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oooo so excited for club stuff! maybe wait for a Val and/or Aster response but after that we should be fine? never heard of that song Raven but I will check it out later today when I get the chance! |
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Can you guys give me tips on how to write longer posts? I just see your long ass posts and then my little paragraphs and feel like I could do more.any advice would be appreciated |
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Hmmm start with breaking up things into fundamental ideas and making smaller paragraphs. I like to set up things like a paragraph to describe room, paragraph to describe feelings, and paragraph to describe what's might be happening and so on and so forth. also do show vs tell as often as you can catch yourself. for example, dont say she was sad, say her eyes were red from tears as mascara had stained her cheeks. |
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Hmm smart thanks I shall keep that in mind |
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oooooo!~ i love that!! Who drew that fabulous concept art?
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AltAtlas on ToyHouse! They're one of my favorite artists <3 |
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