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i have like 1200 moves left, it should be easy
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Oouu that is tasty, I haven't had one of those in a while, I just got my tongue pierced a few days ago, so peanut butter isn't my go to since moving my mouth in general is tough :')

I had some vanilla wafers for breakfast *^*
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oh dear, yeah :'D i'm not the best with ideas, but maybe meeko or dinas?
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I feel you on that one. Only I need to start exploring
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someone give me the strength to finish my explore
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-WP Click- Power name ideas pm me please (custom battle moves )
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Katy

Oh man. OCs are the hardest to name. Trying to find a name that feels/sounds small? Man, I made it harder for myself.
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grave

male or female? is Victorian names ok?
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Chaotic,
oo that's a nice one though, might save that for a future wolf ^^
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Ryder,

Got two pregnant wolves, need name ideas for the pups, gimme whatcha got >:D
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Critique?July 6, 2018 02:35 AM


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Just trying out some semi-realistic fur practice

Critiques on lighting, blending, etc. are greatly appreciated. If you have suggestions on how to make it look more realistic, that's also greatly appreciated

https://s33.postimg.cc/6dgalc133/Fur_Practice.png
Critique?July 7, 2018 05:36 PM


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So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!
Critique?July 7, 2018 05:51 PM


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Dragon's Fire said:
So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!



I agree with both! For fur, I personally think that the most important thing is edge variation. Have very stark contrast as well, as right now, you have a lot of softer edges.

For color, instead of shading with black and white, try changing your hue variation! For wolves with white fur, try blue-tinted gray, cream, anything. For wolves with cream fur, try shading with a reddish-brown. Of course, these are only like two in a billion examples lol

Another thing I think is important with fur is fur direction. Look at real wolves and see how their fur grows in like ten different directions.

These are only my personal observations on drawing fur. I like what you have going so far, you can do it!
Critique?July 7, 2018 08:12 PM


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Honestly I have no critique but this is awesome.On a real animal I think the color would be a little more varied though but I under stand you might have not added it because of it being practice.
Critique?July 7, 2018 10:18 PM


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x3 I haven't tried putting colored edges on a practice, I might just do that. Thanks guys >^<

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