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 starmutt
01:20:02 marsh | they/it
wow that wasnt so hard was it answering a question
 Floof
01:19:34 Floodgates
Hey Stygian ^-^
 Salem
01:19:11 Bell
Rev
Fair enough, fair enough
Winter usually sucks for me but this time around it seems to be okay. I don't really have the problem with the colour changes so I can't really speak on that ^^"
 Stygian Forest
01:18:27 
Floof!
 Revelry
01:18:15 Rev
Salem
I don't mind during spring/summer. But I like to only explore the jungle during winter, it's the only terrain that the color change doesn't bother my eyes
 ZEFHYR
01:17:39 
oh a pumpkin or corn
 starmutt
01:16:28 marsh | they/it
ok not helping lol should've just picked one
 Salem
01:16:21 Bell
Rev
I'd love that too :')
Selecting which terrain you want quests from would be great
All of my quests are in the forest currently
 ZEFHYR
01:15:54 
:) / ;)
 Revelry
01:15:32 Rev
I wish I could select a terrain to take quests in, I hate going o forest during winter
 Floof
01:15:24 Floodgates
Magnus,
I get that a lot xD aha
 ZEFHYR
01:15:05 
hm well that might shut me up then if i could buy them all
 OCCULTIST
01:13:40 Man Lover
It's only been like.. a day since the bug was reported. There's still a whole month left of the event, you'll be able to buy the decor soon
 Magnus Bane
01:13:11 Mag/Maggy
I keep reading floof as floor
 Floof
01:12:20 Floodgates
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 starmutt
01:11:43 marsh | they/it
answer the question ong
 Salem
01:11:32 Bell
Paws for 7up fridge?
-WP Click-
 ZEFHYR
01:11:12 
starmutt i cant fix it
 ZEFHYR
01:10:25 
good grief i have mushrooms i want to spend on this event. my mushrooms are hot to trot
 starmutt
01:10:02 marsh | they/it
which decor do you even want man

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Critique?June 17, 2018 01:25 PM


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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png
Critique?June 17, 2018 01:30 PM


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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!
Critique?June 17, 2018 01:31 PM


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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!
Critique?June 17, 2018 01:39 PM


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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png
Critique?June 17, 2018 01:54 PM


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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!
Critique?June 21, 2018 05:37 PM


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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!
Critique?June 22, 2018 11:30 PM


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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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