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 EvergreenHills
05:07:53 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
Oop hi bye loll
Have a great day :D
 EvergreenHills
05:07:36 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
Is he okay o.o I haven't watched slime in so long lol
 Eye of Eternity
05:07:33 tern | they/he
eer
im alright :3 im about to leave actually :'3
so,,,, hi bye see ya :'3
 Eye of Eternity
05:06:50 tern | they/he
also this terrifies me,,, glad to know that's what he had planned with pointcrow but oh boy -Click-
look outside is on that list and that was an 18 hour stream
 EvergreenHills
05:06:47 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
How are ya?
 EvergreenHills
05:06:22 Juicy Arm Boy
The only reason I started working on anatomy is because my dad randomly handed me an old drawing book and its from the 1920s 0w0 super epic book though
 Eye of Eternity
05:05:58 tern | they/he
eer
ohhh it is :00
you have!! we love to see it :3
 Jester
05:05:38 
Okay thank you
 EvergreenHills
05:05:06 Juicy Arm Boy
Jester
I think who makes the kill
 Jester
05:04:43 
is exp based on who makes the kill or is it shared?
 EvergreenHills
05:04:22 Juicy Arm Boy
I wish I got braces when I was a kid because this sucks
 Wild Runners
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Ever,
Okay >:D
 EvergreenHills
05:03:17 Juicy Arm Boy
Wild
Yes.
 EvergreenHills
05:03:08 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
Awhhh thank youuu <3 the finished one is my oc Flame hehe.
I think ive really improved over the months aha
 Wild Runners
05:02:34 Stalking chat
should I mass breed my wolves again?
 Eye of Eternity
05:01:23 tern | they/he
eer
oooh thats so cool :000 the finished kitty on the left looks epic
 Pink Guys
04:59:45 Evergreenhills
These assholes are giving me no pups
 SouthernScorpion
04:57:03 Scorpion
must have alll easter backgrounds
 Andypaws
04:56:40 Andy/Kait [he/they]
Finally have some lore established for my new OC
 EvergreenHills
04:56:37 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
Dear lord </3

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 EvergreenHills
05:07:53 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
Oop hi bye loll
Have a great day :D
 EvergreenHills
05:07:36 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
Is he okay o.o I haven't watched slime in so long lol
 Eye of Eternity
05:07:33 tern | they/he
eer
im alright :3 im about to leave actually :'3
so,,,, hi bye see ya :'3
 Eye of Eternity
05:06:50 tern | they/he
also this terrifies me,,, glad to know that's what he had planned with pointcrow but oh boy -Click-
look outside is on that list and that was an 18 hour stream
 EvergreenHills
05:06:47 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
How are ya?
 EvergreenHills
05:06:22 Juicy Arm Boy
The only reason I started working on anatomy is because my dad randomly handed me an old drawing book and its from the 1920s 0w0 super epic book though
 Eye of Eternity
05:05:58 tern | they/he
eer
ohhh it is :00
you have!! we love to see it :3
 Jester
05:05:38 
Okay thank you
 EvergreenHills
05:05:06 Juicy Arm Boy
Jester
I think who makes the kill
 Jester
05:04:43 
is exp based on who makes the kill or is it shared?
 EvergreenHills
05:04:22 Juicy Arm Boy
I wish I got braces when I was a kid because this sucks
 Wild Runners
05:04:16 Stalking chat
Ever,
Okay >:D
 EvergreenHills
05:03:17 Juicy Arm Boy
Wild
Yes.
 EvergreenHills
05:03:08 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
Awhhh thank youuu <3 the finished one is my oc Flame hehe.
I think ive really improved over the months aha
 Wild Runners
05:02:34 Stalking chat
should I mass breed my wolves again?
 Eye of Eternity
05:01:23 tern | they/he
eer
oooh thats so cool :000 the finished kitty on the left looks epic
 Pink Guys
04:59:45 Evergreenhills
These assholes are giving me no pups
 SouthernScorpion
04:57:03 Scorpion
must have alll easter backgrounds
 Andypaws
04:56:40 Andy/Kait [he/they]
Finally have some lore established for my new OC
 EvergreenHills
04:56:37 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
Dear lord </3




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Critique me!May 15, 2022 07:29 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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I have no clue what I'm doing. Gallery Link

A few hours ago I was bored and decided to become an artist with no previous experience. With that being said this is my attempt to draw an OC of mine and I would like feedback. The anatomy seems a bit funky, he is supposed to be a wolf. I also colored him. For those of you that want to, you can go over and red line stuff so I can see what to fix! If you have tips on blending and colors that would be appreciated as well. I draw using Adobe Fresco, but if there are other good apps to use, let me know.

I'll link minor stuff and put the images for more important stuff so this isn't too long. Thanks :)

OC for reference(yes the oc is mine)

All image credit from here down belongs to me.

First red line

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First red line and outline

Altered final outline (I have no idea how I changed it this much)

IMG-1637.jpg

Colored final product

IMG-1636.jpg

Colored final product with OG lines behind it (for comparison, also I forgot to screenshot the red line that's under it. That one is in fact the original, the first red line linked at the top is the second red line I did in order to fix this. If that makes sense.)


Edited at May 17, 2022 07:49 PM by Ciao
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:21 PM


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hello! very cute character youve got there!!

ive been drawing canines/wolves in particular for going on 6(ish) years now id say, and ive learned a lot about drawing them over the years, so im here to offer a few tips (as well as some blue lines for future reference)!

so canine anatomy is very hard to explain, but the way i improved is by studying the canine body by tracing over actual photos of wolves i found online. ive found simplifying their bodies and more specifically their limbs into simple shapes and refinining from there helps a ton for anatomy improvement!

ive bluelined over your image and focused on a few different things, and ill list the links to view them below!

these are just a few quick base sketches i whipped up within like 5 minutes so theyre not perfect, but i hope theyre able to help a bit!

you have a lot of potential and im so excited to see your improvement!! if you need anything at all dont be scared to reach out to me and ill try my best to help! :)


Edited at May 15, 2022 08:26 PM by jaune
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:53 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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Thank you for the help! I can definitely see how I can improve the design more, and the blue line especially helped. For the anatomy I think tracing a real wolf would really help as well. I appreciate your critique and i'll definitely reach out if I have more questions :)
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:07 PM


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Ah- I might be of assistance here. Anatomy is quite off, /lighthearted
If I forget to add the redlines pm me I get busy lol
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:48 PM


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Thanks, i'll pm you^^

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