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Drinking coming up, warning. ~ Chapter Three Sunrise Serenity The city stirred in the soft hues of a summer sunrise, a delicate dance of pastel colors spreading across the sky. Aeliyx, his enigmatic aura illuminated by the early morning light, pondered the events of the previous night. An idea blossomed in his mind — a chance to extend a peaceful olive branch to Raedier amid the tranquil beauty of dawn. As they strolled through the waking city, Aeliyx turned to Raedier with a playful glint in his eyes. "Leto, how about we embrace the serenity of a summer sunrise together? I know a perfect spot where we can catch the first light and leave the shadows behind for a moment." Raedier, his gaze fixed on the horizon, arched an eyebrow. "And why would I be interested in that?" Aeliyx chuckled, the silver chains around his neck shimmering in the early light. "Consider it a gesture, a quiet apology for the chaos of the night. We make a decent team, and perhaps a tranquil morning will help heal any lingering shadows." The corners of Raedier's lips twitched, a subtle acknowledgment of the offer. "Fine, but no more unexpected tumbles." Aeliyx grinned, his eyes reflecting the soft hues of the sunrise. "No hills in sight this time, I promise." --- As the sun began its ascent, casting warm hues across the waking city, Aeliyx and Raedier found themselves at the entrance of a cozy bar tucked away in a quiet corner. The air was filled with the promise of a laid-back morning, a stark contrast to the energetic pulse of the night before. Aeliyx, dressed in a relaxed ensemble that mirrored the casual ambiance of the morning, gestured toward the entrance. "How about we trade the tranquility of dawn for the ease of a summer morning at this bar? It's a different kind of serenity, but I promise it has its charm." Raedier, clad in comfortable attire that hinted at the casual atmosphere within, raised an eyebrow. "This is your idea of a tranquil morning?" Aeliyx chuckled. "Trust me, Leto. There's a certain magic to be found in the unhurried pace of a quiet morning." As they stepped into the bar, the atmosphere embraced them in a gentle hum of conversations and the clinking of glasses. The bartender, recognizing Aeliyx, offered a friendly nod and began preparing their drinks. Aeliyx led Raedier to a cozy corner, where morning sunlight streamed through the windows. The aroma of freshly brewed coffee filled the air as they settled in. Aeliyx leaned in, his voice low. "See, Leto? Sometimes, serenity comes in the form of quiet conversations and the warmth of morning light." Raedier's eyes, usually guarded, softened with a hint of appreciation. As they immersed themselves in the calm ambiance of the bar, the morning unfolded with shared laughter and moments of easy camaraderie, the city's heartbeat merging with the unhurried rhythm of their morning retreat.
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Same here.. ~ Chapter Four Tipsy Confessions The night had cast its inky veil over the city, and the neon lights of a lively bar beckoned Aeliyx and Raedier. Aeliyx, dressed in a stylish yet slightly disheveled ensemble, suggested the place with a playful glint in his eyes. "Leto, my friend, tonight we celebrate camaraderie and the mysteries we share." The bar was aglow with the warmth of dim lights and lively chatter. Raedier, ever the vigilant presence, found himself reluctantly agreeing to a night out. As the evening unfolded, the clinking of glasses and the murmur of laughter enveloped them. Aeliyx, fueled by a little too much liquid courage, found himself in a state of uninhibited joy. He raised his glass in a toast, his silver chains glinting in the ambient light. "To new alliances and the unraveling of mysteries!" Raedier, a more restrained drinker, observed Aeliyx with a bemused expression. "Easy on the celebration, Elixar. We wouldn't want you revealing any mysteries you'd rather keep." But Aeliyx, buoyed by the spirits, was undeterred. He leaned in with a sly grin. "Oh, Leto, there are always layers to uncover. Tonight, let's revel in them!" As the night progressed, Aeliyx's inhibitions dissolved like sugar in warm liquor. Laughter bubbled freely, and he found himself sharing snippets of personal stories, each word a brushstroke revealing more of the canvas of his life. Raedier, despite his reservations, found a certain charm in Aeliyx's intoxicated confessions. He couldn't help but be drawn to the genuine vulnerability beneath the playful exterior. As Aeliyx spoke, he caught Raedier's eye and offered a lopsided smile. "You know, Leto, you're the only one I've trusted with my secrets." Raedier raised an eyebrow, his own walls softening. "Secrets that don't involve hill-rolling, I hope?" Aeliyx's laughter echoed through the bar, drawing curious glances. "Not a hill in sight, my friend. Just the twists and turns of life." As the night wore on, the atmosphere grew hazier, both from the dim lights and the effect of the drinks. Aeliyx, now teetering on the edge of inebriation, decided it was the perfect moment for a daring move. He leaned in closer to Raedier, his voice a low whisper. "Leto, there's one mystery I'm yet to solve. Why is it that your stoic demeanor hides such captivating eyes?" Raedier, caught off guard by the unexpected flirtation, arched an eyebrow. "Smooth, Elixar. Is this the part where you woo me with your intoxication?" Aeliyx, undeterred, flashed a mischievous smile. "Who said I was intoxicated? Perhaps I'm just appreciating the finer details of the night." The banter between them took on a subtle romantic undertone, like the soft notes of a jazz melody lingering in the air. The bar, with its dim lights and the clinking of glasses, became a backdrop to a dance of emotions. As the night reached its zenith, Raedier found himself guiding Aeliyx, who was now more than a bit tipsy, toward the exit. Aeliyx, leaning on Raedier for support, looked up with a twinkle in his eyes. "Leto, my vigilant guardian, you're like the moonlight guiding me through the shadows." Raedier couldn't help but crack a smile at the drunken poeticism. "I suppose I'm honored to be your moonlight, Elixar."
