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,, like the sanctuary ones
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When do the auctions start? I know they end at 8 just not sure when they start.
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im drawing a deceased pet which halo do you guys think is more appropriate -Click- -Click-
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 Giftofeden
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hiya all
 Hurry
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I don't think so, I cannot find it under Account settings
 Imladris
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Is there a way to disable crafting alerts?
 Hurry
02:34:08 
Oh wow I got a Robin's Feather :'3 that is like like 5-6 times more valuable than a caterpillar :'D
 Winterfell
02:26:09 Winter
He is definitely dying today ;-; -WP Click-
 Hurry
02:18:33 
Crafting another Shiny Junk to take to Bree :3
Can't wait to get a Monarch Caterpillar
 Xanthia
01:52:26 Vash | Xy
Morning
 Sateda
01:17:15 
-WP Click-
Not my suggestion but hoping it gets picked up because, well... I love breeding for special pelts <3
 Collar
11:53:39 Altar 🦌
Give me paws
 lovrenee
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@Moonfall
thank you!! :)
 Serpents
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anyone up for a rp or chat pm me
 Apothecary
10:45:56 Medicinally Autistic
Me waiting to see how many wolves death script takes this week.
 Moonfall
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2 am game time, I believe. It's either 2am or 3am, one of em
 lovrenee
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,, like the sanctuary ones
 lovrenee
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When do the auctions start? I know they end at 8 just not sure when they start.
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khaos
gotcha thank you
 Kháos
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First
 Eye of Eternity
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im drawing a deceased pet which halo do you guys think is more appropriate -Click- -Click-
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Hey
 Wild Runners
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First it was the orange line war now its the white line war




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Criticism?January 3, 2018 11:40 PM


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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo
Criticism?January 4, 2018 12:21 AM


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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.
Criticism?January 29, 2018 07:06 PM


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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:16 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:41 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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