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 Elm Tree Creek
06:38:17 Yukon
-WP Click- look at her :) she is the second oldest Wolf in the game
 distant-lands
06:26:51 katy | beetle
forest,
thanks!
i need to redraw the bottle of light accessory though ^^' it looks a little wonky
 Forest Dwelling
06:21:01 I am on Wolflocke ok
@katy

Ooo I love it!
 distant-lands
06:19:14 katy | beetle
thank you <3
 Feiella
06:18:27 Pack of Sharp Snap
distant
Pretty
 distant-lands
06:17:28 katy | beetle
-Click-
love how this custom turned out *^*
 BJake
05:57:54 Don't call me BJ.
Ey "You have 4005 character points to assign to your wolves."
Only 905 cp left
 Night Shade
05:32:37 Graves | Chaos
Jake
I actually don't have anything I can make right now, I need to go grocery shopping :(
 BJake
05:19:03 Don't call me BJ.
@Night Shade
Go make a whole meal for yourself
 Night Shade
05:16:28 Graves | Chaos
I shouldn't be up it's 3am and I'm hungry
 Amygdala
05:09:32 Amy/Anpmygdala
P'sky
That can be scarry at first...drive slowly and be carefull around turns. Always breake before you turn not while you are turning
 MLadySkylar
05:07:12 P'Sky
Amy
I've just never driven in snow
 Amygdala
05:06:20 Amy/Anpmygdala
Night
No problem
 Nightingale
05:05:01 Night
Amy
Okay thanks :)
 Amygdala
05:04:29 Amy/Anpmygdala
Night
Well it applys it by 10 difference but it applys it to your wolves randomly...like alpha might not be your alpha anymore
 Nightingale
05:03:12 Night
Amy
So it just applies dominance CP to all wolves randomly?


 Amygdala
05:01:08 Amy/Anpmygdala
Night
It staggers dominance randomly for your den (basicly free dominance CP)
 Amygdala
04:59:39 Amy/Anpmygdala
P'sky
Is it that bad o.o
 Nightingale
04:58:48 Night
I haven't been online in a while - what exactly does the 'stagger dominance' option at the bottom of my den do?
 MLadySkylar
04:57:54 P'Sky
Amy
I think id rather be home

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 Elm Tree Creek
06:38:17 Yukon
-WP Click- look at her :) she is the second oldest Wolf in the game
 distant-lands
06:26:51 katy | beetle
forest,
thanks!
i need to redraw the bottle of light accessory though ^^' it looks a little wonky
 Forest Dwelling
06:21:01 I am on Wolflocke ok
@katy

Ooo I love it!
 distant-lands
06:19:14 katy | beetle
thank you <3
 Feiella
06:18:27 Pack of Sharp Snap
distant
Pretty
 distant-lands
06:17:28 katy | beetle
-Click-
love how this custom turned out *^*
 BJake
05:57:54 Don't call me BJ.
Ey "You have 4005 character points to assign to your wolves."
Only 905 cp left
 Night Shade
05:32:37 Graves | Chaos
Jake
I actually don't have anything I can make right now, I need to go grocery shopping :(
 BJake
05:19:03 Don't call me BJ.
@Night Shade
Go make a whole meal for yourself
 Night Shade
05:16:28 Graves | Chaos
I shouldn't be up it's 3am and I'm hungry
 Amygdala
05:09:32 Amy/Anpmygdala
P'sky
That can be scarry at first...drive slowly and be carefull around turns. Always breake before you turn not while you are turning
 MLadySkylar
05:07:12 P'Sky
Amy
I've just never driven in snow
 Amygdala
05:06:20 Amy/Anpmygdala
Night
No problem
 Nightingale
05:05:01 Night
Amy
Okay thanks :)
 Amygdala
05:04:29 Amy/Anpmygdala
Night
Well it applys it by 10 difference but it applys it to your wolves randomly...like alpha might not be your alpha anymore
 Nightingale
05:03:12 Night
Amy
So it just applies dominance CP to all wolves randomly?


 Amygdala
05:01:08 Amy/Anpmygdala
Night
It staggers dominance randomly for your den (basicly free dominance CP)
 Amygdala
04:59:39 Amy/Anpmygdala
P'sky
Is it that bad o.o
 Nightingale
04:58:48 Night
I haven't been online in a while - what exactly does the 'stagger dominance' option at the bottom of my den do?
 MLadySkylar
04:57:54 P'Sky
Amy
I think id rather be home




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Help me/CritiqueJune 28, 2018 04:27 PM


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Something isn't settling well with me and this image... Could you guys help?

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Help me/CritiqueJune 29, 2018 08:42 PM


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You did a very good job, but I can see a few things that could be touched up on.

The cat's chest is facing us, but the entirety of it's side is visible. It's back wouldn't be able to twist like this so we should either see only part of the chest, or part of the side and back.

If you chose to keep the back instead of the front-facing chest, I would add a little more exaggeration to the back and maybe lose, or change, some of the fur detail. With cats, the elegant curve of the back is very noticeable.

If you decided to keep the front-facing chest, the back and hind legs would be behind it, though the curve would still be visible, of course.

The legs themselves are a little lumpy, compared to the graceful lines a cat has. The heels should be lower, and at a less extreme angle, while the knees would have a slightly shallower curve that blends gracefully into the body. The hindquarters could be rounder, and shorter to show where the hip bones are.

I've never been great with front-facing legs, but cats have slightly thicker, short forearms, usually. There might not be as deep a dip from shoulder to neck, and the most noticeable joint from the front of the leg would be the wrist curving slightly sloping outwards, thickening before becoming the paw.

The ears could be less rounded, though of course it depends on the breed or OC you were drawing. Cat ears are most often triangular, and I would set them a little higher up on the head while lengthening the cheeks. Cats have slightly round heads.

I would make the tail tuft thick and blend it into the tail more, rather than a separate piece of fur, but that one is more a personal preference.

I would love to draw little bits to visually represent my advice, but my tablet's too scratched up to pick up my pen, apparently. '-_- If I get it working again soon, I'll add some pics.

Edited at June 29, 2018 08:43 PM by The Watch

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