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Rosethorn,
Oh okay!
Happy hunting :)

04:16:16

I figured out that I had to change the den display to list

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RoseThorn,
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04:11:16

Is it under 'manage wolf'?

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RoseThorn,
welcome to wolfplay!
Aswell as; quick view your wolf and it should say somewhere in a box 'XXXXX-Use pup toy'

04:07:59

cool

04:07:52

How do I use a pup toy?

03:52:59 tiger\Owl|she\her

-WP Click- I am getting so impatient

03:50:45 Vash | Xy

I'm glad for you :DD

St. Cloverbeast

03:48:02 Will

@Xy

It's so exciting!!
I talked my sister into driving with me
Her reaction was X'D
Well
It was something lol

"So there will be a dog in the car?"

03:43:41 Caesar

left forest because i kept getting 6 bears, only to be greeted with this:
You spy 6 Grizzly Bears.

fuck you too, rng

03:43:04 Vash | Xy

Will
Yayy :DD thats awesome!! must be exciting!!

03:40:27 Stalking chat

15 mush for one shamrock..is crazy I can understand 10 but 15..

03:38:25 Caesar

looking for shards im missing to craft and prices really went 85 mush, 95 mush, 100 mush, 5 apples??? what the hell is going on with market

03:37:40 Stalking chat

What should I draw :D

03:33:33 Stalking chat

How do you guys think about the drawing?

St. Cloverbeast

03:33:07 Will

Poodle Puppy summer is official guys ;v;

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I'm free from work

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Moon,
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04:20:06

-Click- cool?

04:17:03 Stalking chat

Rosethorn,
Oh okay!
Happy hunting :)

04:16:16

I figured out that I had to change the den display to list

04:13:49 Stalking chat

RoseThorn,
-Click-

04:11:16

Is it under 'manage wolf'?

04:09:51 Stalking chat

RoseThorn,
welcome to wolfplay!
Aswell as; quick view your wolf and it should say somewhere in a box 'XXXXX-Use pup toy'

04:07:59

cool

04:07:52

How do I use a pup toy?

03:52:59 tiger\Owl|she\her

-WP Click- I am getting so impatient

03:50:45 Vash | Xy

I'm glad for you :DD

St. Cloverbeast

03:48:02 Will

@Xy

It's so exciting!!
I talked my sister into driving with me
Her reaction was X'D
Well
It was something lol

"So there will be a dog in the car?"

03:43:41 Caesar

left forest because i kept getting 6 bears, only to be greeted with this:
You spy 6 Grizzly Bears.

fuck you too, rng

03:43:04 Vash | Xy

Will
Yayy :DD thats awesome!! must be exciting!!

03:40:27 Stalking chat

15 mush for one shamrock..is crazy I can understand 10 but 15..

03:38:25 Caesar

looking for shards im missing to craft and prices really went 85 mush, 95 mush, 100 mush, 5 apples??? what the hell is going on with market

03:37:40 Stalking chat

What should I draw :D

03:33:33 Stalking chat

How do you guys think about the drawing?

St. Cloverbeast

03:33:07 Will

Poodle Puppy summer is official guys ;v;

03:30:10 P'Sky/Sky-kun

I'm free from work

03:28:31 Stalking chat

Moon,
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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

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Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

#2

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM

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Thanks every for the critique

Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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