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Yes .. JAZZ don't mind me I'm a little ( VERY) sleep deprived and we should all go to bed, right shayshay? Break time !! Chopchop, go eat something because I know you probably forgot to eat since dinner and its been hours :)
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I can't eat, no food until 8am :') I'll be writing all day by the way, there's nothing better for me to do.. So even if you go offline I'll be here all day just writing and writing.. progressively getting more urge to pass out <3 ~ Chapter Five Midnight Serenade The night air clung to Aeliyx like a velvet shroud, and the city's pulse seemed to synchronize with the rhythm of his steps. Raedier, a stoic silhouette beside him, guided the slightly inebriated Aeliyx through the winding streets toward his residence. The neon lights flickered overhead, casting ephemeral shadows on the cobblestone pavement. Aeliyx, a bit more than tipsy, grinned up at Raedier. "You know, Leto, I've never realized how magnificent the stars are. Like tiny diamonds in the sky, winking at us." Raedier, maintaining his composure, nodded in agreement. "Yes, they are quite...sparkling." As they continued their journey, Aeliyx's stride took on a playful sway. He nudged Raedier with an elbow. "You're like a shadow, Leto. Always there, silently watching, like a guardian from the night." Raedier couldn't suppress a small smirk. "A shadow, am I? Perhaps it's fitting." Aeliyx halted abruptly, his finger pointed dramatically toward the night sky. "And the moon, Leto! You're my moon. Guiding me through the mysteries and...and stuff." Raedier couldn't help but chuckle at Aeliyx's drunken eloquence. "That's poetic, Elixar. But I think we should keep moving." Aeliyx resumed his meandering stroll, humming a tune only he seemed to hear. "I once heard that humming is like the heart's way of singing. Did you know that, Leto? We should all sing more." Raedier raised an eyebrow, a hint of amusement playing on his lips. "Perhaps, but for now, let's focus on getting you home." As they approached Aeliyx's residence, Aeliyx turned to Raedier with a dramatic flourish. "Ah, Leto, my valiant escort! You've brought me to the gates of my fortress. I am forever indebted to you." Raedier inclined his head. "It's not a fortress, but you're welcome." Aeliyx fumbled with his keys, his fingers proving less nimble than usual. "You know, Leto, you're like my secret... my secret guardian. Protecting me from the unknown." Raedier took the keys gently from Aeliyx's hands, unlocking the door. "It's what I do, Elixar. Now, let's get you inside." As they entered, Aeliyx dramatically collapsed onto a couch, his expression one of faux exhaustion. "Leto, my moonlight, my guardian... you've saved me from the treacherous journey of the night." Raedier couldn't suppress a smile at Aeliyx's theatrical display. "It was my pleasure, Elixar." Aeliyx patted the seat beside him, his words slurring slightly. "Join me, Leto, in the sanctum of my fortress. Share a moment with me under the midnight sky." Raedier, unable to resist the invitation, sat down beside Aeliyx. The room, dimly lit by a solitary lamp, took on an intimate ambiance. Aeliyx, still grinning, leaned closer to Raedier. "You know, Leto, I've never met someone so mysterious yet so captivating. What are you hiding behind those green eyes?" Raedier's gaze softened, a flicker of vulnerability crossing his features. "We all have our secrets, Elixar." Aeliyx, undeterred by the response, inched even closer. "But what if I want to unravel those secrets, Leto? What if I want to be the one who discovers the mysteries behind your stoic facade?" Raedier, his composure momentarily shaken, chuckled. "Perhaps some mysteries are meant to stay hidden." Aeliyx, his eyes gleaming with a mix of mischief and something deeper, whispered, "Maybe, but I'm willing to take that chance."
