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06:09:26 Many moons, one me

Sleepy Kitty, oh then yeah, definitely gonna need her. I've got another I'm trying to get to DG just in case the one isn't enough. I'd prefer her dominance to stay where it is please. It took me the better part of month to get it where it is cause I kept getting distracted and putting cp everywhere else. And she does have other offspring so that's fine. I'll send something that should help with that quest

06:07:08 Kneecap stealer

Oh god that is a LOT of mass breeding

06:07:04 Sith Happens

So odd, dilemma is a ES and yet she's only ever thrown 2

06:06:56 Caesar

or do i leave it for tomorrow so puppy boom falls on weekend? <.<

06:06:20 Caesar

mass breeding my behated </3

34 done, 196 left T-T

06:05:50 Kneecap stealer

Ugh I need some apples to pop her

06:04:41 Kneecap stealer

Moon

If she throws blue tick pups don't be surprised if she ends up with -10 dominance and no offspring

06:03:56 Kneecap stealer

Defeat 50 brown bears :'D

06:03:22 Kneecap stealer

No mela?

06:02:41 Many moons, one me

Oh you bred to soul fire? Nice, I bred him to Sapphire the other day and got pup 50. Keep in mind opal likes to throw blue tick pups like it's nothing, and that I do want her back before next WoW. What quest do you need her for?

06:01:55 TS, Speckles

Thank you Pink, but im good, I just rescue unwanted wolves ^^

06:01:25 Kneecap stealer

He got three pups from me, one is in auction you can bid on

05:59:41 TS, Speckles

He finally went after so many years respect

-WP Click-

05:59:02 Many moons, one me

I'll just buy 400 moves and hope swamp multiplies it... I keep getting quests for swamp anyway 😕.
I have a strong dislike for swamp. And gullin hates me

05:58:38 Kneecap stealer

Yay opal is bred :D

05:57:34 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

-WP Click- names pm me

05:56:49 Many moons, one me

Sleepy Kitty, that's ok. It happens to everyone at some point

05:55:21 Kneecap stealer

I never thought of that :')

05:55:21 Many moons, one me

Ah yes make open, proper sentance structure naturally

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06:09:26 Many moons, one me

Sleepy Kitty, oh then yeah, definitely gonna need her. I've got another I'm trying to get to DG just in case the one isn't enough. I'd prefer her dominance to stay where it is please. It took me the better part of month to get it where it is cause I kept getting distracted and putting cp everywhere else. And she does have other offspring so that's fine. I'll send something that should help with that quest

06:07:08 Kneecap stealer

Oh god that is a LOT of mass breeding

06:07:04 Sith Happens

So odd, dilemma is a ES and yet she's only ever thrown 2

06:06:56 Caesar

or do i leave it for tomorrow so puppy boom falls on weekend? <.<

06:06:20 Caesar

mass breeding my behated </3

34 done, 196 left T-T

06:05:50 Kneecap stealer

Ugh I need some apples to pop her

06:04:41 Kneecap stealer

Moon

If she throws blue tick pups don't be surprised if she ends up with -10 dominance and no offspring

06:03:56 Kneecap stealer

Defeat 50 brown bears :'D

06:03:22 Kneecap stealer

No mela?

06:02:41 Many moons, one me

Oh you bred to soul fire? Nice, I bred him to Sapphire the other day and got pup 50. Keep in mind opal likes to throw blue tick pups like it's nothing, and that I do want her back before next WoW. What quest do you need her for?

06:01:55 TS, Speckles

Thank you Pink, but im good, I just rescue unwanted wolves ^^

06:01:25 Kneecap stealer

He got three pups from me, one is in auction you can bid on

05:59:41 TS, Speckles

He finally went after so many years respect

-WP Click-

05:59:02 Many moons, one me

I'll just buy 400 moves and hope swamp multiplies it... I keep getting quests for swamp anyway 😕.
I have a strong dislike for swamp. And gullin hates me

05:58:38 Kneecap stealer

Yay opal is bred :D

05:57:34 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

-WP Click- names pm me

05:56:49 Many moons, one me

Sleepy Kitty, that's ok. It happens to everyone at some point

05:55:21 Kneecap stealer

I never thought of that :')

05:55:21 Many moons, one me

Ah yes make open, proper sentance structure naturally

05:54:36 Many moons, one me

Make open a new tab? (Source, I have 9 open all on wolfplay, and it helps me reference different things)

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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