blended? Lighter blues and brighter pinks maybe. Just a subtle change.

April 17, 2018 12:48 AM

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Maybe if you make it a bit lighter?

April 17, 2018 01:48 AM

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I love It! I don't know much about art, but the purple cloud/nebula looks a little on the denser side.

Still, it's really beautiful! :D

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