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06:38:17 Yukon

-WP Click- look at her :) she is the second oldest Wolf in the game

06:26:51 katy | beetle

forest,
thanks!
i need to redraw the bottle of light accessory though ^^' it looks a little wonky

Forest Dwelling

06:21:01 I am on Wolflocke ok

@katy

Ooo I love it!

06:19:14 katy | beetle

thank you <3

06:18:27 Pack of Sharp Snap

distant
Pretty

06:17:28 katy | beetle

-Click-
love how this custom turned out *^*

05:57:54 Don't call me BJ.

Ey "You have 4005 character points to assign to your wolves."
Only 905 cp left

05:32:37 Graves | Chaos

Jake
I actually don't have anything I can make right now, I need to go grocery shopping :(

05:19:03 Don't call me BJ.

@Night Shade
Go make a whole meal for yourself

05:16:28 Graves | Chaos

I shouldn't be up it's 3am and I'm hungry

05:09:32 Amy/Anpmygdala

P'sky
That can be scarry at first...drive slowly and be carefull around turns. Always breake before you turn not while you are turning

05:07:12 P'Sky

Amy
I've just never driven in snow

05:06:20 Amy/Anpmygdala

Night
No problem

05:05:01 Night

Amy
Okay thanks :)

05:04:29 Amy/Anpmygdala

Night
Well it applys it by 10 difference but it applys it to your wolves randomly...like alpha might not be your alpha anymore

05:03:12 Night

Amy
So it just applies dominance CP to all wolves randomly?

05:01:08 Amy/Anpmygdala

Night
It staggers dominance randomly for your den (basicly free dominance CP)

04:59:39 Amy/Anpmygdala

P'sky
Is it that bad o.o

04:58:48 Night

I haven't been online in a while - what exactly does the 'stagger dominance' option at the bottom of my den do?

04:57:54 P'Sky

Amy
I think id rather be home

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06:38:17 Yukon

-WP Click- look at her :) she is the second oldest Wolf in the game

06:26:51 katy | beetle

forest,
thanks!
i need to redraw the bottle of light accessory though ^^' it looks a little wonky

Forest Dwelling

06:21:01 I am on Wolflocke ok

@katy

Ooo I love it!

06:19:14 katy | beetle

thank you <3

06:18:27 Pack of Sharp Snap

distant
Pretty

06:17:28 katy | beetle

-Click-
love how this custom turned out *^*

05:57:54 Don't call me BJ.

Ey "You have 4005 character points to assign to your wolves."
Only 905 cp left

05:32:37 Graves | Chaos

Jake
I actually don't have anything I can make right now, I need to go grocery shopping :(

05:19:03 Don't call me BJ.

@Night Shade
Go make a whole meal for yourself

05:16:28 Graves | Chaos

I shouldn't be up it's 3am and I'm hungry

05:09:32 Amy/Anpmygdala

P'sky
That can be scarry at first...drive slowly and be carefull around turns. Always breake before you turn not while you are turning

05:07:12 P'Sky

Amy
I've just never driven in snow

05:06:20 Amy/Anpmygdala

Night
No problem

05:05:01 Night

Amy
Okay thanks :)

05:04:29 Amy/Anpmygdala

Night
Well it applys it by 10 difference but it applys it to your wolves randomly...like alpha might not be your alpha anymore

05:03:12 Night

Amy
So it just applies dominance CP to all wolves randomly?

05:01:08 Amy/Anpmygdala

Night
It staggers dominance randomly for your den (basicly free dominance CP)

04:59:39 Amy/Anpmygdala

P'sky
Is it that bad o.o

04:58:48 Night

I haven't been online in a while - what exactly does the 'stagger dominance' option at the bottom of my den do?

04:57:54 P'Sky

Amy
I think id rather be home

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM

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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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