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 Eye of Eternity
07:44:17 tern | they/he
bro my mom gave me instructions on what to do this morning and then she changed them and now i dont know what time im supposed to leave and she wont answer her phone </3
 Owlstar
07:43:16 tiger\Owl|she\her
Bye ima go for like 5 minutes then ima be back
 snake
07:42:54 
FlyingKitten - oH I didn't even realize until you said that :o

Owl - right it'd be crazy :D
 Owlstar
07:42:11 tiger\Owl|she\her
It doesn’t. Oh and hiiieeee Petri!
 TheFlyingKitten
07:41:39 Petri Dish/Dert
Sweet sassafras, it does not feel like Friday.
 Owlstar
07:40:51 tiger\Owl|she\her
I’m imagine that happening. XDD
 snake
07:38:33 
imagine logging on and packs online says 1 and the last chat message is four hours ago or somethin
I think it would be funny but also weird lmao
 Spinel Grotto
07:33:55 
Real!
 Winterfell
07:32:58 Winter
Spinel
Lmao i literally type stuff out then delete it because I constantly forget
 Spinel Grotto
07:32:01 
God the urge to mini-mod is debilitating
 Winterfell
07:31:39 Winter
Or even if mini modding was allowed my life would be so much more easier in this game xD
 Winterfell
07:30:33 Winter
Snake
Totally get that I just think a span if mods from maybe 3 Europe game time and 3 towards American game time would be so useful
 snake
07:29:52 
Spinel Grotto
yeah I wonder what a graph of activity times would look like for all players, probably spikes in the afternoon and evening game time :o
no I totally get what you're saying though, cause I feel like I'm being weird if I send like more that one report a year lol
 Owlstar
07:29:48 tiger\Owl|she\her
Yeah. He hates going outside for some reason and it took like 5 whole minutes to get him out there. He kept jumping out of the carrier
 Spinel Grotto
07:28:44 
Aw, poor kitty! Hope all goes well and he's not too upset :(
 Owlstar
07:28:25 tiger\Owl|she\her
Hiiieee eden
 Owlstar
07:28:09 tiger\Owl|she\her
I agree.

Totally irrelevant but my poor little moldy Oreo cat Harry is getting fixed today…no idea when he a coming back. ( I kinda wanna see him in a cone though. That would look so hilarious)
 Giftofeden
07:28:03 Eden/ Key/ TS
hiya all
 Spinel Grotto
07:26:21 
Snake
That's true! But at the same time, there's a period of time (6-8ish GT usually, I think) where there are like 6 mods online lol. Just would be nice if it could be spread out a bit more.
I do report sometimes, but it takes time and it gets tedious when there's so many people :')
 Owlstar
07:25:24 tiger\Owl|she\her
I have lots of life stuff but not usually in the mornings

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 Eye of Eternity
07:44:17 tern | they/he
bro my mom gave me instructions on what to do this morning and then she changed them and now i dont know what time im supposed to leave and she wont answer her phone </3
 Owlstar
07:43:16 tiger\Owl|she\her
Bye ima go for like 5 minutes then ima be back
 snake
07:42:54 
FlyingKitten - oH I didn't even realize until you said that :o

