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01:24:43 Lycan, My can

I want to retire him but I am not really sure.

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01:06:26 ~Cwn~

Why do I keep breeding these girls so then they pop at night xD
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01:05:32 Sunrise\Dawn

Wow there is a wolf 26 years old that’s so cool

12:59:21 Sunrise\Dawn

My wolf is in top 30 of oldest wolves never thought he’d make it this far

12:57:47 rosie/moon </3

collar
awh that's so cute!

12:38:51 Altar 🦌

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I draw cats sometimes

12:10:59

I love when that one pack with 3k+ den spaces buys wolves from me lol

12:10:19 Aura/Pea

Bye moons!

12:09:34 renee

@Moonfall
I was getting super lucky with it at first but now I can't even remember the last time I won.

12:09:03 Many moons, one me

See you later Aura

12:08:44 Many moons, one me

Renee
Fair. There's a pack status specifically for the beetle. That's how bad it is lol

12:06:58 Aura/Pea

I think I should go to bed! Bye! 😴 oh crap
It's midnight
Yes
Bye!

12:06:45 renee

the beetle game has me wanting to fight all computers

12:04:44 Andy [he/they]

I think i should make an art gallery

11:55:38

np!

11:55:09 Ash/Nawks

Ohhh I see, thanks!

11:54:22

they're a currency not really an item

11:53:40

@ash
It would show you how many you have in the emporium shop

11:52:44 Aura/Pea

Changed it! 🙏

11:52:42 Ash/Nawks

Hello! I fought another pack in explore and got a lupine claw but it's not in my inventory. Where do I find it?

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01:24:43 Lycan, My can

I want to retire him but I am not really sure.

-WP Click-

01:06:26 ~Cwn~

Why do I keep breeding these girls so then they pop at night xD
-WP Click-

01:05:32 Sunrise\Dawn

Wow there is a wolf 26 years old that’s so cool

12:59:21 Sunrise\Dawn

My wolf is in top 30 of oldest wolves never thought he’d make it this far

12:57:47 rosie/moon </3

collar
awh that's so cute!

12:38:51 Altar 🦌

-Click-

I draw cats sometimes

12:10:59

I love when that one pack with 3k+ den spaces buys wolves from me lol

12:10:19 Aura/Pea

Bye moons!

12:09:34 renee

@Moonfall
I was getting super lucky with it at first but now I can't even remember the last time I won.

12:09:03 Many moons, one me

See you later Aura

12:08:44 Many moons, one me

Renee
Fair. There's a pack status specifically for the beetle. That's how bad it is lol

12:06:58 Aura/Pea

I think I should go to bed! Bye! 😴 oh crap
It's midnight
Yes
Bye!

12:06:45 renee

the beetle game has me wanting to fight all computers

12:04:44 Andy [he/they]

I think i should make an art gallery

11:55:38

np!

11:55:09 Ash/Nawks

Ohhh I see, thanks!

11:54:22

they're a currency not really an item

11:53:40

@ash
It would show you how many you have in the emporium shop

11:52:44 Aura/Pea

Changed it! 🙏

11:52:42 Ash/Nawks

Hello! I fought another pack in explore and got a lupine claw but it's not in my inventory. Where do I find it?

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

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Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

#2

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM

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Thanks every for the critique

Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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