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 Ormous
12:24:10 Zephyrus (he,Him)
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 Ormous
12:22:12 Zephyrus (he,Him)
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 Faulty Demons
12:19:47 Ollie, Gold
BJake
Alright! I'll see how it looks :)

Aurora
Could I see?
 Ishouldbeinschool
12:17:10 Sileas, he/they
anyone wanna rp or something? I'm not sure what topic or theme, but I'm pretty open! also I might have to leave frequently, classes :/
DM me!
 Ormous
12:15:47 Zephyrus (he,Him)
Hi Bjake

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 Hugs4Bugs
12:14:46 Bugs || Ed
although it doesn't really want to load for me, oooops
 Hugs4Bugs
12:14:20 Bugs || Ed
Here's the "example gallery" I have set up :')

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 BooJake
12:12:55 Don't call me BJ.
@WorkingPaws
If you could send me some of your pieces I could help with your prices? :3
 BooJake
12:12:23 Don't call me BJ.
@Ollie
I fucking love that so much, but my one piece of criticism, is I'm thinking maybe the legs should be a little bigger? If you know what I mean? :D
 Crescent Nightwalker
12:11:10 Aurora / Crezzie / L
@Faulty,
It looks even better than how I draw people! (I like how you added the wings!)
 Gothamm.
12:10:37 Batman.
Cheese.
 Hugs4Bugs
12:10:17 Bugs || Ed
Ollie
Ooo, I love it 0.0
 Hugs4Bugs
12:09:32 Bugs || Ed
I'm really unsure where to set prices at though haha
 Faulty Demons
12:09:20 Ollie, Gold
Thoughts and constructive critism?
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 Hugs4Bugs
12:09:08 Bugs || Ed
I could :')
 Hugs4Bugs
12:08:53 Bugs || Ed
I think I'm just going to keep trying to max out my 2 alphas and a few of my other favorites before saving up - maybe when they all die and I restart the pack
 BooJake
12:08:27 Don't call me BJ.
@WorkingPaws
Also, I've been meaning to ask, are you planning on setting up a commission shop by chance any time soon? >,>
 Ishouldbeinschool
12:08:06 Sileas, he/they
I'm so poor XD I gotta get some mush soon
 BooJake
12:07:50 Don't call me BJ.
@WorkingPaws
I probably would too, but because I don't play for the wolves, I'll just end up selling once I get to my goal of 5000 CP :3
 Hugs4Bugs
12:07:22 Bugs || Ed
impressivee

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Can I get some constructive criticism?October 30, 2020 10:28 AM


Dystopia

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On this boi, thinking about making a private species
also looking for priceing help, so if you'd put around what you'd pay for somthing like this that would be great
the wings are supposed to be that small, these are magic based creatures and their wings grown when they need to fly

Edited at October 30, 2020 02:41 PM by Fr3ak
Can I get some constructive criticism?October 30, 2020 10:28 AM


Dystopia

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All credit to me
Can I get some constructive criticism?October 30, 2020 10:37 AM


X-Marxs The Spot

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This would look like a really creative species! I'd definitely pay, like, 200-300 mush for one of these!
Can I get some constructive criticism?October 30, 2020 10:43 AM


Makato

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They be pretty. I'd pay somewhere around 500-1000
Can I get some constructive criticism?October 30, 2020 11:12 AM


Adira

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I'd suggest making the wings a little larger unless you purposely made them small. :)
Other than that it looks great! I'd pay around 500 or so.
Can I get some constructive criticism?October 30, 2020 12:33 PM


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Adira said:
I'd suggest making the wings a little larger unless you purposely made them small. :)
Other than that it looks great! I'd pay around 500 or so.


Can I get some constructive criticism?October 30, 2020 01:55 PM


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I don't know if this helps or not but it looks like the antlers are sitting on top of the head instead of coming from it. Also 500 to 1000 for sure^^

Can I get some constructive criticism?October 30, 2020 02:18 PM


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Crescents said:

Adira said:
I'd suggest making the wings a little larger unless you purposely made them small. :)


I would pay like.... 200-500 mush for something like this
Can I get some constructive criticism?November 2, 2020 12:35 PM


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I would probably pay around 300-350 mush, I think. As for criticism, the feathers going down the front legs/elbows seem to be a little off. I don't know exactly what it is, but they don't seem to follow the form of the leg quite as they should. Otherwise it looks great!
Can I get some constructive criticism?November 2, 2020 12:35 PM


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THIS IS AWSOME!

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