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04:50:30 ezra, he/him

honestly any phrase with the word "mushroom" in it sounds like a euphemism. see also "mushroom hole"

04:49:30

Thanks again :3

04:49:27 ezra, he/him

just thought about how it's easier to get mushrooms now but apples cost more of them. then realized this phenomenon would be called "mushroom inflation"

04:48:33 Stalking chat

Hurry,
I'd say the others aren't really worth it, so yeah

04:48:17

I guess you and Uma are fated nemesis

04:47:31

@Wild Runners I see, thank you

So besides Generals there are no other bounties that give such good rewards? Not even in some other terrains; I recently unlocked Jungle ^^

04:45:54 Stalking chat

Turn downed Uma's bounty but got it again..wow

04:45:22

Eve fled :"3 this is 2nd time in a row it happened, I am just missing the dreads qwq

04:45:08 Stalking chat

But it takes a while to sometimes get their quests from gullin

04:44:56 Stalking chat

Hurry,
The generals offer really good items or atleast to me.

04:44:05 tiger\Owl|she\her

Yo my girl is 81 hrs pregnant and she’s probably gonna pop when I am not on. Why do they always do this to me??

04:37:27

What are good Bounties to take?
I only saw a few so far and like Squirell and Deer one seem kind of bad, like a lot of searching for a pretty small reward? I searched 5+ levels before giving up on Squirrel one.
I had better luck with Lightbringer Liutenant and even if I did not reward seems worth it?

04:23:36 Kros

RP anybody? PM me!

04:20:06

-Click- cool?

04:17:03 Stalking chat

Rosethorn,
Oh okay!
Happy hunting :)

04:16:16

I figured out that I had to change the den display to list

04:13:49 Stalking chat

RoseThorn,
-Click-

04:11:16

Is it under 'manage wolf'?

04:09:51 Stalking chat

RoseThorn,
welcome to wolfplay!
Aswell as; quick view your wolf and it should say somewhere in a box 'XXXXX-Use pup toy'

04:07:59

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04:50:30 ezra, he/him

honestly any phrase with the word "mushroom" in it sounds like a euphemism. see also "mushroom hole"

04:49:30

Thanks again :3

04:49:27 ezra, he/him

just thought about how it's easier to get mushrooms now but apples cost more of them. then realized this phenomenon would be called "mushroom inflation"

04:48:33 Stalking chat

Hurry,
I'd say the others aren't really worth it, so yeah

04:48:17

I guess you and Uma are fated nemesis

04:47:31

@Wild Runners I see, thank you

So besides Generals there are no other bounties that give such good rewards? Not even in some other terrains; I recently unlocked Jungle ^^

04:45:54 Stalking chat

Turn downed Uma's bounty but got it again..wow

04:45:22

Eve fled :"3 this is 2nd time in a row it happened, I am just missing the dreads qwq

04:45:08 Stalking chat

But it takes a while to sometimes get their quests from gullin

04:44:56 Stalking chat

Hurry,
The generals offer really good items or atleast to me.

04:44:05 tiger\Owl|she\her

Yo my girl is 81 hrs pregnant and she’s probably gonna pop when I am not on. Why do they always do this to me??

04:37:27

What are good Bounties to take?
I only saw a few so far and like Squirell and Deer one seem kind of bad, like a lot of searching for a pretty small reward? I searched 5+ levels before giving up on Squirrel one.
I had better luck with Lightbringer Liutenant and even if I did not reward seems worth it?

04:23:36 Kros

RP anybody? PM me!

04:20:06

-Click- cool?

04:17:03 Stalking chat

Rosethorn,
Oh okay!
Happy hunting :)

04:16:16

I figured out that I had to change the den display to list

04:13:49 Stalking chat

RoseThorn,
-Click-

04:11:16

Is it under 'manage wolf'?

04:09:51 Stalking chat

RoseThorn,
welcome to wolfplay!
Aswell as; quick view your wolf and it should say somewhere in a box 'XXXXX-Use pup toy'

04:07:59

cool

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June 28, 2020 05:00 AM

Darkseeker

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stole my sister's drawing tablet.

Feel like there's something off about this but I can't put my finger on what...?

*Edit to add: this was based off a lineart.

Edited at June 28, 2020 10:31 PM by Vennenum

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June 28, 2020 05:05 AM

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That's awesome! I'd say the neck maybe arches back a bit too much, the eyes are a little small, has a bit of an underbite and the fur's very line-y but those are such small things i don't think it would really affect the piece- it's really good!

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June 28, 2020 05:17 AM

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Hmm I see what you mean. Would red lining be alright? I'd love to play around a bit to see what might be giving the off feeling <3

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June 28, 2020 05:29 AM

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Considering I was coloring off a lineart, the only thing I changed were the nose and the eyes.

You're welcome to do a redline, but I'm not confident on my lineart-fixing skills. :')

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June 28, 2020 02:06 PM

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It does look off, but I can't help you on what looks off. It looks great though.

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June 28, 2020 02:06 PM

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The eye's a tad small, but other than that I think it looks lovely Venn.

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June 28, 2020 05:23 PM

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Smol eyes

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June 28, 2020 05:24 PM

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The ear looks a little twisted out about halfway up it

The base is facing forwards, but then the tip is facing to the side

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June 28, 2020 05:24 PM

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Sorry if I seem rude but uh

I think it is that it looks like it's tongue is brown, though it it the lips. But it is an AMAZING DRAWING!

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June 28, 2020 05:25 PM

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And the eyes are a little small

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