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05:27:50 Ember

well deserved lol

05:23:33 Semi-hiatus

just nearly chocked seeing a video of a danish politician saying verbatim 'trump fuck off' XD

05:21:18 Ember

another great one!

I really miss how movies used to be

05:20:39 Mr Palette Guy

I haven't watched mulan in years pfft.
I avoided most Disney movies
Watched beauty and the beast a shit ton though

05:20:10 Amy/Anpmygdala

Techno
Gosh how could i forget about mulan

05:19:26 Semi-hiatus

mulan has some amazing music too

05:19:07 Ember

oh really? I love that movie XD

05:17:48 Mr Palette Guy

I don't think I've watched tarzan lmao

05:16:46 Ember

songs from that movie are amazing. and Tarzan

05:15:08 Amy/Anpmygdala

I have another song to put in the mix
It's not disney but songs from spirit stallion of cimmaron hit different

05:13:19 Mr Palette Guy

King of smiles,
It's too good of a song to only deserve the beginning of the movie

05:12:21 Amy/Anpmygdala

Spirit
This one hits hard i love it too

05:11:53 Semi-hiatus

Spirit

yes frozen heart is the ice song and I love it

05:11:48 Mr Palette Guy

Amy, fuck yeah, that songs on while I clean the house now

05:11:19 Amy/Anpmygdala

You guys talking about the frozen heart XD
-YT Click-

05:10:58 Mr Palette Guy

King of smiles, the ice song? It was like the only reason I let BJake make me watch the movie haha

05:10:00 Semi-hiatus

Spirit

that song will never get old and I love when it pops onto my fyp I just wish it was longer

Desire of The Hills

05:09:39 Hills / Desire

Working on adopts for the past like 3 hours is like. woah. my fingers yearn for freedom

Continental Wolves

05:08:21 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

14 females at 66-73 hours, I just want them to pop but they have another day to go e,e

05:08:19 Mr Palette Guy

King of smiles,
fuck if the world goes back to that movies songs I hope it's the first one, like the one where the guys are cutting ice. Thats my favorite disney song lmao

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05:27:50 Ember

well deserved lol

05:23:33 Semi-hiatus

just nearly chocked seeing a video of a danish politician saying verbatim 'trump fuck off' XD

05:21:18 Ember

another great one!

I really miss how movies used to be

05:20:39 Mr Palette Guy

I haven't watched mulan in years pfft.
I avoided most Disney movies
Watched beauty and the beast a shit ton though

05:20:10 Amy/Anpmygdala

Techno
Gosh how could i forget about mulan

05:19:26 Semi-hiatus

mulan has some amazing music too

05:19:07 Ember

oh really? I love that movie XD

05:17:48 Mr Palette Guy

I don't think I've watched tarzan lmao

05:16:46 Ember

songs from that movie are amazing. and Tarzan

05:15:08 Amy/Anpmygdala

I have another song to put in the mix
It's not disney but songs from spirit stallion of cimmaron hit different

05:13:19 Mr Palette Guy

King of smiles,
It's too good of a song to only deserve the beginning of the movie

05:12:21 Amy/Anpmygdala

Spirit
This one hits hard i love it too

05:11:53 Semi-hiatus

Spirit

yes frozen heart is the ice song and I love it

05:11:48 Mr Palette Guy

Amy, fuck yeah, that songs on while I clean the house now

05:11:19 Amy/Anpmygdala

You guys talking about the frozen heart XD
-YT Click-

05:10:58 Mr Palette Guy

King of smiles, the ice song? It was like the only reason I let BJake make me watch the movie haha

05:10:00 Semi-hiatus

Spirit

that song will never get old and I love when it pops onto my fyp I just wish it was longer

Desire of The Hills

05:09:39 Hills / Desire

Working on adopts for the past like 3 hours is like. woah. my fingers yearn for freedom

Continental Wolves

05:08:21 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

14 females at 66-73 hours, I just want them to pop but they have another day to go e,e

05:08:19 Mr Palette Guy

King of smiles,
fuck if the world goes back to that movies songs I hope it's the first one, like the one where the guys are cutting ice. Thats my favorite disney song lmao

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November 23, 2018 01:49 AM

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I made this piece today
https://i.postimg.cc/fyDhLtMB/2392-C118-DF13-4597-9-BF2-6-E23-A916-B115.png

And I cant tell whats wrong. I think it has something to do with the back legs and maybe the ears or the rib cage. It's a species I made and I can post a reference sheet of one if it helps but I really want to fix this. Ps. The tuff on the shoulder is actually where a wing used to be. It was cut off by hunters.

Thanks!

Edited at November 23, 2018 05:00 PM by Path of Stars

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November 23, 2018 03:49 AM

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I suggest studying wolf and canine anatomy, it can go a long way.

The ears need to respond properly to the floor, so if drawing a straight line on the ground part helps to position the ears to be affected by the ground, then do it :D

The shoulder juts out, but it shouldn't. Just a tiny tuft of fur will suffice.

The closest back legs rump (the large part that connects the leg to the body) looks a bit too thin.

But other than that, its looking great so far.

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November 23, 2018 04:49 PM

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Wood Carve said:
I suggest studying wolf and canine anatomy, it can go a long way.
The ears need to respond properly to the floor, so if drawing a straight line on the ground part helps to position the ears to be affected by the ground, then do it :D
The shoulder juts out, but it shouldn't. Just a tiny tuft of fur will suffice.
The closest back legs rump (the large part that connects the leg to the body) looks a bit too thin.

But other than that, its looking great so far.

Thanks! That makes sense.

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