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I'll write one more chapter of this and then around 9-10AM I'll begin writing again. ~ Chapter Six Whiskey Whimsy The night stretched on, the moon weaving its silver strands through the fabric of the sky. Inside Aeliyx's modest residence, the air hummed with the afterglow of the night's revelry. Bottles of various spirits adorned a makeshift bar, each imbued with the potential for liquid mischief. Aeliyx, now comfortably sprawled on his couch with a mischievous grin, clutched a half-empty whiskey bottle. "Leto, my dear friend, have I ever told you about the time I danced with a streetlamp and mistook it for a partner?" Raedier, standing by the makeshift bar, raised an eyebrow. "You haven't, but I'm intrigued." Aeliyx chuckled, his words now a slurred serenade. "Ah, it was a dance for the ages! The streetlamp twirled me around, and we waltzed through the night. It was a magical affair, I assure you." Raedier poured himself a modest measure of whiskey, eyeing Aeliyx with a bemused expression. "You certainly have a unique way of appreciating the night, Elixar." Aeliyx winked, his silver chains jingling with each exaggerated gesture. "Life's too short for ordinary dances, Leto. You should try it sometime!" Raedier joined Aeliyx on the couch, his expression a blend of amusement and resignation. "I'll keep that in mind for the next streetlamp encounter." As the night deepened, so did Aeliyx's inebriation. He gestured dramatically with his bottle, a tipsy maestro orchestrating a symphony of words. "Leto, my esteemed companion, have you ever wondered what clouds taste like? I bet they're like fluffy marshmallows." Raedier, sipping his whiskey, couldn't help but smirk. "I can't say I've pondered the flavor of clouds, Elixar." Aeliyx leaned closer, his voice dropping to a conspiratorial whisper. "I've also considered moonlight popsicles. Wouldn't that be a delightful treat?" Raedier chuckled, his eyes reflecting the whiskey-induced whimsy. "You have a vivid imagination, Elixar." Aeliyx's laughter echoed through the room, a melody of mirth and intoxication. "Imagination is the elixir of life, my friend. It turns ordinary moments into extraordinary adventures." As the night meandered into the early hours, Aeliyx, now a beacon of merriment, clinked his bottle against Raedier's glass. "To moonlight popsicles and streetlamp waltzes! May the night never lose its magic." Raedier raised his glass in a silent toast, a fond smile tugging at the corners of his lips. "To extraordinary adventures, then."
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Yes, your romance is getting so much better :) love it I should make you practice more often.. I may go to bed soon. I'm starting to forget what I'm writig. AS I'm writing it :)
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Last chapter of the morning/night ~ Chapter Seven Tipsy Tango The night, now a merry accomplice to the duo's whimsy, continued its silent dance. Aeliyx, still clutching the whiskey bottle like a prized possession, found himself a kindred spirit in Raedier. The makeshift bar had become a playground for liquid adventures, each bottle harboring the promise of laughter and camaraderie. Raedier, usually the embodiment of stoic restraint, embraced the spirited chaos of the night. His movements, though still graceful, now carried a playful sway. He clinked his glass against Aeliyx's with a conspiratorial gleam in his eye. "To moonlight popsicles and streetlamp waltzes!" Aeliyx burst into laughter, his words a tipsy serenade. "Ah, Leto, my dancing companion! Tonight, the streets are our ballroom, and the stars our audience." Raedier, mimicking Aeliyx's exaggerated gestures, raised an imaginary partner in a mock dance. "Shall we dazzle them with our tipsy tango?" Aeliyx, his silver chains jingling in approval, twirled alongside Raedier in the imaginary dance. "Let the tango of the intoxicated commence!" The room filled with their laughter, the tipsy tango a testament to the uncharted territories of their camaraderie. The bottles on the makeshift bar became witnesses to their uninhibited revelry, each sip a step in the tipsy dance. As the night deepened, so did the haze of inebriation. Aeliyx, now holding a bottle of rum, proposed a toast. "To liquid courage and the courage to be delightfully absurd!" Raedier, his words starting to slur, responded with a hearty laugh. "To absurdity and the beauty it brings!" The duo, now seated on the couch, engaged in a spirited debate about the most peculiar flavors they could imagine. Aeliyx, with a mischievous glint in his eye, suggested, "How about bacon-flavored ice cream? A culinary masterpiece!" Raedier, leaning back with a chuckle, countered, "I'm thinking pickles dipped in chocolate. A delicacy for the daring." Their banter, a tapestry of laughter and inventive ideas, resonated through the room. The city outside, oblivious to the whimsical symphony within, continued its nocturnal routine. Aeliyx, now holding a bottle of wine, raised an eyebrow at Raedier. "Let's play a game, my friend! Truth or tipsy tales?" Raedier, his speech now a delightful muddle, agreed with a grin. "I'm game, Elixar. Lay it on me." The game unfolded, revealing snippets of their lives and the tipsy tales that emerged from the depths of their imagination. The room, adorned with the remnants of their liquid escapades, echoed with laughter and shared confessions.