Owl - right it'd be crazy :D
 Owlstar
07:42:11 tiger\Owl|she\her
It doesn’t. Oh and hiiieeee Petri!
 TheFlyingKitten
07:41:39 Petri Dish/Dert
Sweet sassafras, it does not feel like Friday.
 Owlstar
07:40:51 tiger\Owl|she\her
I’m imagine that happening. XDD
 snake
07:38:33 
imagine logging on and packs online says 1 and the last chat message is four hours ago or somethin
I think it would be funny but also weird lmao
 Spinel Grotto
07:33:55 
Real!
 Winterfell
07:32:58 Winter
Spinel
Lmao i literally type stuff out then delete it because I constantly forget
 Spinel Grotto
07:32:01 
God the urge to mini-mod is debilitating
 Winterfell
07:31:39 Winter
Or even if mini modding was allowed my life would be so much more easier in this game xD
 Winterfell
07:30:33 Winter
Snake
Totally get that I just think a span if mods from maybe 3 Europe game time and 3 towards American game time would be so useful
 snake
07:29:52 
Spinel Grotto
yeah I wonder what a graph of activity times would look like for all players, probably spikes in the afternoon and evening game time :o
no I totally get what you're saying though, cause I feel like I'm being weird if I send like more that one report a year lol
 Owlstar
07:29:48 tiger\Owl|she\her
Yeah. He hates going outside for some reason and it took like 5 whole minutes to get him out there. He kept jumping out of the carrier
 Spinel Grotto
07:28:44 
Aw, poor kitty! Hope all goes well and he's not too upset :(
 Owlstar
07:28:25 tiger\Owl|she\her
Hiiieee eden
 Owlstar
07:28:09 tiger\Owl|she\her
I agree.

Totally irrelevant but my poor little moldy Oreo cat Harry is getting fixed today…no idea when he a coming back. ( I kinda wanna see him in a cone though. That would look so hilarious)
 Giftofeden
07:28:03 Eden/ Key/ TS
hiya all
 Spinel Grotto
07:26:21 
Snake
That's true! But at the same time, there's a period of time (6-8ish GT usually, I think) where there are like 6 mods online lol. Just would be nice if it could be spread out a bit more.
I do report sometimes, but it takes time and it gets tedious when there's so many people :')
 Owlstar
07:25:24 tiger\Owl|she\her
I have lots of life stuff but not usually in the mornings




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Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 12:41 PM


Kortez

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My art has been looking awful lately. I have drawn this character 3 times now, and each attempt looks worse than the last. I need constructive crit, I don't care how brutal you are about it, I won't be hurt.

Feel free to redline!

Attempt 1

Attempt 2

Attempt 3

All (c) 243831/ Me

I have figured it out uwuwu thank you



Edited at March 18, 2022 05:32 PM by Excisus
Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 02:48 PM


Former Pack

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ok so the last attempt looks great!
the head on this first one is good, but what are you trying to do on the body?
the second one looks good but the head is a bit big if its what you want then it looks good also

Edited at February 24, 2022 02:49 PM by LucifersWolves
Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 02:51 PM


Nezachii

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If you are alright with redlining and some tips (With the redline) I'll be up to help you? If not, that's fine. It's your artwork.
Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 02:52 PM


Kortez

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Please do

Nez.ity said:
If you are alright with redlining and some tips (With the redline) I'll be up to help you? If not, that's fine. It's your artwork.


Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 04:53 PM


Nezachii

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Doing attempt one because everything else looks lovely *^*. I do not draw canine, anymore--yes I used to dabble back in the //first joined// ages but hopefully, you can just y'know understand that ;). While I love how you decided to do three different ones, I feel like attempt one could have some touch to it-- in case you're feeling nice and give the commissioner something to stare at; not that you know have to. ANYWAYS!

You have that edgy style, where the fur sticks out the most- as I always say go big or go home-- your attempt one could be the " GO BIG" style;o. I love the side tongue and tight collar idea, so I decided to mimic( With your permission) the style and just went crazy with the fur( Pencil work can be MUCH easier when drawing fur, you should take advantage of this punk style because it's there for YOU to improve and grow, even if you are a chibi artist( Only seen your cheebs art).

In short terms, the eye details are the show and tell, usually, when I look at canine art my eyes land on the eyes, it's the first thing I want to see- the expression, the glare, the look. I know your look is more cartoonish which I can't do but hopefully, it's still helpful.

You can do whatever with this, I only did half the job because I got uncomfortable lol.

I'll slowly add more to this so I don't spam you because again, I'm no canine artist.

Redline: (c)Nezitystudio

Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 04:57 PM


Kortez

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I heavily appreciate your words and your redline! Thank you very much!
That's the thing..i don't want my art to be cartoony.. I'm aiming for a semi realistic style, but I'm clearly far from that

Edited at February 24, 2022 10:53 PM by Excisus

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