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09:17:25 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
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 Zeraphia
09:16:38 Space Pirate Captain
Katy

That is looking amazing!
 distant-lands
09:15:48 katy | beetle
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finally finished the flat color </3 now i need to shade
 distant-lands
09:15:33 katy | beetle
vah,
i'm excited for you! sounds like a very nice place to work ^^

and oh i bet! restoring anything is always a bit of a hassle.
 Lackadaisy
09:14:58 Stray, LT | H/H
e.e
 Zeraphia
09:14:39 Space Pirate Captain
Grim

Oooh yes! That definitely helps it so much!
 The Reaper
09:13:40 Reaper / Grim
Cap
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 Zeraphia
09:12:53 Space Pirate Captain
... i should doodle Lucius. It's been a hot while--
 Kháos
09:11:41 
Oh! Bye chat. ^^ I might be back later
 Zeraphia
09:11:20 Space Pirate Captain
Katy

Oh man, yeah. I love thrifting and antiques and this is just so much fun. :3

It takes a lot of work, that's for sure. They do a YouTube thing too. I /might/ have ended up in the background of one of the newer ones ^^' I'll have to see when it comes out.
 Lackadaisy
09:08:48 Stray, LT | H/H
oh my god, wow, he's so pretty
 distant-lands
09:08:29 katy | beetle
vah,
ooh that sounds very fun actually! i love antiques and trinkets :0

i wanted to get into flipping furniture as a hobby a while back but never did for some reason or the other, lol.
 Zeraphia
09:06:49 Space Pirate Captain
Grim

It definitely does give that vibe. I think maybe the skin needs just a touch of red to it, to help it feel like skin more, y'know?
 Zeraphia
09:06:14 Space Pirate Captain
Katy

It's a bit interesting. ^^'

I work in an antiques/vintage boutique. A lot of the time, it's shipping product out to people who have bought online.

The owners will find old trinkets/furniture and flip it. They'll sell the furniture and the product they used to flip/remodel it.
 Kháos
09:06:14 
Like usual, Tundra has an extra flavor text for the event, right? (Break taken, I'm back :D)
 The Reaper
09:05:51 Reaper / Grim
Cap
Well okay, so it's supposed to be skin stitched together. Kind of rotting and some spots the stitches have come apart so you see muscle & Bone beneath. The dark color is actually very dark green, I tried to make it look like it was rotting
 distant-lands
09:04:17 katy | beetle
vah,
that's good to hear! what kind of work are you doing, if you don't mind me asking?
 Zeraphia
09:02:17 Space Pirate Captain
Katy

Oh I'm enjoying it! It'll be a lot of fun.
 Zeraphia
09:02:03 Space Pirate Captain
Grim

... oh. I would've thought it'd have kind of a red-ish color/base to it as well. Perhaps a little green or something. I think the color right now has it feeling unfinished. ;-;
 distant-lands
09:01:33 katy | beetle
vah,
yeah, i'll be alright though. just need some sleep here soon, lol.

and oh man i imagine! i hope the new job's going well for you though; besides the tiredness :')

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 Continental Wolves
09:17:25 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
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 Zeraphia
09:16:38 Space Pirate Captain
Katy

That is looking amazing!
 distant-lands
09:15:48 katy | beetle
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finally finished the flat color </3 now i need to shade
 distant-lands
09:15:33 katy | beetle
vah,
i'm excited for you! sounds like a very nice place to work ^^

and oh i bet! restoring anything is always a bit of a hassle.
 Lackadaisy
09:14:58 Stray, LT | H/H
e.e
 Zeraphia
09:14:39 Space Pirate Captain
Grim

Oooh yes! That definitely helps it so much!
 The Reaper
09:13:40 Reaper / Grim
Cap
-Click-
 Zeraphia
09:12:53 Space Pirate Captain
... i should doodle Lucius. It's been a hot while--
 Kháos
09:11:41 
Oh! Bye chat. ^^ I might be back later
 Zeraphia
09:11:20 Space Pirate Captain
Katy

Oh man, yeah. I love thrifting and antiques and this is just so much fun. :3

It takes a lot of work, that's for sure. They do a YouTube thing too. I /might/ have ended up in the background of one of the newer ones ^^' I'll have to see when it comes out.
 Lackadaisy
09:08:48 Stray, LT | H/H
oh my god, wow, he's so pretty
 distant-lands
09:08:29 katy | beetle
vah,
ooh that sounds very fun actually! i love antiques and trinkets :0

i wanted to get into flipping furniture as a hobby a while back but never did for some reason or the other, lol.
 Zeraphia
09:06:49 Space Pirate Captain
Grim

It definitely does give that vibe. I think maybe the skin needs just a touch of red to it, to help it feel like skin more, y'know?
 Zeraphia
09:06:14 Space Pirate Captain
Katy

It's a bit interesting. ^^'

I work in an antiques/vintage boutique. A lot of the time, it's shipping product out to people who have bought online.

