Wolf Play : Somethings amiss here

11:14:57 Will

@Nux

That's so valid
I've never made it homemade
But I have bought premade and boiled them myself to make my own drinks

Forest Dwelling

11:14:43 I am on Wolflocke ok

Votes?
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11:13:54 You're just yellow

Will

Oh, that's awful. I'm going to be honest, I don't like boba at all unless it's homemade. Factories can't make them to my brain's liking.

11:09:52 Will

@Nux

For real ToT
I want to be happy that they're squishy- because I hate when boba is too firm
But the size ruins it lmao

teddy

11:06:51 its yellow

i've only eaten caviar once, but roe is very common to eat in sweden

~♥Nux♥~

11:04:18 You're just yellow

Will

I hate when sensories collide

11:03:25 Will

@Seeker

Except it isn't
I *love* caviar. Haven't had it in years, but I can do caviar, probably because they're firm and pop?

But the tiny boba are squishy ToT

Eastern_Scree

11:03:04

It really is sad. I work in a vet hospital and I've had more huskies, Dalmatians, and chihuahuas try and take my face off than anything else, but I've never seen any legislation about them.

Sherwood Wolves

11:01:30

I bred my male wolf to another members wolf and I think it died :Â’)
DidnÂ’t even think that was possible

~ Seeker Hive ~

11:01:25 Soundwave

will

it's like eating caviar

10:56:09 Will

Ok update

I *think* that I hate tiny boba
They're the perfect texture
but also having so many in your mouth is the worst texture ever

Salem

10:52:58 Floating pencil

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10:51:20 Will

With everything going on in the US

I highly doubt a federal law relating to dog breeds is gonna come out :'D

Dont Fear The Reaper

10:50:12 Reaper / Grim

I hate to leave in the middle of the discussion, but I have to start heading to my next class, I'm sorry guys

~♥Nux♥~

10:49:03 You're just yellow

Reaper

Yeah, so blaming a human for the dog being aggressive is like blaming a human's mistakes on mommy issues. Sure, may be the case sometimes, but not every time.

10:48:28 Will

Today I learned that tiny boba pearls exist...
I cannot tell how I feel about them

Purgatory

10:47:16 Purgatorio/Purge

It's actually not being enforced, the bill won't pass. Americans don't give a shit what type of dog you have. This is a rumor going around social media for some reason. Not truth. The law actually restricts the ban on breeds like pitbulls, german shepherd, etc

Dont Fear The Reaper

10:47:02 Reaper / Grim

Nux
Yeah, that's how it is with all animals on the planet

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June 7, 2022 02:05 PM

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Idk if it's the colors or the lines or whatever but some thing is wrong here. Can y'all help me out?

She's based on a lionfish

June 7, 2022 02:10 PM

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She sorta looks scary

June 7, 2022 02:22 PM

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maybe it's how her tail isn't lined but her body is? though I'm not sure if that's because of your artstyle since I've never seen your art before ^^;

though you can check if it's an anatomy issue by flipping the canvas :D

looking good btw! i like the concept :>

June 7, 2022 02:25 PM

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I was trying to go for a cute but creepy vibe, not sure how well that came across lol

awooo said:

She sorta looks scary

June 7, 2022 02:25 PM

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Yeah, I tend to leave lining till last cause I hate doing it and while I was doing it I realized I didn't like something

swiftystarss said:

maybe it's how her tail isn't lined but her body is? though I'm not sure if that's because of your artstyle since I've never seen your art before ^^;

though you can check if it's an anatomy issue by flipping the canvas :D

looking good btw! i like the concept :>

Edited at June 7, 2022 02:26 PM by Flower Field

June 7, 2022 03:48 PM

Cinnabar Banks Pack

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Maybe it's that dip in the tail? Looks a bit too sharp. Could also be the facial features? Seems a bit off, compared ta the rest of the art.

Edited at June 7, 2022 03:55 PM by Cinnabar Banks Pack

June 7, 2022 03:49 PM

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I find her eyes unsettling, haha they're just so different than the art style. The only way I could explain it is if you put googly eyes over a face.

June 7, 2022 03:50 PM

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I think the proportion of the head is slightly off? Especially in comparison to the size of their arms...

Also it might be that there isn't much of a chin, which sort of breaks up a lot of the sharper lines that you have!

I really like the premise / concept, and it looks good, just not exactly proportional to the way a body looks! <3

June 7, 2022 04:32 PM

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Alright! Took some things into consideration and here's V2