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Lightbringer
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:D I absolutely love your writing! Oh my gosh, I love that!
Just to be sure for when I start a reply, Alyosha did not make the run for it yet, right? Or did he?
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Awe thank you! I thought it was kind of trash compared to my last reply. >.< I'm still trying to figure out how to write action scenes like that lol Nah he hasn't ran yet lol
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Oh you're welcome! I thought it was great, I enjoy your style of writing. And action scenes are hard to do! I'm still trying to figure out them. Okay! Good to know.
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Honestly, I'm trying to figure out what creature would be cooler, to have as a companion of Agni's past life. I'm torn between a dragon, a Great Wolf (species from my fantasy world), or a flesh eating horse (inspired from the Mares of Diomedes in Greek mythlogy). All of them have great potiental in the RP.
It'd be interesting if a clue to who Agni is if he makes friends with a wolf, because no one else had been known to run with a pack of giant wolves. Or if he tames one of the nortoriously vicious carnivorous horses, and that is taken as a hint because in the past (with that option) a flesh eating horse allowed him to be near without trying to tear out his throat, at the very least. And of course, the dragon would be cool as well, and would be a very interesting thing too.
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Oh dang thats a tough choice. Hmm I think the dragon is the coolest in all honesty, but the flesh eating horse sounds pretty cool as well. As it's not a common species I've ever heard of, but you know choice is yours. :)
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Yeah, hm. Honestly, if I could I would have somehow done all three options, but I'm trying to avoid making Agni overpowered, so I know I have to restrain myself. While the wolves are cool, I'm more drawn to the dragon or flesh eating horse.
I could technically do both, I can think of several ideas that would allow for those two without anything crazy going on. Maybe have it so that Agni like, helps one and it decides to tag along with him for a bit, because of that. And the dragon would come in with a larger role (most likely) in the second arc.
Besides, I'd like to see how would Alyosha react to the carnivorous horse.
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Yeah the wolves are def cool too! Honestly, I don't mind Agni having two power creatures at his side. I feel like the with his legendary background it would make sense. And maybe later on we could create a war of some kind, where Agni plays a big role, like he could be older by then, and they know more about his background? Idk tho up to you :) Lol probably lose his mind XD Edited at March 11, 2023 01:50 AM by Ylva
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Ooo a war sounds cool! Yeah, that sounds good. Alright, so Agni's getting two creatures; maybe the horse comes in shortly after Agni and Alyosha are in the same home, and the kid hears something while trying to sleep, and sneaks out and finds the horse injured or in a trap of some sort. And maybe he tries to keep it a secret because he isn't sure how Alyosha would react at that point, but something happens that makes the horse come to his defense? Or Alyosha just comes across it shortly after? Maybe?
:) Oh most definitely.
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Right! Lol sorry about my grammar, I'm so tired and fighting sleep XD That sounds fine to me. Hm maybe Alyosha can stumble upon the horse? Like maybe the horse didn't listen to Agni and came out of it's hiding spot or something?
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