The owners will find old trinkets/furniture and flip it. They'll sell the furniture and the product they used to flip/remodel it.
 Kháos
09:06:14 
Like usual, Tundra has an extra flavor text for the event, right? (Break taken, I'm back :D)
 The Reaper
09:05:51 Reaper / Grim
Cap
Well okay, so it's supposed to be skin stitched together. Kind of rotting and some spots the stitches have come apart so you see muscle & Bone beneath. The dark color is actually very dark green, I tried to make it look like it was rotting
 distant-lands
09:04:17 katy | beetle
vah,
that's good to hear! what kind of work are you doing, if you don't mind me asking?
 Zeraphia
09:02:17 Space Pirate Captain
Katy

Oh I'm enjoying it! It'll be a lot of fun.
 Zeraphia
09:02:03 Space Pirate Captain
Grim

... oh. I would've thought it'd have kind of a red-ish color/base to it as well. Perhaps a little green or something. I think the color right now has it feeling unfinished. ;-;
 distant-lands
09:01:33 katy | beetle
vah,
yeah, i'll be alright though. just need some sleep here soon, lol.

and oh man i imagine! i hope the new job's going well for you though; besides the tiredness :')




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Critique my Art ^^February 2, 2019 09:45 AM


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Deja Vu said:
Well my favorite part about your art is that it's so unique. I would keep most of your style, but maybe tweak a few things.

I agree with mavi, I think you should make fur and shadows more prominent! Maybe experiment with lighting too. I've found that lighting can definitely make a piece a ton better. If the sun is behind the characters, add a brim of light around their fur.

Use references when practicing! It's the only way to improve your anatomy. I know for me whenever I'm stuck between styles ,I get a bunch of pictures of a bunch of animals and just doodle a bunch of em. Some realistic things can transfer over to your current art style. Don't forget to credit though. ;')

Last thing, regularly practice realism! It's will really help with everything, I promise.

All that being said, you're one of my favorite artists. Hope this helps !



Thank you so so much! The last comment means a lot coming from you as you're one of my favourites. <3

I'll make sure to practise with the tips you gave me! Thanks so much again!
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ASomeonePerson said:
You've improved greatly since you've started posting your art in the Art Gallery, and the drawing you made for me of Ezhno was very beautiful, but I've noticed that you're beginning to struggle with drawing, and, even though I'm not an artist, I have some tips to help you improve:

1 Study the anatomy of what you are drawing. Since you typically draw canines, I'd suggest you study the entire (note, the entire) anatomy of a canine. Study the bone structure, the muscles, the skin, and the way the fur covers the body. Specifically, learn the skeletal system and the muscular system since these are the most important.

2 Experiment with different brushes with every drawing and see what suits it best. I've learned over the past few days of studying, most artists use five or six, if not only two or one, brushes to make the most perfect masterpieces, so keep the number of brushes you use to a minimum and experiment during beginning sketches.

3 Go to fellow artists and learn their techniques. I recommend checking out a user known as "Chickenbusiness" on DeviantArt. She has a Free Resources tab where you can see her techniques. Here's the link to that page: https://www.deviantart.com/chickenbusiness/gallery/42525407/Resources




Edited at February 2, 2019 09:51 AM by ASomeonePerson
Critique my Art ^^February 2, 2019 09:54 AM


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ASomeonePerson said:
You've improved greatly since you've started posting your art in the Art Gallery, and the drawing you made for me of Ezhno was very beautiful, but I've noticed that you're beginning to struggle with drawing, and, even though I'm not an artist, I have some tips to help you improve:

1 Study the anatomy of what you are drawing. Since you typically draw canines, I'd suggest you study the entire (note, the entire) anatomy of a canine. Study the bone structure, the muscles, the skin, and the way the fur covers the body. Specifically, learn the skeletal system and the muscular system since these are the most important.

2 Experiment with different brushes with every drawing and see what suits it best. I've learned over the past few days of studying, most artists use five or six, if not only two or one, brushes to make the most perfect masterpieces, so keep the number of brushes you use to a minimum and experiment during beginning sketches.

3 Go to fellow artists and learn their techniques. I recommend checking out a user known as "Chickenbusiness" on DeviantArt. She has a Free Resources tab where you can see her techniques. Here's the link to that page: https://www.deviantart.com/chickenbusiness/gallery/42525407/Resources


I am so so sorry I didn't see this!! ;n;

Thank you very much! Those tips are greatly appreciated. I have a doggo at home and I'll study her closely, and i'll study other woofers, too ^^

I'll definitely check Chickenbusiness out!! Thanks again!<3
Critique my Art ^^February 2, 2019 01:13 PM


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I don't really know what to say, because you already know how much I adore your work.

I agree with a few people here about the snouts, but it isn't a very large problem in my eyes! I believe they suit your style.

And I just have another small thing. Sometimes your leg bends awkwardly, but it isn't like always? I have that problem myself with poses etc, so I wouldn't worry about it. Practise makes perfect, as you've already said lmao.

All in all I love you & your art oof.

Edited at February 2, 2019 01:13 PM by Xeno
Critique my Art ^^February 2, 2019 01:15 PM


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Xeno said:
I don't really know what to say, because you already know how much I adore your work.

I agree with a few people here about the snouts, but it isn't a very large problem in my eyes! I believe they suit your style.

And I just have another small thing. Sometimes your leg bends awkwardly, but it isn't like always? I have that problem myself with poses etc, so I wouldn't worry about it. Practise makes perfect, as you've already said lmao.

All in all I love you & your art oof.


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