Wolf Play : Need advice on how to improve art piece
Chatbox
 Magnus Bane
05:44:57 Mag/Maggy
Damn I forget how easy premium makes things
 technoblade
05:44:37 Lil Techy | Techno
ah shit I got the PvP quest again
 The Pumpkin King
05:43:01 Ecifircas
SIlver via, you've got this. I believe in you.
 Avatar Of Lust
05:42:49 Asmodeus (he/they)
3 brains and now I have no explore moves time to buy some Chinese pottery
 Avatar Of Lust
05:42:07 Asmodeus (he/they)
some reason it copied the arrows too XD
 technoblade
05:41:52 Lil Techy | Techno
moon night

yes and?
 Avatar Of Lust
05:41:34 Asmodeus (he/they)

North South West East
Adventure

Bloody Apparition howls at the Banshee with all their might. It cowers, then silently disappears. This was a difficult task. There are 3 brains hidden in a tuft of grass nearby.

first brains of this event for me XD
 Moonnightshade
05:41:34 
BRO I FOUND APPLES IN BARTER FOR ONLY 900 MUSH
 Silver via
05:41:30 Silv, Via
Ecifircas
I'm probably going to hide in the desert for a bit since getting 5 levels there is my third quest- but thanks, this will be so fun :')
 The Pumpkin King
05:40:37 Ecifircas
Polargeist, I'm happily one of your paws. I try to give my support. lol
 technoblade
05:40:20 Lil Techy | Techno
Eci

good, just exploring trying to get to maybe 80k mush. You?
 The Pumpkin King
05:39:39 Ecifircas
technoblade, hello. How are you?
 Avatar Of Lust
05:39:13 Asmodeus (he/they)
Mag

that's good to hear

 Cypress Road
05:39:12 Cy, love
Not doing great. I got a lot of family stuff going on and not in a good head space so I hopped on for a distraction so I'm not in my own head right now
 technoblade
05:38:59 Lil Techy | Techno
Eci!
 The Pumpkin King
05:38:36 Ecifircas
Silver via, oooof. :')
Good luck, especially when winter is tomorrow too.
 Magnus Bane
05:38:26 Mag/Maggy
Avatar
I know! Hoping to stay back on for good now:)
 Avatar Of Lust
05:37:55 Asmodeus (he/they)
Hi Mag

haven't seen you on in a while
 Silver via
05:37:35 Silv, Via
I'm going to cry- Why is that my new quest now? why not sooner

Expand your territory. Level up in the Mountains.
Completed: 0/5

Expand your territory. Level up in the Mountains.
Completed: 9/10
 Magnus Bane
05:37:08 Mag/Maggy
I'm good, how are you^^

Refresh

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.
Quests
Alliance Battles
Challenges

Hourly Damage Variances
Coyote : -3
Sun Bear : -1
Wolverine : -2
    Fall   Night  Weather:  Heavy Rain  Moon: 
 


Forums

→ Wolf Play is a fun game! Sign Up Now!

My Subscriptions
My Bookmarks
My Topics
Latest Topics
Following
Forums > Artwork > Art Help
   1 

Need advice on how to improve art pieceFebruary 27, 2023 06:24 AM


0Written The Wolf

Neutral
 
Posts: 797
#2864346
Give Award
Hi ^^ so I have this art piece I am working on and I am not happy with how water/puddle looks-it is supposed to be very shallow(so paws not being below water is kinda what I have been going for, thou you can comment your disagreement on that too and explain how and why to fix it). My issue with water is-it looks pretty muddy and yeah it is muddy water so it makes sense XD but also undefined, non trasculent and overall pretty fake looking water ;-; if water can look fake... It does not destroy the whole art, but I kind of wanna improve on it . And water circles look so out of place fdespite them having to be there cause it is raining and I ant it depicted that way :'3 maybe I just need another way to style them? Dunno?
Transculent water bolbs are sketch-so I have yet to define them, they are being water bended. You can give water advice for them too. And yeah I might lower that brightnes cause overall atmosphere is murky, thou I might keep shine to reflect how water is being manipuled by some unnatural power.
I am unsure if I will color lines of wolf cause on one hand it would fit with lineless background, but on the other black lines make him pop. Feel free to advise.
And links to tutorials would be helpful too :3
Need advice on how to improve art pieceFebruary 27, 2023 06:34 AM


Not Debbie

Darkseeker
 
Posts: 1423
#2864349
Give Award
I think the water looks pretty good in general, but to make it more "water like" I would bring the water up the paws a little (very little) because when you look at water touching something it seem to go up a bit :)
I think you should also add like a basic reflection of the wolf, and since it's raining, if you make the wolf look more wet and dripping with water, I feel like it would really make the mood your looking for :D
Need advice on how to improve art pieceFebruary 27, 2023 07:14 AM


Eternity

Forum Moderator
Darkseeker
 
Posts: 7914
#2864352
Give Award
Ah if only I wasn't in classes until 5pm today D:
Water is a super tricky thing to draw, so you're doing well!
Once I get out of my classes I can show you how I do it if it would help - I can't explain what I mean with words very well
Need advice on how to improve art pieceFebruary 27, 2023 12:37 PM


0Written The Wolf

Neutral
 
Posts: 797
#2864416
Give Award

Not Debbie said:
I think the water looks pretty good in general, but to make it more "water like" I would bring the water up the paws a little (very little) because when you look at water touching something it seem to go up a bit :)
I think you should also add like a basic reflection of the wolf, and since it's raining, if you make the wolf look more wet and dripping with water, I feel like it would really make the mood your looking for :D


*facepalm* Honestly, thank you so much cause I forget shadow or reflection 90% of the time unless I plan on it having some kind of semi-central role. Thank you for other advices too :3
Need advice on how to improve art pieceFebruary 27, 2023 12:39 PM


0Written The Wolf

Neutral
 
Posts: 797
#2864417
Give Award

Eternity said:
Ah if only I wasn't in classes until 5pm today D:
Water is a super tricky thing to draw, so you're doing well!
Once I get out of my classes I can show you how I do it if it would help - I can't explain what I mean with words very well


I will patiently wait :)
Need advice on how to improve art pieceFebruary 27, 2023 01:11 PM


Eternity

Forum Moderator
Darkseeker
 
Posts: 7914
#2864431
Give Award
A bit rushed, but this might help! :0 this is how I usually do stuff with water. I hope you don't mind me doodling over the top of your image!
It looks really good as is!

[edits [c]157083]
Water.png

Edited at February 27, 2023 01:12 PM by Eternity
Need advice on how to improve art pieceFebruary 27, 2023 01:16 PM


0Written The Wolf

Neutral
 
Posts: 797
#2864434
Give Award
Thank you a lot :D (I should have put going over art as okay, but I kinda forgot ^^"") your edits do make it look better and fitted in with atmosphere.
special thank you for wet fur cause I was lost on how to do that too XD

Forums > Artwork > Art Help
   1 

Refresh










Copyright ©2013-2024 Go Go Gatsby Designs, LLC    All Rights Reserved
Terms Of Use  |   Privacy Policy   |   DMCA   |   Contact Us