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EYET said: I likely won't go back and change this piece, but something always looked a little off to me, so any tips or redline? Just for future pieces I can't quite tell what doesn't sit right, but something just looks off to me ahah [c]157083
i can't quite see what's wrong either, honestly. but i do agree that something is off. i think it may be the general fluidity of the body- i personally if i were stabbed with a stake would be a lot more jagged, it's pain. you sieze up when you're in pain. the hind legs are also a little small i think.
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Quantum.Quattro said: Ok so here is one of my ⭐best⭐ pieces of art, as yu can see, I need a lot of help hehe..... :(
honestly my only tip is to make it looks more 3d i guess, put the legs that would be behind behind the body. otherwise i think the course of improvment with your art will just come with you working it out yourself. you already have a lot of the basics, i think it's only the legs that's your issue. your style is charming
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i am back, and i have evolved :D what do you think? i fixed the legs a little bit! ignore the colouring because i hate it
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Quantum.Quattro said: i am back, and i have evolved :D what do you think? i fixed the legs a little bit! ignore the colouring because i hate it
love it!! think the only steps for you now is figuring it out yourself over time :>
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I'll take anything you are willing to do. This is drawn by me. It's supposed to be doberman rottweiler mix
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Sir Froggington said: I'll take anything you are willing to do. This is drawn by me. It's supposed to be doberman rottweiler mix
can i just say that this is an amazing drawing and you are extremely talented :]
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Ok so this is my best drawing I have done so far, the legs look very weird and so does the tail angle, and I'm not sure how to fix it :( Pls help :(
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hi! is this still open? and if so, could you maybe help with a dragon that has some sort of hooves and claws? :,)
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