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01:21:26

Reaper - Fair enough, I retired 4 of his siblings :'D He was just the last better looking for them all to be honest.

01:20:07

Garf - I've honestly never had a Gold Sandstone before so it's just different for me lol

He's in with my breeders now though :D

01:19:36 Reaper / Grim

Brave
I would retire, not great Vitals, 1 talent, not great R (It's not an AC pelt so it'll be harder to pass the higher R genes) and the generation is growing. I'd put him in the bone pile

garfield enjoyer

01:19:06 garf

BraveHeart

His color palette is very pretty. I'd say he's worth breeding and trying out.

01:18:48

myth - Good call! :P I'm gonna do just that!

01:16:00

Braveheart

Hes beautiful I say keep, breed him and see what he gives you

01:14:44

Worth keeping or nah?

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cuz I can't figure out if I want to or not XD Like is he worth breeding? XD

01:13:58 Acorn (She/Her)

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Have a random link chat because yall reminded me of it

01:13:25

Myth - Thanks!

01:13:22

-WP Click-

Paws for him?

01:12:03

Braveheart

Battle experience

01:05:54

What's BE? >.>

Desire of The Hills

01:00:52 Hills / Desire

Oh just realized Quin passed 1k BE :0 my babyy so happy

Desire of The Hills

12:59:58 Hills / Desire

I swear all my wolves give birth when I'm at school sigh

12:58:09

Thousand - Fair enough!

12:52:20

Brave
Well-that is kind of true. I have another account from back in July last year, but I haven't touched it in a while. So the pack specifically is new lol

12:51:02

Thousand - Oh no way! Welcome to Wolfplay! I totally just assumed you've been here for forever XD

12:47:24

Myth
Felt. my last wolf to pop went 93 hours until i was like. Frick this and gave her a toucan feather

12:46:09

-WP Click-

Go into labor already

12:45:36

It seems the pairing I did was pretty good. Or maybe it was just luck lol

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01:21:26

Reaper - Fair enough, I retired 4 of his siblings :'D He was just the last better looking for them all to be honest.

01:20:07

Garf - I've honestly never had a Gold Sandstone before so it's just different for me lol

He's in with my breeders now though :D

01:19:36 Reaper / Grim

Brave
I would retire, not great Vitals, 1 talent, not great R (It's not an AC pelt so it'll be harder to pass the higher R genes) and the generation is growing. I'd put him in the bone pile

garfield enjoyer

01:19:06 garf

BraveHeart

His color palette is very pretty. I'd say he's worth breeding and trying out.

01:18:48

myth - Good call! :P I'm gonna do just that!

01:16:00

Braveheart

Hes beautiful I say keep, breed him and see what he gives you

01:14:44

Worth keeping or nah?

-WP Click-

cuz I can't figure out if I want to or not XD Like is he worth breeding? XD

01:13:58 Acorn (She/Her)

-WP Click-
Have a random link chat because yall reminded me of it

01:13:25

Myth - Thanks!

01:13:22

-WP Click-

Paws for him?

01:12:03

Braveheart

Battle experience

01:05:54

What's BE? >.>

Desire of The Hills

01:00:52 Hills / Desire

Oh just realized Quin passed 1k BE :0 my babyy so happy

Desire of The Hills

12:59:58 Hills / Desire

I swear all my wolves give birth when I'm at school sigh

12:58:09

Thousand - Fair enough!

12:52:20

Brave
Well-that is kind of true. I have another account from back in July last year, but I haven't touched it in a while. So the pack specifically is new lol

12:51:02

Thousand - Oh no way! Welcome to Wolfplay! I totally just assumed you've been here for forever XD

12:47:24

Myth
Felt. my last wolf to pop went 93 hours until i was like. Frick this and gave her a toucan feather

12:46:09

-WP Click-

Go into labor already

12:45:36

It seems the pairing I did was pretty good. Or maybe it was just luck lol

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

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Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

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Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM

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Thanks every for the critique

Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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