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 Magnus Bane
01:30:29 Mag/Maggy
Goodnight ^^
 ~♥Nux♥~
01:29:35 You're just yellow
Hm. Someone just reached out to me advertising their stud. I'm not sure how I feel about that.
 DoggPuk3
01:18:14 Dogg :>
Well Im gonna head out for the night
Goodnight Mag!
 DoggPuk3
01:11:26 Dogg :>
Basically their coats change with the seasons
tomorrow if her coat is still being weird ill dig thru the forums and see if anyone else is having this issue and if not then ill right a bug report on it
 Magnus Bane
01:08:45 Mag/Maggy
I have no clue about dynamics so I'm no help <.>
 DoggPuk3
01:06:15 Dogg :>
Also my winter dynamic wolf's coat is having a stroke, I got her during fall okay
and her fur was the lightest it could go, well when winter came I expected it to stay that light since it seems to only change 3 times (I checked in customize) well it went to the darkest it goes, then today it went to the second stage and now when i import her to customize its back to the darkest
;-;
 DoggPuk3
01:02:43 Dogg :>
I do this on every game ive ever played since I was real young, its more of a habitual ocd thing, I like to think I dont have ocd but when it comes to games I move rather slowly and I realize its because I am ocd XD
 Magnus Bane
12:59:57 Mag/Maggy
I'm glad you have patience:')
 DoggPuk3
12:58:51 Dogg :>
Oh lord, Im very particular about training XD
I like being able to go in as smooth as butter, I also am ocd about my wolves BE so I train them all to the same level
 Magnus Bane
12:57:11 Mag/Maggy
Really? I take mine into level 250+ jungle with no BE XD
 DoggPuk3
12:56:30 Dogg :>
Dont blame you, I wouldnt either, My current wolves BE is only at Knock over, I refuse to even go to level 10 of the forest until all my wolves are at knock over, which wont take much longer theyre just a few points away
 Magnus Bane
12:54:33 Mag/Maggy
Hell nah
 DoggPuk3
12:53:41 Dogg :>
Are you attempting it? :o
 DoggPuk3
12:53:13 Dogg :>
0-0
 Magnus Bane
12:51:52 Mag/Maggy
Damn a dreik with 4 elephants <.>
 DoggPuk3
12:50:19 Dogg :>
Prob a lag from rollover even tho its been almost an hour
 Magnus Bane
12:48:59 Mag/Maggy
It was just being slow and the screen was blurry. When I zoomed in it would zoom me back out. I cleared my browser and it seems to be fixed
 DoggPuk3
12:48:11 Dogg :>
Mag
Yes, the customizing is loading so slow
 Magnus Bane
12:46:56 Mag/Maggy
Is the site buggy for anyone else...?
 Magnus Bane
12:46:13 Mag/Maggy
On here. In real life I am lmao

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Help me/CritiqueJune 28, 2018 04:27 PM


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Something isn't settling well with me and this image... Could you guys help?

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Help me/CritiqueJune 29, 2018 08:42 PM


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You did a very good job, but I can see a few things that could be touched up on.

The cat's chest is facing us, but the entirety of it's side is visible. It's back wouldn't be able to twist like this so we should either see only part of the chest, or part of the side and back.

If you chose to keep the back instead of the front-facing chest, I would add a little more exaggeration to the back and maybe lose, or change, some of the fur detail. With cats, the elegant curve of the back is very noticeable.

If you decided to keep the front-facing chest, the back and hind legs would be behind it, though the curve would still be visible, of course.

The legs themselves are a little lumpy, compared to the graceful lines a cat has. The heels should be lower, and at a less extreme angle, while the knees would have a slightly shallower curve that blends gracefully into the body. The hindquarters could be rounder, and shorter to show where the hip bones are.

I've never been great with front-facing legs, but cats have slightly thicker, short forearms, usually. There might not be as deep a dip from shoulder to neck, and the most noticeable joint from the front of the leg would be the wrist curving slightly sloping outwards, thickening before becoming the paw.

The ears could be less rounded, though of course it depends on the breed or OC you were drawing. Cat ears are most often triangular, and I would set them a little higher up on the head while lengthening the cheeks. Cats have slightly round heads.

I would make the tail tuft thick and blend it into the tail more, rather than a separate piece of fur, but that one is more a personal preference.

I would love to draw little bits to visually represent my advice, but my tablet's too scratched up to pick up my pen, apparently. '-_- If I get it working again soon, I'll add some pics.

Edited at June 29, 2018 08:43 PM by The Watch

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