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Hah, post looks fun! You can feel his confusion and slight terror. Which, to be fair, is what I would be feeling, except it'd be more terror and less confusion. Great post either way, man. |
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@TIAPN
Thank you so much! I feel like I have trouble getting character's emotions across in writing, so being told that a reader can feel the main emotions going on means a lot to me.
And yeah, same, I'd be feel a lot more terror in that situation. |
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Aww don't worry! You did an amazing job with the emotions, Wayne!! I am still cracking up over the fact that Emery is more excited about the whole dead rising thing than Micheal, the guy who can literally speak to any dead person he likes- |
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Determined_Wolf said:
Aww don't worry! You did an amazing job with the emotions, Wayne!! I am still cracking up over the fact that Emery is more excited about the whole dead rising thing than Micheal, the guy who can literally speak to any dead person he likes-
OH I didn't even realize that, totally unintentional but yes, that is very funny. Out of all the people, you'd think that the person who can talk to dead people would be most excited by the dead rising, than someone totally unrelated to that ability. |
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I can totally see Emery dragging Micheal to a house full of souls with the excitement of a kid in a candy store and just pointing to the ghosts while begging Micheal to translate what they're saying. |
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Determined_Wolf said:
I can totally see Emery dragging Micheal to a house full of souls with the excitement of a kid in a candy store and just pointing to the ghosts while begging Micheal to translate what they're saying.
Ohhh I never thought of that, that would totally happen though. I can see it, that would be so funny. |
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Hey maybe that's how Emery makes sure he is one of the pillars! It's a win-win too because Micheal shows off his abilities and Emery gets to do paranormal things! |
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Determined_Wolf said:
Hey maybe that's how Emery makes sure he is one of the pillars! It's a win-win too because Micheal shows off his abilities and Emery gets to do paranormal things!
That just cracked me up when I read that, something about how that was phrased just struck me as quite funny.
I mean, true lol. Other than Michael's teleporting? Or would Emery insist on using Michael as a living spirit translator so they could get in on the paranormal stuff? |
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Emery would insist on Michael being their human-sized spirit box and not even care about the whole teleporting thing. I honestly think Emery would forget about his ability to teleport and just think he has the ability to talk to ghosts. |
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@Determined_Wolf
I love that, I love the idea of Emery just...forgetting Michael's teleporting ability.
Do you think they would be startled if Michael teleported, because they forgot about that? |
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