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10:49:03 You're just yellow
Reaper

Yeah, so blaming a human for the dog being aggressive is like blaming a human's mistakes on mommy issues. Sure, may be the case sometimes, but not every time.
 Thanksgiverbeast
10:48:28 Will
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 Purgatory
10:47:16 Purgatorio/Purge
It's actually not being enforced, the bill won't pass. Americans don't give a shit what type of dog you have. This is a rumor going around social media for some reason. Not truth. The law actually restricts the ban on breeds like pitbulls, german shepherd, etc
 Dont Fear The Reaper
10:47:02 Reaper / Grim
Nux
Yeah, that's how it is with all animals on the planet
 ~♥Nux♥~
10:45:39 You're just yellow
I breed American Bullies, and I can state with confidence, that while some people feed the dogs attitude or aggression, but some dogs are aggressive by nature. Now, by saying that, not ALL dogs in the breed are automatically aggressive. Pits tend to be territorial and possessive, so people tended to use them for fighting, which is how they earned their rep for being an aggressive breed. I've had pits that were the sweetest things, and then I've had some that aren't. It's just like people. Not all of them are bad, but accassionally there's a Ted Bundy or Jeffery Dahmer in the mix.
 Dont Fear The Reaper
10:45:31 Reaper / Grim
Yellow
...I cannot deny that XD
 teddy
10:42:16 its yellow
reaper
that sounds like a very american thing to enforce lol
 Dont Fear The Reaper
10:41:41 Reaper / Grim
Yellow
Interesting, the one that's been trying to get passed in the US has dogs being euthanized. If it looks like a bully, it's dying
 teddy
10:38:47 its yellow
which*
 teddy
10:38:32 its yellow
reaper
they arn't slaughtered. It breeding, selling, buying, trading ETC witch is banned. the current bullies may live out their lives. Though, a lot of especially brits euthanised theirs (out from their own choice)
 teddy
10:36:32 its yellow
but this is also stated on the UKC webpage "Above all else, the APBT must have the functional capability to be a catch dog that can hold, wrestle (push and pull), and breathe easily while doing its job. Balance and harmony of all parts are critical components of breed type.

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 Dont Fear The Reaper
10:35:39 Reaper / Grim
Yellow
Yep, I wish we as a world would stop and actually inform ourselves and stop spreading misinformation. The media is always dramatizing things and blowing everything way out of proportion and now we have innocent animals being slaughtered because of it
 teddy
10:34:00 its yellow
Reaper
yes i agree with you. I also think that a lot of people (in europe where these dogs are foreign) i think a lot of the people that buy them, encourage and like their history as agressive dogs
 Dont Fear The Reaper
10:28:43 Reaper / Grim
Yellow
That doesn't surprise me, even rotties I've seen. Not many, but there are some. Most of the negative myths surrounding pits and such are because of the dogs that were abused, neglected, or used in dog fights. Gives the entire breed a bad rep
 teddy
10:27:18 its yellow
reaper
no worries, the idea comes from the 1970s
 teddy
10:26:32 its yellow
reaper
yes all of those fall under the "worker" i typed.
 Dont Fear The Reaper
10:26:26 Reaper / Grim
Yellow
Thank you, I dont know how I missed that in my research
 teddy
10:25:46 its yellow
(link leading to article)
 Salem
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 teddy
10:25:38 its yellow
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Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 12:41 PM


TKO

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My art has been looking awful lately. I have drawn this character 3 times now, and each attempt looks worse than the last. I need constructive crit, I don't care how brutal you are about it, I won't be hurt.

Feel free to redline!

Attempt 1

Attempt 2

Attempt 3

All (c) 243831/ Me

I have figured it out uwuwu thank you



Edited at March 18, 2022 05:32 PM by Excisus
Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 02:48 PM


Lucifer

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ok so the last attempt looks great!
the head on this first one is good, but what are you trying to do on the body?
the second one looks good but the head is a bit big if its what you want then it looks good also

Edited at February 24, 2022 02:49 PM by LucifersWolves
Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 02:51 PM


Nez.ity

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If you are alright with redlining and some tips (With the redline) I'll be up to help you? If not, that's fine. It's your artwork.
Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 02:52 PM


TKO

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Please do

Nez.ity said:
If you are alright with redlining and some tips (With the redline) I'll be up to help you? If not, that's fine. It's your artwork.


Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 04:53 PM


Nez.ity

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Doing attempt one because everything else looks lovely *^*. I do not draw canine, anymore--yes I used to dabble back in the //first joined// ages but hopefully, you can just y'know understand that ;). While I love how you decided to do three different ones, I feel like attempt one could have some touch to it-- in case you're feeling nice and give the commissioner something to stare at; not that you know have to. ANYWAYS!

You have that edgy style, where the fur sticks out the most- as I always say go big or go home-- your attempt one could be the " GO BIG" style;o. I love the side tongue and tight collar idea, so I decided to mimic( With your permission) the style and just went crazy with the fur( Pencil work can be MUCH easier when drawing fur, you should take advantage of this punk style because it's there for YOU to improve and grow, even if you are a chibi artist( Only seen your cheebs art).

In short terms, the eye details are the show and tell, usually, when I look at canine art my eyes land on the eyes, it's the first thing I want to see- the expression, the glare, the look. I know your look is more cartoonish which I can't do but hopefully, it's still helpful.

You can do whatever with this, I only did half the job because I got uncomfortable lol.

I'll slowly add more to this so I don't spam you because again, I'm no canine artist.

Redline: (c)Nezitystudio

Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 04:57 PM


TKO

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I heavily appreciate your words and your redline! Thank you very much!
That's the thing..i don't want my art to be cartoony.. I'm aiming for a semi realistic style, but I'm clearly far from that

Edited at February 24, 2022 10:53 PM by Excisus

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