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Princess
I sent your request.

01:43:39 Princess, Reese

Spirit

Nicee my request is up

01:43:11 Spirit (Her/She)

Princess
I'll PvP.

01:41:52 Princess, Reese

PvP?

01:38:52 Princess, Reese

It's 2 am and I can't fall asleep

01:26:08

😭 Being smart part two- I just asked myself why a wolf can't breed whenever it's a new year. She's already pregnant and about to give birth any time now. Good, because I expect her to die on Monday. If DS doesn't take her, I'll make sure she gets on the boat.

01:22:37

Oi that is lucky Khaos

FIAB

01:22:29 Do I need one?

Explore strugglin

01:19:40

💀 Dude- I had a jasmine and I just stared at it yesterday and forgot to bury it. Somehow, I still have it.

01:19:04

Good.

01:17:24 Reaper / Grim

Khaos
Obviously

01:16:29

You're sharing, right?

Demon Souls

01:16:15 Demon/Death

Does anyone have tips on how to find Harley in the forest. I have it as a bounty but haven't even ran into her.

01:16:03 Reaper / Grim

Soft pretzels :3

01:15:26

You all spoke about the same time 😭 hi!! Thanks Vox.

Pretzels?? What kind? :0

01:14:49

120 default moves is crazy I kinda want that lol

01:14:45 Reaper / Grim

I'm still here, making pretzels :3

01:14:15

I'm still alive just exploring. I hope your moves get fixed eventually :o

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I'm alive, not sure if that's any good though

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01:46:20 Spirit (Her/She)

Princess
I sent your request.

01:43:39 Princess, Reese

Spirit

Nicee my request is up

01:43:11 Spirit (Her/She)

Princess
I'll PvP.

01:41:52 Princess, Reese

PvP?

01:38:52 Princess, Reese

It's 2 am and I can't fall asleep

01:26:08

01:22:37

Oi that is lucky Khaos

FIAB

01:22:29 Do I need one?

Explore strugglin

01:19:40

💀 Dude- I had a jasmine and I just stared at it yesterday and forgot to bury it. Somehow, I still have it.

01:19:04

Good.

01:17:24 Reaper / Grim

Khaos
Obviously

01:16:29

You're sharing, right?

Demon Souls

01:16:15 Demon/Death

Does anyone have tips on how to find Harley in the forest. I have it as a bounty but haven't even ran into her.

01:16:03 Reaper / Grim

Soft pretzels :3

01:15:26

You all spoke about the same time 😭 hi!! Thanks Vox.

Pretzels?? What kind? :0

01:14:49

120 default moves is crazy I kinda want that lol

01:14:45 Reaper / Grim

I'm still here, making pretzels :3

01:14:15

I'm still alive just exploring. I hope your moves get fixed eventually :o

Eternitys Gaze

01:14:13 tern / gaze

I'm alive, not sure if that's any good though

SammytheRaccoon

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I'm here

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Forums > Artwork > Art Help

May 15, 2018 02:12 PM

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https://s9.postimg.cc/u0o0j78j3/Untitled412.png

Any improvements I can make? :/

Edited at May 15, 2018 02:13 PM by Cún.

May 16, 2018 12:44 AM

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The tail and back leg are extremely strange and I can't quite figure out what's going on there. XD

Also, instead of two sitting poses, I'd add one that clearly shows a side view.

Edited at May 16, 2018 12:45 AM by Lykotia

May 16, 2018 01:57 AM

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Lykotia said:
The tail and back leg are extremely strange and I can't quite figure out what's going on there. XD

Also, instead of two sitting poses, I'd add one that clearly shows a side view.

I haven't a clue what I did either. It's so cringy for other players to notice :')

Thanks for the help. :D

May 20, 2018 12:26 PM

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Um... maybe make the lower jaw line up a bit more with the upper jaw. Otherwise it kinda looks like an overbite. Hope that helps a bit.

May 20, 2018 12:27 PM

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Hunters said:
Um... maybe make the lower jaw line up a bit more with the upper jaw. Otherwise it kinda looks like an overbite. Hope that helps a bit.

Thanks, anything is helpful x'D

May 20, 2018 08:40 PM

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I think it looks really good, but the head looks a tad big for the body, and didnt quite flow well into it. Other than that, awesome job!

May 21, 2018 01:52 AM

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Cutting Edge said:
I think it looks really good, but the head looks a tad big for the body, and didn't quite flow well into it. Other than that, awesome job!

>.< Thanks!

May 21, 2018 02:28 AM

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The back legs are a bit too stretched out to be a natural position, and it looks like the tail is coming off of the back leg. A line there to separate the tail from the leg would help it look less off. ^^

Edited at May 21, 2018 02:29 AM by Evee4ever228

May 21, 2018 09:53 AM