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08:06:11

anyone???

08:05:50

or ESSA handeler??

08:05:47

FlyingKitten
Imma use that on my friend whois studying Spanish. She'll either combust with laughter or give me a stink eye

08:05:33

is anyone one here a therian or furry??

08:04:48

tern
He is the green one! Tall one is Simon (Alvin and the chipmunks was my obsession oops)

TheFlyingKitten

08:02:07 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Cloudy

Lol, I meant it like the bastardized version of "No mames guey". Basically just the Spanish way to say "No way, man!" (Note that I am only using that as a questioning example, mods >_>)

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08:01:57 tern | they/he

petri
huh

cloudy
noooooo :(( dont die please im swear im not trying to kill anyone (almost forgot to type not o.o'')
theodore is the tall one right

08:01:28

but nnnnnnnnnooooooooooo

08:01:20 Uncle Tony

Lord give me strength for i want to redo my bio... AGAIN.

08:01:11

cloudy

weeeeel yeah.....

08:00:42

they diapeared!!!!

08:00:42

night
Maybe they died? Were you gone from your account for a long period of time?

08:00:25

my alphas are goone

08:00:02

heeeelp

08:00:02

FlyingKitten
O,o... uhm, context???

07:59:54

heeeeelp!!!!!

07:59:45

my alphas are gone!!!!

07:59:33 Uncle Tony

Cloudy Bird
Oh my gods yes. I always go Khajit and make him the sassiest motherfucker. He's so stingy too. Ill collect all the gold, jewelry or whatever just to keep my bank going up. Feel like Mr Crabs haha

07:59:28

they are gone!!!!

07:59:02

what happeed

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08:06:11

anyone???

08:05:50

or ESSA handeler??

08:05:47

FlyingKitten
Imma use that on my friend whois studying Spanish. She'll either combust with laughter or give me a stink eye

08:05:33

is anyone one here a therian or furry??

08:04:48

tern
He is the green one! Tall one is Simon (Alvin and the chipmunks was my obsession oops)

TheFlyingKitten

08:02:07 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Cloudy

Lol, I meant it like the bastardized version of "No mames guey". Basically just the Spanish way to say "No way, man!" (Note that I am only using that as a questioning example, mods >_>)

Eye of Eternity

08:01:57 tern | they/he

petri
huh

cloudy
noooooo :(( dont die please im swear im not trying to kill anyone (almost forgot to type not o.o'')
theodore is the tall one right

08:01:28

but nnnnnnnnnooooooooooo

08:01:20 Uncle Tony

Lord give me strength for i want to redo my bio... AGAIN.

08:01:11

cloudy

weeeeel yeah.....

08:00:42

they diapeared!!!!

08:00:42

night
Maybe they died? Were you gone from your account for a long period of time?

08:00:25

my alphas are goone

08:00:02

heeeelp

08:00:02

FlyingKitten
O,o... uhm, context???

07:59:54

heeeeelp!!!!!

07:59:45

my alphas are gone!!!!

07:59:33 Uncle Tony

Cloudy Bird
Oh my gods yes. I always go Khajit and make him the sassiest motherfucker. He's so stingy too. Ill collect all the gold, jewelry or whatever just to keep my bank going up. Feel like Mr Crabs haha

07:59:28

they are gone!!!!

07:59:02

what happeed

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM

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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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