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Uhm.. so.. tried writing first person for Raedier.. Did I do okay? ^^" Venn gave me the suggestion in chat to format it so it isn't just a wall of text which I agree with so I'm gonna try putting a bit more effort into it and yknow.. ~ Chapter Eighteen Mornings Echoing Silence The first rays of the morning sun filtered through the curtains, casting a soft glow on the hotel room. My eyes cracked open, and the remnants of a restless night clung to the edges of my consciousness. The room spun in a disorienting dance as I attempted to sit up, the vestiges of a haunting hangover making their presence known. With a groan, I pressed my palms to my temples, a futile attempt to quell the throbbing ache. The events of the previous night blurred together, a disconcerting haze that refused to dissipate. The shadows, once silent observers, now whispered fragments of a tale I struggled to piece together. As I gingerly swung my legs over the side of the bed, the floor beneath me seemed to sway. The room, an echoing chamber of memories and unanswered questions, became my solitary haven—a place where the shadows clung to the corners, concealing the secrets I dared not confront. The scent of stale alcohol hung in the air, a haunting reminder of shared toasts and the ambiguous allure of the night. I forced myself to stand, wincing at the protest of muscles that bore the weight of more than just a hangover. The bathroom mirror reflected a disheveled version of myself—a face marked by the imprints of a night that had unraveled in shadows. With a resigned sigh, I splashed cold water on my face, a feeble attempt to wash away the lingering traces of the night's descent. Steeling myself, I made my way to the small kitchenette. The aroma of coffee beans teased my senses, a beacon of familiarity in the midst of the enigmatic storm. I set the coffee maker to work, the rhythmic hum a lullaby to my aching senses. As I moved about the kitchen, the events of the night seemed to play in fractured fragments. Aeliyx's presence lingered in the recesses of my thoughts, a specter that defied both clarity and definition. The glass, now an artifact of uncertainty, sat on the table—a silent witness to a night that defied the boundaries of shadows. The sizzle of eggs in a pan, the comforting aroma of breakfast slowly taking shape, became a grounding force amid the disarray. I couldn't shake the sense of disquiet that clung to me, but the routine of preparing breakfast offered a semblance of normalcy—a fleeting respite in the wake of unresolved mysteries. As the eggs cooked, I stared out of the window, my gaze drawn to the world beyond the hotel room. The city, awakening to the rhythms of a new day, seemed to echo with a quietude that mirrored the enigma within. The creak of the door signaled my return to the present. Aeliyx stood in the doorway, the morning light casting a halo around him. His gaze, a mosaic of unreadable emotions, met mine, and for a moment, the weight of unspoken truths hung in the air. "Morning," he said, a flicker of a smile tugging at the corners of his lips. "Morning," I replied, the word carrying the weight of a night we both chose to leave unspoken. As we sat down to breakfast, the echoes of the morning seemed to reverberate in the silence between us. The coffee, a bittersweet elixir, couldn't dispel the lingering shadows, and the enigma that bound us persisted—an unresolved chord in the symphony of a city waking up to the secrets concealed within its heart. Edited at December 18, 2023 11:45 PM by Salem
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0-0 Maybe if I put it to the side it'll actually use the spaces I put to make it cleaner >.> Thing is I really want it to be in the middle like how it is, eugh
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