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really just a test draw, but should I keep this headshot?
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I... never want to find myself in one of those restaurants where you get a bowl filled with water just so you can wash your hands at the table.
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Love not sleeping like I don't need to be awake in 4 hours >.<
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For some reason I was chanting beat mush game In my head and I won mushies in mush huntXDDD
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anyone up for an rp pm me im bored
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Floofly Chad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Why can't I draw my ocs the same way I draw fanart T0T
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Moonfall
And the other pup makes me think of the name Shallow Waters
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Moonfall
Brookite for pup 56?
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Moon I would help but I’m really bad with names
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-Click-

really just a test draw, but should I keep this headshot?
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Name ideas?
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Critique?July 30, 2018 05:59 AM


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I was just messing around and I made this:
https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png
And this:
https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png
If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background
I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie
Critique?July 30, 2018 02:36 PM


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Horse
I can't see it
But the D ring for your bit is way too big
And the rest of the bridle is way to small
Critique?July 30, 2018 02:46 PM


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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.
https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or
https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png
(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:
Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:
https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.
There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°
Critique?July 30, 2018 03:58 PM


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Thanks Astro and Midnight!
The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black
I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.
I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD
Critique?July 30, 2018 06:33 PM


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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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