Wolf Play : Criticism Needed

09:23:45 Cervo

goodnight Petri!

Cypress Road

09:17:46 Axan hoarder

Hey chat

09:14:11 tern | they/he

night petri ^^

09:13:55 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Mmkay, goodnight all! Sleep well! Or have a good day, for everyone on the other side of the world! <3

09:08:56 Cervo

whoops i poofed! i was putting cookies in the oven and realized mt recipe which usually makes 12 only make 6? i really didnt think I "tested" that much dough damn

09:06:37 tern | they/he

petri
it is really funny i genuinely think about that all the time

but yeah go to bed

09:05:17 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Final random thought for the night: The phrase "Butt ass naked" is way funnier to me than it probably should be.

I should probably be getting some sleep.

lovrenee

09:03:20 renee

"❤️Claret and Devils Dance of pack Crystal Moon watch the sunset together."
well hello there

08:59:22 tern | they/he

cloud
yeah im about to i just finished up the starter

wild
that sounds really epic though.... i love hammerhead sharks

08:59:03 Temptations failing

Eye ball,
wait no but yes

08:58:44 Temptations failing

Eye ball,
yes

08:58:27 cloud (he/they)

alright tern pm me if you want before we go off

08:57:54 tern | they/he

wild
catshark.....

08:57:48 tern | they/he

cloud
okk thats midnight for me so i probably will not

08:56:54 Temptations failing

Or wait hear me out guys,
a cat looking creature thats part hammer head shark

08:56:30 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Nah, nah, but does anyone else's dog have a weird habit of pressing their butt on your leg?

08:56:23 cloud (he/they)

tern

hey i will be on till 11:00 game time just so you know

08:55:32 tern | they/he

cloudy
rumble,,, i dont know how i forgot about that
a sick ollie on a skateboard is insane

08:55:15

(okay okay I'm off)

08:54:54

tern
They technically meow. Or grumble, rumble... honestly purring can still be good, especially if the lion is being cheeky or something (i.e. "You got in trouble", Panthera purred smugly while doing a sick ollie on a skateboard)

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09:23:45 Cervo

goodnight Petri!

Cypress Road

09:17:46 Axan hoarder

Hey chat

09:14:11 tern | they/he

night petri ^^

09:13:55 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Mmkay, goodnight all! Sleep well! Or have a good day, for everyone on the other side of the world! <3

09:08:56 Cervo

whoops i poofed! i was putting cookies in the oven and realized mt recipe which usually makes 12 only make 6? i really didnt think I "tested" that much dough damn

09:06:37 tern | they/he

petri
it is really funny i genuinely think about that all the time

but yeah go to bed

09:05:17 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Final random thought for the night: The phrase "Butt ass naked" is way funnier to me than it probably should be.

I should probably be getting some sleep.

lovrenee

09:03:20 renee

"❤️Claret and Devils Dance of pack Crystal Moon watch the sunset together."
well hello there

08:59:22 tern | they/he

cloud
yeah im about to i just finished up the starter

wild
that sounds really epic though.... i love hammerhead sharks

08:59:03 Temptations failing

Eye ball,
wait no but yes

08:58:44 Temptations failing

Eye ball,
yes

08:58:27 cloud (he/they)

alright tern pm me if you want before we go off

08:57:54 tern | they/he

wild
catshark.....

08:57:48 tern | they/he

cloud
okk thats midnight for me so i probably will not

08:56:54 Temptations failing

Or wait hear me out guys,
a cat looking creature thats part hammer head shark

08:56:30 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Nah, nah, but does anyone else's dog have a weird habit of pressing their butt on your leg?

08:56:23 cloud (he/they)

tern

hey i will be on till 11:00 game time just so you know

08:55:32 tern | they/he

cloudy
rumble,,, i dont know how i forgot about that
a sick ollie on a skateboard is insane

08:55:15

(okay okay I'm off)

08:54:54

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November 9, 2017 10:25 PM

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https://s2.postimg.org/cm6tysat5/Screen_Shot_2017-11-09_at_11.21.15_PM.png

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Edited at November 9, 2017 10:28 PM by Aphmau clan

November 9, 2017 10:28 PM

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Not bad (\^-^/)

November 9, 2017 10:29 PM

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It's not really that bad in all honesty.

The tail and maybe the front leg on the side we're viewing could use a little work maybe, though the tail could actually depend on the breed of cat the drawing is of.

But overall it's pretty good

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:30 PM by Destinations End

November 10, 2017 01:28 AM

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The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:

https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

January 1, 2018 09:11 PM

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Siarczek said:
The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

This helps me out! Thank you

January 3, 2018 03:49 AM