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 technoblade
11:38:18 Lil Techy | Techno
finally killed a fourth one
 distant-screams
11:38:13 katy | beetle
gwyn killed my familiar :') how rude
 Midnight Moon Pack
11:37:10 PointyGardener(PG)
Rude
 Malcuth
11:37:05 Wander
Thank you! She turned out so pretty!
 technoblade
11:37:00 Lil Techy | Techno
3 gwyn ap nudds and they all flee! Ahhh
 Crooked Magic
11:35:21 Crook, She/her
Just go into labor already D:
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 Azrael
11:34:59 Ash, Grim, Kaos
Flora-
Hopefully those are helping quite a bit. D:
 distant-screams
11:34:52 katy | beetle
Malcuth,
ooo i think that's the highest rarity arrax has produced so far :0

congrats! she's beautiful
 Malcuth
11:34:21 Wander
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In love with her
 Gardiens Brisés Pack
11:33:41 Lotus
Ash,

They were very tasty! I also like the strawberry ones, though I prefer the vanilla ones so they aren't too sweet and I can put Nutella on top of them


I've had it done before, but the first time seemed to be better than this time around. My tongue is huge but I've been downing baby's ibuprofen as much as I can to help lessen the achiness >.<
 distant-screams
11:33:37 katy | beetle
Vah,
i know right :'D i'm loving the adopts existence has been putting out lately
 Zeraphia
11:32:44 Spooky Vah
Katy

Oooh he's gorgeous
 Magnus Bane
11:32:15 Mag/Maggy
Basically
 distant-screams
11:32:14 katy | beetle
-Click-
i still need to draw this guy e.e
 Azrael
11:32:12 Ash, Grim, Kaos
Oh wait, that's the other NPC. Never mind.
 Azrael
11:31:55 Ash, Grim, Kaos
A therapist and a bucket to hold her tears.
 Sassy Otaku
11:31:42 Chuuya/Ruggie
I swear the few times I've gotten it have been luck :')
 Magnus Bane
11:31:24 Mag/Maggy
I don't think the banshee even knows what she needs
 technoblade
11:31:08 Lil Techy | Techno
I don't think anyone has figured the banshee out
 Sassy Otaku
11:30:40 Chuuya/Ruggie
...Anyone know what the Banshee needs?

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Critique?June 17, 2018 01:25 PM


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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png
Critique?June 17, 2018 01:30 PM


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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!
Critique?June 17, 2018 01:31 PM


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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!
Critique?June 17, 2018 01:39 PM


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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png
Critique?June 17, 2018 01:54 PM


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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!
Critique?June 21, 2018 05:37 PM


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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!
Critique?June 22, 2018 11:30 PM


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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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