Feralhearted said:

Hey Over,

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Just a few things to note:

- Math and enligh are not really things... Books were destroyed when the heavens fell and humanoid civilization was eliminated. The wolves that remain are gifted due to the remaining magic, but still, in essence, are just wolves.

- Singing. Wolves will howl, but the can't "sing" per say.

- How long was her Between? Most adults can survive in Between for maybe a year, but any more than that causes them to a)get killed by a monster or natural desaster, or b) go insane due to the chaotic energy of Between and end up getting killed. Apache would have needed a guardian as he is way to young to survive out there alone unless he took shelter with another Ruin for some of that time.

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Please make these changes and let me know when i need to look again.

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Feral