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12:37:22 katy | beetle

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i hope this gal makes it

12:37:19 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

I hope I lose wolves :|

12:37:00

I keep forgetting it's not Monday. Dude- that means I retired the Amela on the wrong day 😭

12:35:56 Amy/Anpmygdala

I can lose 13 wolves tomorrow o.o
My oldest is 20 damn

12:34:20 katy | beetle

oo i didn't realize it's spring :0 i can breed my new stud

12:33:44 Exist / Kuskyn

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I know these demons are a waste in the end nut that is okay xD 204T for my team <3

12:32:49 Tyler,Myth,Ty

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dang I need 200 mush to breed her to the wolf I wanna breed her to

Continental Wolves

12:32:31 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

I have 30 females at 83-84 hours and only 17 open den spaces

12:32:17 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cae
Need to borrow my side account for boarding?

12:32:00 Cae, Blue

my calculations were wrong :pensive:

12:31:41 Cae, Blue

i dont got this- at least 10h to go and ive got early morning tomorrow :')

12:30:57 Amy/Anpmygdala

Gooo cae you've got this

12:30:48 Cae, Blue

hi em! ^^

12:30:41 Amy/Anpmygdala

Is anyone elses explore super slow right now

Continental Wolves

12:30:26 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Hey Cae

12:30:07 Cae, Blue

only 65 litters to go :')

12:28:31 ET

Sundays have always been quiet, in fairness :0
But yeah, it did used to be higher than this.

12:27:26 Sleep deprived

64 packs online is a bit sad. I remember when there were like over 100 people online at almost all times

12:25:04 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone up for an rp pm me

12:24:07 Sith Happens

And I'll probably get one of my battlers to 10k BE by the same time, I hope

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12:37:22 katy | beetle

-WP Click-
i hope this gal makes it

12:37:19 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

I hope I lose wolves :|

12:37:00

I keep forgetting it's not Monday. Dude- that means I retired the Amela on the wrong day 😭

12:35:56 Amy/Anpmygdala

I can lose 13 wolves tomorrow o.o
My oldest is 20 damn

12:34:20 katy | beetle

oo i didn't realize it's spring :0 i can breed my new stud

12:33:44 Exist / Kuskyn

-WP Click-
I know these demons are a waste in the end nut that is okay xD 204T for my team <3

12:32:49 Tyler,Myth,Ty

-WP Click-

dang I need 200 mush to breed her to the wolf I wanna breed her to

Continental Wolves

12:32:31 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

I have 30 females at 83-84 hours and only 17 open den spaces

12:32:17 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cae
Need to borrow my side account for boarding?

12:32:00 Cae, Blue

my calculations were wrong :pensive:

12:31:41 Cae, Blue

i dont got this- at least 10h to go and ive got early morning tomorrow :')

12:30:57 Amy/Anpmygdala

Gooo cae you've got this

12:30:48 Cae, Blue

hi em! ^^

12:30:41 Amy/Anpmygdala

Is anyone elses explore super slow right now

Continental Wolves

12:30:26 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Hey Cae

12:30:07 Cae, Blue

only 65 litters to go :')

12:28:31 ET

Sundays have always been quiet, in fairness :0
But yeah, it did used to be higher than this.

12:27:26 Sleep deprived

64 packs online is a bit sad. I remember when there were like over 100 people online at almost all times

12:25:04 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone up for an rp pm me

12:24:07 Sith Happens

And I'll probably get one of my battlers to 10k BE by the same time, I hope

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June 25, 2019 04:58 PM

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I'm working on a Creature for my Adoptable and I got stuck on the eye mouth and how I should do the feathers on the wings any Advise and Critique would be amazing.

https://i.postimg.cc/nr1Lqhkh/IMG-3236.jpg

((Made by me duh))

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June 25, 2019 05:06 PM

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The picture looks kind-of confusing to me, but I will try my best to give some critique!

- Add more of a. . . chest, I guess?

- Adjust the stomach and lower it

- Add the other side limbs (if they are there, I cannot see them >.<)

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June 25, 2019 05:09 PM

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❦Amaris said:
The picture looks kind-of confusing to me, but I will try my best to give some critique!

- Add more of a. . . chest, I guess?
- Adjust the stomach and lower it
- Add the other side limbs (if they are there, I cannot see them >.<)

Thanks it's still a W.I.P so it's gonna be a little confusing.

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June 25, 2019 05:16 PM

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The maw, or mouth, is a little boxy. Make it a little more narrow, since I can see this is a dragon-like design. Dragons normally have a slender physique, unless you want a bulky one. Then you'd have to shorten the muzzle and make it more broad. The upper.. joints? I dunno the word, but the more upper half of the limbs (arms, legs) are too.. beefy. Make them a little more slender. For the eyes, try something that's like an almond like shape. Eyes are normally almond shaped, in a way. Like an Ellipse, google if you don't know what it is. It's an Earth Science term. This is all I got for now, but as you progress I can add more critiques

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June 25, 2019 06:56 PM

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Wolffang said:
The maw, or mouth, is a little boxy. Make it a little more narrow, since I can see this is a dragon-like design. Dragons normally have a slender physique, unless you want a bulky one. Then you'd have to shorten the muzzle and make it more broad. The upper.. joints? I dunno the word, but the more upper half of the limbs (arms, legs) are too.. beefy. Make them a little more slender. For the eyes, try something that's like an almond like shape. Eyes are normally almond shaped, in a way. Like an Ellipse, google if you don't know what it is. It's an Earth Science term. This is all I got for now, but as you progress I can add more critiques

Thanks

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